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Monday, October 23, 2017

October Featured Writers!!!!!

Fall has arrived and so have our October Writers!!!


This month we have eleven featured pieces.  Please make sure to read ALL of them.  For your assignment choose three from the list and leave your commentary.  Explain why you are leaving your comments.  Just don't say that you "like it" and "good job."  We have a great selection.  So, make sure to scroll down the pages or use the navigation bar on the left.

Remember that this is a homework assignment.  Your comments are due by Friday, Nov. 3.  I figured you would all be busy this week and on Halloween:)

Enjoy the rest of your week.  I know we have a lot of due dates and it is a very busy week.  "Carve" out some time to sit down and read your peers' original pieces.  Then go carve those pumpkins:)

Best,

Mrs. Solano




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Ambiguity--Kiara

“Everything will be okay...” It woke up earlier than the alarm clock but felt rejuvenated after a good night’s sleep. It decided to peek through the small openings of the blinds to admire the world at dawn. Coming into view was Optimism, who always accompanies It on daily adventures. Upon seeing Optimism, It smiled and became ecstatic for It knew that the day would be filled with laughter and joy. Whenever It was with Optimism, It had nothing to fear and persevered through any hardships that came its way. It always had-.

“...at fault... failure...worthless...” It sprang upright, out of breath with its hair disheveled and with sweat covering its forehead. It peeked through the blinds only to see that the world at dawn was still dark. Outside was also Pessimism, who always waits for It in the morning. Pessimism smirked and attempted to lure It out into the world but It was not bothered. After several occassions of going out into the world with Pessimism, It became too fearful of facing the day’s obstacles and had therefore decided to retreat to solitude. All It ever wanted was-.

“Am I...?” Every night, It questions itself and yearns to find the truth about its future. Upon entering the bedroom, It felt a strange presence yet decided to shrug it off. Before It dozed off into bed, It wanted to reassure itself about its future by having a pep talk. So It sat itself down in front of its vanity, closed its eyes, and took a deep breath. Opening its eyes, It looked at its own reflection only to find that It was not itself. Looking at each other in the eyes, They both unknowingly whispered to each other, “Never forget that Idealism and Realism are very well acquainted with each other.” It had finally realized its two personas, Idealism and Realism, yet refused to accept the truth, thus leaving the cycle to only repeat itself.

Elaine?--Sarah


I open my eyes barely breathing feeling like I'm suffocating. I'm not moving . .  I physically can't move. I hear someone cackling and out of the corner of my eye I see something hunching over the end of my bed. I struggle to get up until I somehow kick off my blankets and I can breathe again. I sit on the side of my bed staring at the edge of my bed. . . There was nothing.

     The next morning I slowly sat up and took a deep breath. I've been having a lot of sleep paralysis and each episode is getting worse and worse. I haven't had this happen to me since I was a little kid. I live in a little town and go to a little high school. I feel absolutely alone with no friends though I did have one once. I brush it off my mind as I get ready and grab my bag to go. I walk to the bus stop but a couple blocks down the street I look and see the cemetery. There is a forest behind the cemetery which always gave me the creeps. I don't break my intense stare into the woods until the bus arrives.

     All day at school I was thinking about last night and that thing in the corner. Did I always see the black figure every time I had the episodes or is this the first time noticing it? Did I actually see something or am I now making it up? I don't know and I don't want to know but it's been driving me insane. I hear a jumble of sounds coming from somewhere and I snap back into reality. My teacher, “Elaine? Ms Elaine? Are you listening? Please pay attention to class please!” She exclaimed. “I’m sorry Mrs. Gardener.” I said in a monotone voice. By the end of the school day my brain was fried and I was ready to go home.

     The next day after school I had to walk home because the bus didn't come but the October weather is nice. I was walking past houses getting closer and closer to home until it began to get cold and the sky suddenly became dark as gray clouds had cascaded over the sky. It started to rain so I picked up my pace to get home quickly without getting wet until I heard thunder and saw lightning flash near my house. I sprint to my house as fast as I can but abruptly stop in my tracks to look at the cemetery next to my house and see that the lightning hit one of the tombstones. I walk through the gate and walk up to the headstone to see the damage. I slowly put my hand over my mouth as I finish reading the inscribed words “Luna London October 30th 1988 - October 29th 1999”. My childhood best friend. She died the day before her 10th birthday of an asthma attack. I looked at the crack on the headstone and touched it. As I turned around to leave, my hand lifting off the tombstone without warning the earth started to shake. I fell down and backed away from the grave as the ground started to split apart, breaking the stone in half until everything stopped moving. I slowly got up still keeping my eyes on the grave when a hand pops out of the ground! I scream a bloodcurdling scream when I see a whole body come out. I had to get out of this cemetery but I stop in my tracks - “Elaineee.” I stopped and turned around “Luna?” Luna walked up to me but I backed away. “I don't have much time. Come with me!” I looked at Luna for a moment. “What? How? Why? You're alive? You're brain is actually showing, this is too much-” Luna interrupts “Don’t ask so many questions. We need to go!” I stopped and follow Luna deep into the forest.

     “That thing you saw is real and it's there in your room for a reason. The black figure is here to kill you!” My eyes widened “And how do you know this Luna?” Luna looked away from me and closed her eyes “be- because that thing is how I died.” I put my hands on over my eyes as I sat down. I sobbed “But I thought you had an asthma atta-” “That's what it convinced everyone to think even you.” I looked up at Luna with revenge in my eyes, “How are we going to kill this thing?” “No Elaine that's the wrong question, you should be asking how am I going to kill you?” “Wait what?” Luna's little remains of flesh on her small body melted off as well as her bones until there was nothing but a black figure. I turned ghost white and passed out.  I woke up with the feeling of small pieces of something hitting my face then I realized it was dirt and I was being buried alive. I screamed and screamed but nothing came out and I couldn't move at all. All I could hear was laughing as I slowly lost all oxygen under the heavy dirt . . . .

      I sat up suddenly sobbing uncontrollably looking around my surroundings realizing i’m in my room. It was all a dream and I'm relieved to know the nightmare is over.I lay back down in my soft, warm bed and i finally close my eyes knowing all was well and there was no reason to believe this horrible series of events had actually occurred when a voice from behind me whispers in my ear “Elaine?” as it's cackling laugh echoes in my head as all goes black.

Tamboroke--Brandon


About three months ago, while I travelled to visit some relatives, my car broke down as I was passing through a small village named Tamboroke in South Carolina. The village was extremely run-down: all of the buildings were stained with rainwater and the signs on the shops were barely hanging on. There was also a strange and strong smell of formaldehyde, as if I was standing inside a pyramid in ancient Egypt. There was something else about this village as I walked through… Something that made me feel as if I stood next to a great God or Goddess, but no beautiful goddess like Isis. No. This was something far more sinister and beyond my comprehension.
After searching for a few minutes, I found an auto repair shop. Moby’s Repair Shop. Compared to the rest of the village, the garage was in good condition. I walked up to whom I now presume to be Moby. He was a shifty, rat-like man, with spectacles topping his long, crooked nose. One would imagine him to be a car salesman over a car repairman. “What do ya need help with?” he asked before I could get a word in. “My ‘78 Honda Prelude broke down about half a mile from here. I think something is wrong with carburetor.” I replied. Something did not feel right while I talked to Moby and his obviously fake smile. Regrettably, I shook the feeling off and carried about the conversation. “Do you know if there is somewhere I can stay the night while you fix my car?”
“There is a Motel 6 down the road. I can holler at you when the car’s done. I can’t promise when it’ll be done but I think it should be good to go in a couple of days.”
I nodded and adjourned to the motel as the sun started to set behind the trees encompassing the village. I settled into the room and started to drift to sleep in the hard and uncomforting bed. In the other room next to mine, I heard rhythmic thumping. It went thump, thump thump, thump thump thump in that repeated pattern. I thought at first that it was the neighbor doing his laundry. Even if it was not, I did not want to be rude and stop a local resident from doing God knows what. That night I dreamt of the most horrendous nightmares that anyone could dream of. Half of it I could not even comprehend but one image stood out to me; A hooded figure the size of a planet, donned in a deep purple robe and tentacles spewing from the bottom of the void hood where a face should be, whispered inconceivable words into my head.
The next morning I woke up in a cold sweat, shaken by the terrifying nightmare, trying to make sense of the ungodly whispers forced into my mind. After pondering, I went to the local diner to eat some breakfast. Similar to the appearance on the outside, the inside felt completely abandoned; no one dined except for me. The solitude waitress wore a fake smile, similar to Moby’s but with a more sinister intention. After the awkward meal, the day went on without much importance. While I drowsed, the absurd pattern started yet again. Thump, thump thump, thump thump thump. It was worse that night, though; it got louder and louder. It felt as if my neighbor was banging against the inside of my skull. I could not sleep with the incessant banging. So, I left my bed of springs and went to the neighbor’s door.
I tapped the door with the ends of my fingers as to not disturb any of the neighbors, but that light tapping transitioned into a hard knock. No one answered the door, yet the thumping did not stop. In fact, it grew louder; I did not know whether it was coming from my mind or my neighbor’s room. I tried the doorknob and to my luck, it was unlocked. I traipsed into the formaldehyde smelling room as the thumps turned to thunder. There I saw a scrawny man sitting on a chair, tapping the armrest in sync with the booming sounds. I yelled at him to stop but he ignored my presence. Unfortunately, I made the mistake of clutching the man’s arm. Although the thumps stopped, they became the violent whispers that I cannot shed the memory of, no matter how hard I try. My vision faded to white as the whispers possessed my body and before I lapsed, the last image that burns my memory is that of the man. His decomposing head tilted back behind the chair in an inhuman matter while the tentacles from my nightmare spewed from the lipless mouth.
I awoke in a ditch off the side of the road near the border of North Carolina beside my intact Prelude. Dazed and confused, I continued my journey to my relatives. Not knowing whether or not this was all a dream, I decided to go back to Tamboroke on my way home. While travelling home from my relatives, and all later travels, I could never find Tamboroke despite seeing its location on my Atlas. I think I am starting to understand what those ominous whispers meant...

What a Wonderful World--Marycristy


The stiff and wild grass so gracefully caresses my rough calloused skin. The cool and reckless air trashes upon my face and travels throughout my untamed hair. Life is so stagnant at the moment and yet nature keeps its dispute with everything that her fingertips can grasp unto. My eyelids open to the warm inviting sight of the painted red sky, the hue becoming darker the closer that it reaches toward heaven. I slowly lift my aching torso from the cold Earth as I gradually digest the blush colored images that appear before me. 

It's the most wonderful thing to see the life through rose colored glasses. Everything seems to be so lovely and loving towards each other. The world seems perfect in a rose tinted world. I see people who are rattled with rage due to their greatest passion that lies so deeply embedded in their hearts. Those who are completely lost and unaware of what to do next, yet so optimistic that whatever shall come next will be the next step to a joyous life. People that have to easily and terribly fallen in love, aware that it’s all too much and fast to ever last. Children laughing and crying, so unaware that they will all grow up to learn so much of this world through wonderful experiences. The wistful hope from a mother to her child that they grow to be healthy and happy individuals throughout their entire life. The grin on peoples faces when the crisp autumn air smells of cinnamon and vanilla. The feeling that families get when their loved ones get to come home on a holiday. The overwhelming joy of men and women who have won the tremendous battle of cancer and will continue to live their greatest life. As well as humanity coming to the realization that it is just a wonderful world that we live in. 

As much as the rose colored glasses are a wonderful way to view the world, but is so unrealistic. You are able to face cold difficult reality of the world. Cause when you are wearing rose colored glasses all of the red flags just look like normal flags. There are people acting upon rage and fear out of hatred for the unknown. Jealousy out of not acknowledging the small beautiful things that are in their life but focusing negative energy on looking on what others have. Young ones acting out irrationally just because they were never taught how to deal with their emotions in a healthy manner. Men and women actively ignoring the abusive nature in their relationships out of horror of being alone. People misusing various substances to numb whatever is left in their body and soul just to put of actually dealing with their issues. The pure joy of evil when a weak innocent person succumbs to the darkness of the world. The deep strange instinct that humans have to be self destructive and destructive towards all of humanity.The pure evil nature that taints humanity, unwilling to stop injecting poison in human institutions .But most of all i see fear in the eyes of these humans, these people are fully aware of their fate. Yet they stay here so steadfast and stoic. People are fully aware of the negative and horrible things that occur in life, but they continue on. Hopefully marching and looking up at the sky to see the free spirited clouds dancing away and only to be like them and follow the example.

...and they are all right.

Why waste the time that we have on this earth falling into the dark depressive manners of life? 

Why not make the effort to smile even if we are having a bad day and make another persons day wonderful? 

Why not participate in the worlds greatest symphony that we call life? Why not appreciate the beautiful Earth that we grace?

Why
not try to live the best life that we ever can? 

...but what do i know. 

I am simply just an observer of life. I never take the chance to actually experience wonderful things in my life. But the effort it still there, and will continue to be there and that makes all the difference. So for now i will continue to sit back and watch the world go by for now, and maybe one day i will participate in the joyous things in life.