In the
Amazon, survival is only for the fittest. The first lesson you learn here is
that you are in constant danger the moment you leave your territory. But one
must find sustenance. My hunting is done during the day, when the surroundings
are most visible. Finding and obtaining food is never a big problem, the danger
comes in being the food.
Today
was no different; I began just after sunrise, when animals are more unaware of
you than normal, and hunting is easier, but prey is scarcer. Stepping into the
forest, my eyes adjusting to the intense darkness, the sounds of the forest
were becoming louder, but no animals were in sight yet. I moved into the humid
rainforest, scanning for any potential predators or prey. I pulled my
crudely-made knife, fashioned from a large rock, and shrunk into a bush. I felt
a slight movement shake the bush ever so slightly.
I checked
for the source of the movement, stopping my own motion altogether, as I saw an
Amazonian Giant Centipede, inches from me. I slowly began backing away,
preparing to introduce it to my knife’s blade. It fell out of the bush, just in
front of me, barely missing my leg. I hacked at it, but in my panic, I tripped
over a tree root, landing hard on my back. Dazed, I got up, grabbing my knife
and looking back towards the centipede, which was now on my leg, preparing to
bite me, so I kicked it off with my other foot, and regained my footing as it
turned to face me yet again. It leapt at me, pincers extended, and I focused on
its ugly head, and swiped at it. Unable to control its trajectory, my knife cut
off a couple of his legs as it swept past the insect. Injured, the centipede
landed on the wet dirt and writhed in pain.
Readying
myself to end its suffering, a capybara caught my eye. I immediately began to
chase it and it led me into the Amazonian wetlands, and I pulled out my knife,
approaching it silently. As it drank the water, and I crept closer, a smaller
capybara, most likely an infant, came out of the forest and joined its mother,
who stared at me with an uncanny understanding of my intentions. I was frozen,
and felt guilty about what I’d been planning, and then I remembered that this
was my only source of food for the day, and food never comes this easily in the
Amazon.
I took
a step toward the animals, and raised my knife, only noticing too late, that
there was something in the waters with us. Immediately, I saw what its target
was, and I charged the capybaras, but it was too late. They turned to run from
me, and a bull shark leapt from the waters and killed the baby animal in one
bite. Then the shark turned its attention to me, and I attempted to steady my
nerves, which were anything but. The bull shark slowly circled me, waiting for
my fear to get the best of me. I took my knife and kept it pointed at the
threat, and I prepared to strike. Wanting to creep slowly towards it, my body
rebelled and thrust my legs into the ground, and I jumped towards the shark, who
had already anticipated this, and sped around me., and was bearing down on me
quickly. I pointed my knife at it, hoping to deter it, but it was determined to
finish its lunch. I sat, waiting for the right moment to use my little trick. I
began letting out the air in my lungs, sinking under the shark, while also
plunging my knife upwards, into the shark, and my only weapon was torn from my
grasp. I swam to the surface and saw the shark turning back to me, furious. I
had stabbed it just under the jaw, missing almost every vital part of its body.
As he swam back to finish me I swam toward it, and it slowed, maybe out of
confusion, maybe the shark thought I was making it easier for it. As I watched
it open its mouth and wait to be fed, I swam to the side of the bull shark,
grabbing it by the gills, and began pulling on them with all my strength. It
stopped swimming and rolled over, flailing violently, to get me to stop. I let
go, remaining on the top of the shark, and grabbed the knife out, and as it
looked at me in its final moments, I stabbed it in the eye, making it my new prey.
As I
hauled my bounty to dry land, I saw another predator in the water, perhaps more
dangerous than the first. In fact, just being able to spot the Black Caiman
Crocodile was lucky. Rushing toward me after it knew I’d seen it, its toothy
grin clearly visible, and I struggled to get the shark onto the dry land so
that I had the advantage. It chased me out of the water, and ran at me, looking
for a quick, easy kill. I gathered my remaining strength and defended my new prize.
The crocodile snapped at me and I retreated, grabbing my knife by the sharp
point, planting my feet, turning, aiming. The knife flew out of my hand, end
over end, and it hit its mark; the Caiman shrank in defeat, closing its maw,
and peacefully waiting for me to pull the knife from between its dead eyes.
Turning back to the deceased shark, I found yet another problem, preventing me
from my goal of transporting my food to an area where I can eat it.
A large
Jaguar stood over the shark, chewing the bite it had taken, and daring me to
challenge it as well. I was totally spent, and out of breath; however, this
stupid animal would not prevent me from obtaining my food, and I rose to its
challenge. After a couple steps forward, it roared at me, then ran in a zig-zag
pattern, preventing another well-placed throw from ending my hunt. I tried to
dive out of the way, but it was too quick, and caught me mid-dive, and pinning
my shoulders on the dirt. As I lay, I struggled to escape from the jaguar, but
it didn’t budge; however, I managed to at least bring my knife to its leg and
put a good-sized gash in its right front leg. Leaping off me, its eyes were
filled with frustration, and it licked its new injury, and I sat up, regaining
as much strength as possible. Getting up, I prepared to attack, and I looked at
the animal. It paced back and forth, waiting for my tired, weak attack. It knew
that I couldn’t beat it. I knew that I couldn’t, I was tired and hungry.
So, I
turned away from the jaguar, sprinting into the jungle, looking for an ally,
yet, if you run straight for long enough in the Amazon, you will no doubt find
something capable of killing mostly anything. Looking back, the jaguar was
gaining ground quickly, so I looked forward again, and saw a glorious sight: a
wide, brown tree trunk. Slammed into the tree at full speed, and I fell back
from the tree. My nose was now broken, and the jaguar circled around me, victorious.
Yet I smiled. I had done it at last. The jaguar slowly walked up to kill me
where I lay.
Looking
to the tree branches, I watched as the five-hundred and fifty-pound Green
Anaconda dropped its full weight onto the jaguar’s neck, killing it instantly,
and it began to encircle the dead animal. I sat up, and scooted away from the
scene unfolding. I looked at the ground, finding a flower patch before me, and
the Sun shining onto it. It was a beautiful sight on the other side of the
tree, which saw flourishing life, as compared to the other side, which
witnessed death. I picked up one of them, taking in its beauty. I was in shock
from the pain of my collision with the tree and the weariness only added to it.
I started breathing a bit slower than usual, and I began to feel lightheaded,
then I began to drift off to sleep, slowly succumbing to the drowsiness and
falling asleep, to the sight of the Anaconda slithering towards its next
victim.
This is a great narrative Logan. I really love this story as it places the reader in a constant limbo of suspense. The narrator's constant encounter with danger is also mildly comedic and adds more to the overall feel of the story. Really nice.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed the quest you took me on. It was exhilarating and full of suspense and thrill. Great job!
ReplyDeleteThis was a great story. You really capture the reader with your imagery of the surroundings in the second paragraph, which pushes the reader straight into the eyes of the narrator.
ReplyDelete- Kenny Abraham
This was a unique and captivating piece. The plot build up was well organized and i enjoyed the details used to demonstrate the dramatic suspense of what the narrator was experiencing
ReplyDeleteI don't think I've ever read something as thrilling and attention grabbing as this! This narrative was so well organized and harborded a great balance of slow and fast pacing that also helped create such exhilirating scenes. The story hits you again and again continuing to hold your attention and keep your mind racing just as fast as this fiction. A lot of fun to read!
ReplyDeleteGreat Story! I really enjoyed the constant action and suspense, every line I read I didn't know what to expect, and I think thats the greatness of this story. You left the audience on the edge of their seats throughout the duration of the story, an essential factor to great story.
ReplyDelete-Brendan Sweeney
This pieces has great imagery, describing the animals and the scenery as it takes the reader on a journey to the Amazon. The character battles with the obstacles that are thrown at him and there's much great suspense. Amazing job!
ReplyDeleteThis was a great adventure you took us through, loved the suspense. Keep up the good work.
ReplyDelete-Michael Hernandez
Great piece! I enjoyed how you took the reader on a journey using your words! - Altierre Paris
ReplyDeleteI enjoy the suspense and action in this piece, the descriptions of the battles with these creatures truly makes the story come alive
ReplyDeleteThis was such an enjoying and fun read! It kept me on edge, and I loved the different types of conflicts that were encountered in the story along with the imagery and detail you used!
ReplyDelete-Tyger Ghodossi
Logan, you had me on the edge of my seat throughout the twists and turns of this story when the person takes the lives of predators (the bull shark) or witnesses them being taken by others. I admire how the character connects emotionally with the belief that everything has the will to survive (like the capybaras) and your representation of innocence and the harsh feeding relationships in nature (through the use of the baby capybara's death). I really enjoyed the especially suspenseful ending where the heroic character (presumably) falls prey to the anaconda.
ReplyDelete-Lauren Whightsil
I really got a sense of the book The Hatchet. This piece was perfectly laid out and loved the amount of time that the events took to unfold themselves, very well done!!!
ReplyDelete-Oved Renteria
This taught us about the struggle of morals versus survival. A great piece of insight into natures law and what you must do to survive.
ReplyDeleteThis was such a great piece!The use of vivid imagery allowed for me to imagine everything as i was reading it and created a great sense of exhilaration and suspense. Great job! --Kayla Leonard
ReplyDeleteyou did an amazing job with imagery and I can see you put a lot of effort into this piece; from your description of the rough experience to you contrasting diction: " beautiful " to " weariness "
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