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Friday, September 2, 2016

Society--Nathan


We have grown too accustomed to blaming our faults and shortcomings on a common
scapegoat: society. When we blame society for something, however, we have a tendency to not
specify what people that society includes and what geographical area it is talking about.
One problem with assigning blame to society for something is th at we are society. We are so
quick to blame society for so many things and yet we are a part of it and we do not actively try to
correct them. It is easy to say that certain problems continue to exist and that nothing can be
done about them simply because society wills it so. Why is it then that we sit by passively and
watch the issues keep happening rather than step in to do something? For example, someone
could say that prejudice exists because society encourages it. They likely aren't making an effort
to stop it. If everyone just chooses to blame society for a problem rather than a specific cause, no
solution will be developed and the issue will be allowed to fester and only grow worse.
The word society, when used without specifying what people or what location is a part of it,
could include anyone and could refer to any location, though the usage of the word now tends to
refer to the United States as a whole. Blaming a society implies that everyone in that society is a
part of that problem. If the society in question includes everyone in the nation or a specific area
without excluding anyone, then every person there, even someone complaining about society, is
a part of it.
When the accusation is made that society is at fault for a problem, what geographical area
does the word society encompass? Is it a small community, a city, a county, or a whole state? Or
is it the entire country? Everyone is different. Each person has different beliefs, lifestyles,
customs, ideologies, tastes, preferences, to name a few things among a plethora of other
characteristics that makes each person unique. Differences exist between people of different
cities, so how can people of completely different parts of the country still be compared?
Someone from California will be very noticeably different than someone from the East Coast. In
such a large, diverse country like ours, how can one big blanket statement be applied to every
individual? With so many differences, it is quite difficult to assign blame to society on a large
scale when most of that society is likely not even remotely involved with the problem.
Who is included in society? Everyone will have varying levels of involvement in society, if
they are at all involved, and some may choose not to participate in some aspects of it. For
instance, someone that does not use social media will have a different contribution to society
than someone who posts regularly on social media. Some will try to have frequent interactions
with society while others will avoid them at all costs.
It is often unclear who is addressed when the word society is used. When it is used without
specifying what people or what area it includes, it is making a one size fits all assumption about
everybody there with no exception. Doing so could even encourage problems to continue and
prevent them from being solved.

57 comments:

  1. I definitely agree with the general idea of "blaming society" for WE ARE SOCIETY. We are too quick to blame that we don't realize that we are blaming ourselves. Now, technically since we are blaming ourselves, we aren't wrongfully blaming. But, when we blame society, we become blind to the fact that we, too, are at fault and refuse to see it the other way. I guess its human nature, unfortunately.

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  2. I strongly agree with this! It's hard to except the fact that when we complain about what society is doing wrong , we are putting that on ourselves. When you mentioned that "it is making a one size fits all assumption" I think this is a great statement because us as a whole think when someone creates a conflict , that region or people in the area are just as responsible. We are very quick to judge or make assumptions and I also like the fact that you pointed out how people complain about conflicts but then don't try to do anything to prevent or stop it.
    Good job!

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  3. i agree completely with you message on society. It provides me with a different perspective on the word that i used to think of as being specific now i see it is really extremely vague. You are 100% correct, how can we blame society when we are apart of society?

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  4. I really enjoyed this piece because i completely agree with you. No one likes to admit their faults and blaming society is the easiest way out of it, although people don't realize that they make up the society. Great job!

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  5. Your message of that society is the problem with society is completely true, couldn't agree with that more. Most people nowadays believe that they have to fit into society just to get somewhere, where that's not the case. You need to be your own person to get somewhere in society not be someone else and act like them

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  6. I agree with your idea that we often look to society as a scapegoat for our problems instead of actually facing them and dealing with them head on, but you also have to consider that when people "blame" society it is directed towards a certain group that is easily identifiable. For example, Brock Turner was just released after only serving three months of his sixth month sentence for raping a woman, now we can look at this and blame society for enforcing the idea that white men should be treated as young boys, while Brian Banks, and innocent black man, served five years for a crime he did not commit. Looking at this situation and blaming society, we are blaming the inherent rape culture that exists today and the people who actively enforce it. When I blame society I am baling them for failing Brian Banks and allowing Brock Turner to continue on with his life becuase jail would be "unnecessarily harsh on the boy”.
    Sydney Adams

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    1. Thank you for your response. It is despicable that Brock Turner was not severely punished for his crime meanwhile so many people serve longer sentences that they don't deserve.

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  7. I agree with your view of society and how all the negative aspects that come with it is our fault since we are society. How do you think this relates to the idea of human self interest and instinct? Is that what is stopping us from fixing all that negativity we want to get rid of?

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    1. I believe that our unwillingness to make change is because of a lack of motivation or ignorance to the problem.

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  8. Dude this is truer than true. I couldn't agree more with everything that was said here, and I love how well it's written for even someone like me to understand.
    -Aliyah Dumas

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  9. I really enjoyed your piece and loves how you included the fact that even though each and every one of us makes up this notion of "society" that were are all just automatically apart of, you still managed to include that no two people that coexist in this city, state, country, or world is the same. Your messages ties really well with the idea of individuality and how hard or easy it is to spot the differences between similar types of people.

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  10. "They likely aren't making an effort
    to stop it." What you said there is very key to your argument. I believe that many people do blame society when society presents them with a problem often because they are unwilling to put in the effort to stop the problem like you said. It reminds me of the saying, "if you're not part of the solution, you are part of the problem." So why are people hesitant to do something about the problem? I think it might be due to people being afraid of being judged by society. But since these people are a part of society like you said, then the only thing they should fear is the shame for not being a part of the solution! Great job!

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  11. I absolutely love this message and how you defined society. I completely agree with you when saying that we cannot blame society and expect a positive outcome if we are not specific to who the word society is implied to. I did not think about society varying within our nation, and I really like how you worded that. Because you are completely right when saying that society may differ from the west coast to the east. Also I love how you also said that it may vary due to social media. Social media is a huge part of society and its influence on society. I love how you incorporated all of these aspects to try to state the problem of there being a problem that no one is working to fix; just continuing to blame society.
    -Gabbie Boo

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  12. I truly agree with your message. You included too many facts for me to count. Too many people try to act different when they should act truly the way they are. We have to realize that blaming society does not put yourself out of the problem. This piece was really well written.

    Benjamin C

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  13. When I was reading your piece I thought of what Gandhi said,"Be the change you want to see in the world." I just thought that this idea relates to your writing of people blaming society and not being the change they want to see in the world. -Ruben Becerra

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    1. That is a great quote that is very fitting for this topic.

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  14. I totally agree with all that you said here! People don't like to admit they're wrong so they tend to just push the blame over. Amazing work!
    - Jade B.

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  15. I completely agree with you! The fact that people constantly are looking for something to blame instead of putting all their effort into trying to fix the problem first irks me. Hopefully eventually people will learn to face their mistakes. Thank you for making more people aware!

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  16. I am sad to say that I am one of those that has used such vague phrasing with society. You've shed light on a simple truth and supported it well. We live in an age of media and like you mentioned, there are those that have impact with their use of it. Everyone has input. Yet as the most intellectual beings on this planet it's insane that we so gingerly place a veil over the true nature of issues, leaving them to sulk and fester.

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  17. I do agree with you especially in saying we all as a society make up the "rules" in life and how you should act. No one told you to, but it is that from which we do not want to stand out so we choose to blame others four our mistakes.

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  18. I'm with you on the stand point of how ridiculous it is for poeple to be so up tight with society and the government. People can sit and point fingers all day or actually get up and do something about it. Hopefully this piece will open the eyes of others to not be so quick to judge something, and think through the reasons society has a law that it placed. Your piece is very maturely written so it definitely has the potential to do so!

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    1. I hope that I brought a little awareness to anyone who read this work and encourage them to think about it.

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  19. Great arguments, encompasses a wide view of the subjects of your idea while keeping it straightforward and direct.

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  20. I definitely agree with this piece because society has changed and we are society and do have some part in it changing, the way you describe it is so on point and very relatable, nice job! -Lyndsey Ortega

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  21. The argument stated within this passage is amazing. You stick with your argument, main point, and give great examples to back it up. I agree with your statement because society is made up of us. Without us, who is society? Of course, not many likes to be apart of mistakes, so the easiest to blame is society.

    -Vivian Chiang

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  22. Preach! The problem in today's world is that no one wants to help the cause. Everyone sits around waiting for society to change itself but the reality is that we are society, we only influence ourselves. I think your piece captured this idea perfectly, your argument had such a great impact. Honestly gave me chills because of how raw this was.

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    1. I didn't originally intend to make an argument but looking back it certainly looks like I did. This piece feels like somewhat of a rant but I aimed to inform rather than impose my opinion but hopefully everyone will make their own judgement.

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  23. First I want to thank you for presenting us, readers and "Society" with such a realistic and sincere message. The message conveyed in this piece is very well supported and convincing, because as a matter of fact we tend to contradict ourselves when we blame our faults on society when we are a part of society and not attempting to make a change. As humans we always need to be faced with the truth that we are a part of this society and it is within our own command to choose to be a reason/part of that change instead of pointing fingers and criticizing "Society" as a whole for the wrongdoings of others including ourselves.

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  24. Wow, this piece makes the reader think! Truly enjoyed your message and found the topic extremely relatable. You posed thought provoking questions which kept the reader interested and thinking.

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    1. I put a lot of consideration into the different aspects of this issue and I'm glad that so many of the readers did. Thank you!

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  25. I love this! Its such a great topic that many try to avoid and you explained "society" so perfectly. This is definitely a case that will make readers think and take to perspective!

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  26. You have well developed ideas and i like that this is more of a scientific journal in a way and not just a beautiful story.
    -Rachel Smith

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  27. Very well constructed argument. The modern sense of entitlement has sort of, "poisoned the water-well," leading for the future generations the drink whats left behind by their predecessors and, in essence, establish a growing problem of trying to blame others when truly it is no one but our own fault. I agree with your argument, great ideas presented here.

    -Armando Chacon

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    1. Thank you for your input, I appreciate it and I really like your example of the well.

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  28. After reading this, I really had to think about how I address our "society." I realized that often, I am saying things like "oh, because society says its right/wrong.," but you are absolutely right; what part of "Society" am i referring to? Ill take this passage and make sure to remember it next time I am blaming society for something.
    -Austin Gomez

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    1. Thank you for reading this and taking it into consideration. I like seeing that you read this and really thought about it.

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  29. Wow, if everyone in this "society" had the mindset of you, I think this world would be a better place. I completely agree with you. Each individual is just as much a part of society as society is of us. If we wish for the group as a whole to change, we must start with ourselves! And you summed that idea up perfectly. Good job!

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  30. I really liked this piece and the message you conveyed on how people should take a stand and make change. It was very powerful and you used great examples to connect with your audience, I overall really enjoyed reading this!

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  31. I do agree that the vagueness in the word society leads to problems getting swept under the rug; however the process of articulating an issue and bringing light to diverse human experiences is critical, even if the issue/observation is blamed on society. You used prejudice as an example of something that is blamed often on society, but I would like to point out that most prejudices backed by legislature (racism, sexism, heterosexism, etc.) are systematic. The first step in dismantling oppressive law is visibility of the problem. Your argument is that too many blanket statements are used when "blaming society" however, your argument also casts a generalization on the type of people to "blame society".

    I agree that specificity is important, but it is also important to understand that many issues are very deep woven into the fabric of society and the vagueness of a "society" shouldn't undermine that idea.

    --Joseph Barron

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    1. Thank you for the constructive input. I didn't want to get too much into the example as to make it another topic within, though it is certainly worth addressing and I perhaps should have done so. I should have gone into depth with it.

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  32. This piece is amazing, it gives a great image of what we need to address about reality. It really makes you sit back and think about how we have no one to blame but ourselves.

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  33. I think that this is a great topic you chose to discuss. This is very true, yet no one really doesn't notice it. I think you proved your point really well and as a reader I feel you have convinced me the causes that make society be exactly what a society is. I also think you used some really greay evidence to back up your point. I am really glad I read this, it was a real eye-opener.

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  34. First thing, excellent analysis. I enjoy reading such works of deep thinking.
    I would like to relate an anecdote I heard from a friend. She was once at a crowded train station, she said, where people simply didn't line up as instructed and sort of pushed against each other to get on the train. She couldn't bear to do this because of her conscience, so she tried to line up, but could never get on the train - only by doing the same rude thing that others were doing could she get on the train. It isn't that we are inherently bad, and we might not want to, but we must take in account that often situations are structured in a way that make it inevitable that bad things have to be done in order for society for function. Of course, a strong disrupting force can be employed - in this case, a policeman, but in general, we are wont to follow Newton's First law of motion. So although we may have our own thoughts etc., often times, we still must go with the flow. General trends may still be blamed.
    - Andy Chen

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  35. i love this piece. great job nathan! I
    like how you're saying it how it is, it's not always societies fault its your own fault and sometimes people just try to blame the world for how they are but fail to look at themselves first
    -karina lopez

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  36. this is a great piece. It really made me sit back and think about it for awhile, wondering where exactly do I stand in this?

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  37. The main reason I chose to comment on your story is because I appreciate your insight and how you depicted it. I never looked at it like this and I know I have blamed things on society ,without really thinking about what I've been saying.

    -Sereenah Soare

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  38. I definitely agree with what was written. As the people of society, we fail to understand that as a whole, if one does not specify, we are included in any accusation. Therefore, one should specify, as you stated, before making a broad statement, because they too are apart of the issue. We continue to see this in our country and even community.

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  39. You shined light on a great problem that we have grown blind to. I agree that we should stop blaming society for every situation that emerges and call to action instead.
    -Jessica B

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  40. This really got me thinking and I cant agree more. Even I have blamed society on certain issues but now that I come to think of it, the issue involved about a handful of people but by blaming society for being that way, that issue pertained. Beautiful piece and a beautiful way of thinking.
    -Ishrat Khan

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  41. This touched my soul Nathan, honestly. You're right about how we shouldn't blame society as whole for our issues. As I reading this, it made me think of police brutality towards minorities and I always think to myself that not all policemen are bad and evil its just select ones and I think you conveyed that message very well in this piece. Great job and thank you for this

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  42. This piece really got me thinking. I admit that I too am at fault in blaming society for things and not doing anything about it to make a difference. I agree with how society is such a broad term and it brings in the question of "who are we actually blaming."

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  43. 1. Your piece is spot on
    2. As for my own thought, I like to think that people blame "society" as a way to include themselves but not directly point themselves out like "hey I'm at fault but so are all this other people"

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  44. This is honestly such a great piece. I completely agree with what you are saying because of the fact that we are selves are apart of society and since are so quick to blame society we don't see that we are blaming our selves as well

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  45. You really had me thinking.This is the truth. Us people as a whole choose not to blame ourselves for the wrong going on around us but instead the monster we call society, which we are all pieces of.
    -Tristan Perez

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  46. I really enjoyed your piece of literature due to the fact that it is completely relevant to today, especially millennials. We are the main ones to blame society yet, we are society, and this is due to the fact that it provides more comfort.

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  47. I was waiting to see a piece like this and I was not disappointed, I actually genuinely smiled, clapped, and giggled reading this piece. I like how you analyze these subjects and I agree with the argument you're making, and you should probably share this idea with many others, or you can just force it onto them if they're too stubborn to listen because they simply don't care, in the end they'll have deep thoughts about what you informed them with and later on would discuss the matter even more with you, good job.
    - Francis Talla

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  48. I thank you for a bold venture to judge the systematic and ambiguous nature of people to inherently blame society without considering other factors. It is true we often blame society and we tend to forget that we make up society; henceforth it is our contributions that facilitate the direction of how, as a whole, our community acts. But in most cases, for example you pointed out prejudice, the issues we blame on society is engendered by inherent thought that has cascaded down from history and dwells within the confines of the people mentality. This point of view on the world, that is essentially passed down from generation to generation, is difficult to sway and society often embodies these traits due to lack of action to insinuate change. But overall phenomenal job on criticizing a touchy subject that others may not dare to touch, and executing it in a fashion that promotes mental growth.

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