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Wednesday, January 28, 2015

Taylor--Fourth Place


Fourth Place 

In spring of my Junior year, I found myself walking onto the campus of UC Riverside with a bunch of sleep deprived Science Olympians. The day of our regional competition had finally arrived. The night before, the team spent most of their hours studying instead of sleeping, and the majority of us had less than two hours of rest. Before the competition began, everybody was trying to cram the last bits of information about their events into their brains or put the finishing touches on their buildings. Soon enough, it was time for my forensics event test.
At the beginning of the school year, I had no prior knowledge about forensics, except for trivial things learned from crime scene investigation shows on TV. The event covered a myriad of topics, and it seemed nearly impossible to learn everything. Every day, I spent hours after school taking notes, annotating textbooks and memorizing new material. After spending six months studying, my partner and I learned to do all kinds of things, such as how to distinguish powders and fibers using burn tests, find the angles at which blood spatters, and analyze crime scenes.
The testing period was about forty minutes, but the minutes felt like seconds as we frantically tried to match fingerprints and identify polymers. Nothing but the sound of shuffling papers and whispers filled the room. The most difficult part of the test was getting everything onto paper within the time limit. In an attempt to complete the test packet, we held the papers up in the air, so that we could write on both sides simultaneously, since they did not allow us to remove the staples. Unfortunately, we were not able to finish in time. I was filled with anguish as my partner and I left the room. I could not believe that all my efforts resulted in an incomplete test. It was as if our countless hours of work went to waste. I was exhausted and on the verge of giving up, but I had to pull through because within ten minutes, the test for my second event was going to start.
By the end of the day, I was out of energy, but relieved that the tests were over. I was able to meet up with my forensics partner for the awards ceremony, and I was anxious to know if we placed in the top six or not. The awards ceremony was in a big lecture room and it was filled to the brim with people. The announcer revealed the winners of the events in alphabetical order, so we sat in agony until he got to the letter “F”. My heart began to beat extremely fast and I had never felt butterflies in the stomach like I did at that moment. The speaker’s voice boomed, revealing sixth place, fifth place, and then he said, “Fourth place:
Etiwanda!”. That was us! My partner and I looked at each other with complete surprise. Maybe it was because we barely had any sleep or because we had poured our hearts into that test, but we were so overcome with happiness that we started to cry. Trying to hold back our tears, we stood up and walked down the steps to the front of the room to claim our medal. Almost everyone on our team won a medal that night and we placed second out of thirty some teams.
Even though my partner and I won fourth place, this was the first time that I had ever felt so proud of something I did. I realized that Science Olympiad was something that I cared a lot about. After investing so much time and energy into studying for this club, I learned that hard work does pay off. My experience at the competition has motivated me to be dedicated to the work that I do. It taught me that I am capable of putting in the effort necessary to reach my goals. Now that we are more familiar with Science Olympiad competitions, my partner and I are currently preparing to place higher this year in the forensics event at regionals.

13 comments:

  1. Taylor, your determination is truly admirable. The use of tone to express emotion in this piece is quite strong and your recollection of events is vivid. I can relate to the part in this piece when you claimed that your team was attempting to "cram information" into their heads last minute. While reading this I was nodding my head in agreement, because it reminded me of all the tests I had stressed over and I found it funny. You embody an AP Student and I wish you the best of luck this year in your SO competitions. :D

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  2. I love how honest and accurate your descriptions are. The part about the Science Olympians being sleep deprived made me laugh. Congrats on fourth place and good luck to you this year!

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  3. One can see how much you put into this.

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  4. Very well-written story! Congrats on winning fourth place, I am sure you guys will do fantastic this year, seems like it is tons of stress and hard work but it is all worth it for something you love to do.

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  5. I like the enthusiasm you presented in your diction. This story is a great read for influencing people to stick and persevere. Great job

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  6. The personal narrative of an event that means so much to you is admirable. Giving a message that winning honestly isn't everything. Its the accomplishment in yourself that shows your effort in your work. Good job,

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  7. Oh man, and I thought I knew about stress. I really liked your description of emotion and feelings, it felt like I could feel it at one point. All that pressure and stress, I'm glad you were happy with your results and Good luck to your next competition!

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  8. I like how you were so descriptive with your writing. I never knew that you felt so proud when you received your medal. I remember when your award was announced, and I remember seeing the pure look of happiness on your face. Even though I was confused on why you were crying at first, and now I know why, you really show how much you love science at school and at home. I hear (a lot), and see how passionate you are about science and I'm really proud of you. As you're beginning to get accepted into colleges and recommended for certain science majors, I see how far Science Olympiad has got you, and how passionate you are about it. I'm pretty sure I said it to you when you received you award, but congratulations! You did a really great job on showing your emotions in this writing, good job Taylor :)

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  9. Aw, Taylor, you are adorable and inspiring. I can tell that the experience made a tremendous impact in your life. You are one tough act to beat with your dedication and hard work. I liked your work especially your word choice; it made me re-experience that day. Thank you for sharing your work and I wish you the best of luck at regionals.

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  10. Congratulations on winning fourth place! The piece really evokes the amount of passion you have for forensics and the competition as a whole. Nice job!

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  11. Awesome job describing and really bringing us back to the day it all happened. I loved that you went into so much detail retelling not only what happened that day but all of the effort that went in beforehand. This is really good, nice job!!

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  12. Your story is very admirable. A great way to teach people is to share your personal experiences, so i think this is a job well done.

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  13. OH boy all the hard work and stress i could only image. i get stressed just having to write an essay. You guys did very well great job on the story!

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