My Kyra.
Have you ever had that one best friend? The
one who makes your bad days
better? The one who knows you better than you know yourself? Well I don’t mean
to brag but I have one of those. Her name is Kyra. It’s been a year and a half
since I met my best friend. Our friendship has a long story to go with it so
I’ll tell you.
I started 6th grade at Frisbie
Middle School. I had met these two girls, Alexus and Giselle. We became very close friends over the summer
of 2011. Nothing could have broken us apart. Or so we thought.
August 6th, 2012 we our
first year of 7th grade. Giselle had met a girl, a girl I never
really noticed before. Her name was Kyra. Giselle had left Alexus and me for
her. Alexus disliked Kyra but I hated her. With a passion. She had broken up
something I had built all on my own, my friends. Something I worked hard for
and because of her it was all gone. I finally stopped talking to Alexus. I
decided my school work had to come first so it did.
6th grade passed as
a blur but I survived it. Summer went by fast and lonely too. It was finally over. I began 7th
grade off confusing with lots of schedule changes but I finally got a permanent
one. The first day I went to all my classes I only had 5th period
P.E with Kyra. It was only one class so I didn’t mind it that much.
I got so caught up in life, I
guess, I had forgotten the hate I had for her. I would try to ignore her in P.E
but she would get so annoying she would laugh at everything, things that
weren’t even funny and I just didn’t like the
thought of her not knowing that she had ruined my friendship with Alexus
and Giselle.
I began disliking her once again, I couldn’t
stand her. Only this time she realized something. She realized I was the only
person who didn’t talk to her, accept her little gifts, I was the only person
who actually tried to fight her. Later on in the year she tried to talk to me a
couple of times but I just brushed her off. All my friends knew her, they liked
her, and they told me good things about her. I didn’t really try to get to know
her because it was the end of the year so I was just careless about her.
August 5th, 2013
I started 8th grade. I wished I hadn’t thought I had second, third,
and sixth hour with Kyra! She wore pink,
animal print, laughed more than ever, always smiling and laughing. Then out of
nowhere I had to talk to her I just got the feeling she’s not who people thinks
she was. And I wanted to find out why.
So I talked to her. I got
so annoyed at first but I gave her my patience but I guess our teachers didn’t.
After 4 days of nonstop talking in 3 classes our 6th period teacher
had given us a Saturday school. I couldn’t believe it not even my first week
back to school I had to spend my Saturday at a school cleaning up messes I
didn’t even make! And it was all because I was being nice to a girl I just met
that week! I knew I had made a mistake talking to her, so I ignored her. That
Saturday when it was just me and her in a room for 2 hours I decided I had my
chance to see the real Kyra. So I asked questions, she asked me questions we
just talked for a while. August 12th, 2013. The day we told one
another we were officially friends. Now a year and a half later were best
friends. To me she’s not my best friend. She’s my sister, my partner in crime.
To me she will always be way more than a best friend.
It’s because of Kyra I realized people wear a
mask to hide things. Things that nobody can or ever will see. Kyra taught me to
never judge a person by the way they look or act. People aren’t always what
they seem. Give people a chance in things.
I really enjoy this theme you have going on, about not judging people, although we do it subconsciously. Good job with making that connection from your personal experiences to employ a moral.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the concept of the story and the patience you gave Kyra to get to know her and ecentually become friends with her, great job
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed this piece because this piece shows a moral that mostly everyone has probably done. A lot of people do judge other on they dress or how they look but they don't know who they really are inside.
ReplyDeleteA great take on the cruelty of not only humanity, but teenage girls. Sometimes those people that you dislike so much end up becoming some of your closest friends down the road. You know what they say, "Don't judge a book by its cover". Good job!
ReplyDeleteI really liked the lesson in this story and this story is unique. Great job!
ReplyDeletegood job explaining and showing how people around you are great moral concept.
ReplyDeletei love this story. you pointed out what a lot of people do in the world to others. the message at the end was very inspiring. most people don'ti realize they judge but if they were to read this im sure they would get the point. nice job making the story connect to your life!
ReplyDeleteThis is so cute and it's a great lesson that many can learn when it comes to judging people. Some of the nicest and sweetest people don't look so friendly. Good Job!
ReplyDeleteThis story has a moral to it that everybody should learn and i loved this piece keep it up.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you had a love/hate relationship, the best ones usually start off that way.
ReplyDeleteI can relate to you so much. I mean I did not do what you did; I sort of saw it from a distance and it makes me giggle to see two girls who despise one another become friends. It shows how two can get over their differences and become really good friends.
ReplyDeleteI like this piece because i know that i judge easily and you admit to it, that's brave. But i also like that you became friends and actually got to know her. The moral of the story is wonderful.
ReplyDeleteHuh. I loved how you ended the piece—there's an air of mystery, a question left unanswered. You don't tell us exactly who Kyra is, but elaborated enough to explain how much of an impact she is to you.
ReplyDeleteThe writing style makes the topic really easy to follow as well. I really like this. Great job!
I'm glad that you were able to meet someone who became your best friend! It's funny how the people we never thought we would never talk to could become some of our closest friends. I liked how descriptive you were and I was able to see how your feelings towards Kyra shifted. Great job!
ReplyDeleteWow i can totally relate to everything you had said.. This was good I enjoyed it.
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