The End
It all began with a bang. That's how it usually goes right? That's what you expect when you
think of the world ending. A bang and a loud siren that seemed to echo throughout the wine
tinted skies. Yet even these were nothing compared to the screams that could be heard from
every direction. Walking out of the house nothing but destruction could be seen. The
neighborhood was in a panic, families of all types running out of their homes, trying to carry as
much as they could hold, not knowing when or if they would ever be able to return, or even
where they could possibly escape to. Some ran to their cars, others were unsure if technology of
any sort could still be trusted. That eerie feeling of distrust was present in a small minority of
people when the idea of robots being part of our daily lives was first presented, but their claims
against the use of robots was never taken seriously. Now that which had been so relied on and
highly anticipated ended up leading to the world’s demise.
The government was somehow able to convince the people that the only way to ensure their safety and well being after the spike in police distrust and increased protesting over police brutality in the United States, was to employ the use of robots. The seemingly biased decisions happening as of late, the lack of order in police sanctions, and the erosion of rights, led to this huge distrust. This was the only way the government officials could think of regaining the credence of the majority. Initially this idea was a huge success. The robots were added to the police force and were made to make unbiased decisions, and to react faster and more efficiently than any human. They were programmed to analyze everything with a heartbeat that they came in contact with, assessing their record and making predictions on the way they would most likely behave based on past occurrences. While this method was not perfect, due to the lack of unplanned acts of descent, the people were satisfied enough to keep the robots active.
Eventually they were placed in every neighborhood, made into friendly neighborhood watchmen, only interested in “making the world a better and safer place”. They stuck to the protocol, only targeting threats, assessing the danger of a person with one quick scan, and moving along with their day. Today that all changed. They had become self aware, everyone now posed a threat to the safety and success of our nation. There is no escaping what comes next.
The government was somehow able to convince the people that the only way to ensure their safety and well being after the spike in police distrust and increased protesting over police brutality in the United States, was to employ the use of robots. The seemingly biased decisions happening as of late, the lack of order in police sanctions, and the erosion of rights, led to this huge distrust. This was the only way the government officials could think of regaining the credence of the majority. Initially this idea was a huge success. The robots were added to the police force and were made to make unbiased decisions, and to react faster and more efficiently than any human. They were programmed to analyze everything with a heartbeat that they came in contact with, assessing their record and making predictions on the way they would most likely behave based on past occurrences. While this method was not perfect, due to the lack of unplanned acts of descent, the people were satisfied enough to keep the robots active.
Eventually they were placed in every neighborhood, made into friendly neighborhood watchmen, only interested in “making the world a better and safer place”. They stuck to the protocol, only targeting threats, assessing the danger of a person with one quick scan, and moving along with their day. Today that all changed. They had become self aware, everyone now posed a threat to the safety and success of our nation. There is no escaping what comes next.
I love this story. I'm just imagining if that could actually happen someday. That would be a scary experience. Great work.
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Interesting story! I liked the idea and the whole subject of this piece.
ReplyDeleteOverall great job! :)
I'm really eager to know what is to come from the robots. Will they bring destruction and have a mind of their own? Your story makes me have another reason in why I don't want there to be robots to protect the world in the future ahead. It's just not my cup of tea. Also I liked how you opened the story up on the beginning sentence, "It all began with a bang." Overall well done.
ReplyDeleteSuch a detailed piece !! Excellent
ReplyDeleteGreat use of diction in the story. I wish there could've been a descriptive story describing a crime that the robot had done but other than that it was a good story. It also reminded me of Robocop a little bit
ReplyDeleteWhat I really enjoyed about this piece was that you took a specific issue the U.S. is facing today and created a possible resolution that ultimately turned the nation into chaos. Great job.
ReplyDeletereally liked this piece because its something we can all imagine and the detail was great especially your diction
ReplyDeleteThis story was so cool! I think that it's so interesting to think of what can happen. It's weird what types of ideas we come up with in our imagination. Good job!
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This story is great, I loved the diction, imagery, and detail. This actually kind of scared me lol because it is something i could just picture actually happening. You did a great job.
ReplyDeleteYour piece was rather detailed and amusing. i couldn't even imagine if something like this even happened. Great Job!
ReplyDeleteWords cannot express how wonderful this piece is, Fantastic!
ReplyDeleteI wasn't sure what direction you were taking this, but when I read it I wasn't disappointed, good job.
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