My Happy Place
They say Disneyland is the happiest place on Earth. Well, they’re right. Many of you might have experienced the magical wonders of Disney when you were at a very young age. My first time at Disneyland was almost four years ago! Imagine that. Now, I will never forget my first day at the place that seemed a little too perfect to be true. It was a typical normal day; sunny, birds chirping, a cool breeze blowing, clear skies, but with absolutely nothing to do. My brother and I, along with my two nieces and nephew were driving around numerous areas to find the perfect place to spend the perfect day. My brother stopped the car, put it in park, turned to us and said “Let’s go to Disneyland.” I almost had a heart attack right then and there. We spent the rest of the car ride listening to the Disney radio and singing along to “Hakuna Matata”. Arriving at the place that I’ve heard so much about was almost too much to process. However, the surprises didn’t end there! My brother did not just come back with regular, one day tickets, but with annual passes. I could feel tears puddling in my eyes. I remember walking through the gates and thinking to myself, “Wow.” because I couldn’t find my voice. The aroma was like nothing I had ever experienced. The scent of warm bakeries and fresh flowers. The sound of laughter and the languages of people that come from countries and cities far from here. The feeling of happiness, fulfillment, enchantment, and nostalgia. The list goes on. I never believed that I could feel so much like a little kid again. I caught myself having the biggest smile on my face. Every ride I went on, I felt like I was time traveling through my childhood. Instead of reminiscing on the times I would sit on my living room floor to watch Toy Story, I was encountering and taking pictures with the characters themselves! Being at Disneyland makes me like a child again and makes me realize that time is of the essence. We waste our time trying to grow up and forget the past, when the past is who we are. My appreciation grows a little more every time I walk through those gates. If I ever need a place to escape to, I know where I will be.
Wow ! I remember my first time at Disneyland ! I love your descriptive words that you used and how you felt when you entered such a magical place. I always wish I could be a kid again it never hurts just to be like one for a day love the way you expressed it
ReplyDeleteDisneyland is very much a happy place, very descriptive essay I feel like I was there. Great Job!
ReplyDeleteahh this is so true! i love disneyland and i want to be a passholder so bad! im glad you got this amazing opportunity:)
ReplyDeleteWhen I read that you had never been to Disney up until four years ago, I literally said "Oh My God, No Way!?" I could not believe it. I always had this mental image that a childhood is only fulfilled upon when a child goes on their first trip to Disney, but boy was I wrong. Your recollection of your first trip was exquisite, I could almost you picture you walking in with a large grin on your face. Keep it up.
ReplyDeleteThis made me smile so much because I personally love Disneyland! I love the way you described the park because all of it is so true! Hearing the laughter of children and smelling the flowers, was exactly how Disneyland is. I miss it! You made me want to go to Disneyland again. This was amazing and I love it. :)
ReplyDeleteGood narrative! I enjoyed reading your narrative
ReplyDeleteI love how I can exactly perceive and picture your experience. From the strong aroma of churros, to viewing the happiness which surrounds you. How could you not be happy in such a place? This narrative definitely brought back nostalgic, yet great memories for myself. I always used to go as a child, and only go once a year for band. Happy to see that we all relate :)
ReplyDeleteHow cute. I'm glad you're first experience was memorable. :) you're writing drew me back to my own childhood. Thanks for reminding us that we need to rake life slow and savor the now and remeber the past.
ReplyDeleteWhen I started reading this, I automatically got excited because I love Disneyland. Then when I read that you haven't been until four years ago, I was thinking "How could you do such a thing?!". However, you are absolutely right. We are so caught up in growing up that we forget who we really are. Great job!
ReplyDeleteYass Disney land is the happiest place. Even though im older, but when arrive there im like a little child again.������
ReplyDeleteI believe everyone has their own little place to escape from the world and just feel happy and accepted, no matter how they felt when they arrived. Very well done.
ReplyDeleteYou are so right. Every time i go to Disneyland i feel like im a child again. I love all the descriptive words you used and you did a great job. Keep up the good work !
ReplyDeleteDISNEYLAND is the best, great story
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the details and descriptions that made me feel your excitement and happiness. It is the little things that matter like a simple trip to disneyland! Good job
ReplyDeleteI love Disneyland too and I can totally relate to your uncontrollable excitement because I act the same way when I visit the parks!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the way you described each and every detail of your emotions as you spent the day at Disney for the first time and I'm glad that you were able to share this story. Keep up the great work! (:
Disneyland is great and probably my happy place too, great personal narrative!
ReplyDeleteThat's so true because when i go to Disneyland i fell like a kid.
ReplyDeleteFor a second I thought, "Is this about me?" because I experienced Disneyland my first time in 8th grade. That's really funny how you've never been there as a child. I recently went last week and it was GREAT! I love your piece. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI love this story! The use of imagery and the way you describe Disneyland makes me want to be there right now! I could feel your happiness while reading.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your story, i love Disneyland! i have so many good and fun memories over there. great job! :)
ReplyDeleteReminds me of my first trip to Disneyland. I remember how awesome the place was. This story really brought back some cool memories. Great work!
ReplyDeleteI loved this piece Kimbo-slice lol :) i thought it was really cool how you chose something that everyone loves and can relate to! I could really feel you emotions and amazement with disneyland in this piece!
ReplyDeleteI really like your story. It reminds me way back then of the first time i went to Disneyland and the times I've spent with my family.
ReplyDeleteI loved your story so much. I really connected with it. When I was small I would get super excited on seeing all the princesses and all the characters. I know I'm in ninth grade but even now, I still get excited when I see all the characters. Super!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteDisneyland is a really fun place . GREAT narrative !!
ReplyDeleteDisneyland is really cool, a good read.
ReplyDeleteLoved reading this piece! Reading this put a smile on my face! You chose the right words to describe Disneyland! ". The feeling of happiness, fulfillment, enchantment, and nostalgia". Wow now I wish I was at Disneyland right about now... Overall, you did a really great job !! :)
ReplyDeleteI love your theme at the of your story! It states nothing but the truth! That our past makes us who we are and we have to appreciate that.
ReplyDeleteI too have an annual pass and this piece reminded me of my visit. Great imagery! Made me want to go right now
ReplyDeleteI believe quite some people can agree with you're statement, but I don't think many can have the same emotion about this one place. However I do agree with you that Disneyland has this somewhat enchantment and glimmer of the glory of Disney. Wonderful!(:
ReplyDeletethis is a fun story :) great work on this piece
ReplyDelete-jaedon adan
Oh this was wonderful! You should write commercials for Disneyland! I have felt everything you described. You made Disneyland come alive for anyone who has been there or wants to go.
ReplyDeleteWell I'm happy Disney land was fun for you but my first trip was last year for the end of the year eighth grade field trip. I guess it was fun in a sense but it was not nearly as good as i would've hoped. But i really like this story it does tell an important message of not trying to grow up to fast. Even though I'm only a freshman, I'm still just shocked i guess that life is moving by so quickly, soon ill have to get a job, and before i know it ill be driving and on my way to college. The best part is how you ended it, the last sentence. I love this story. Fantastic job.
ReplyDeleteIt's wonderful to see innocence preserved in our sometimes too cynical world. We're so lucky to live near such culture and adventurous locales. Good job.
ReplyDeleteI loved how you had a strong grasp on imagery and describing Disneyland. It makes me want to go there now! Good work.
ReplyDeleteI understand your theme of your passage was to show your past is you however you really didn't have examples to back it up. other than that I hope you go to Disneyland now!
ReplyDeleteI like this story. I enjoyed reading it and it was fun!
ReplyDeleteThis was really heart-warming. It made me think of the first time I visited Disneyland on my very first birthday.
ReplyDeleteThis was a wonderful story. Disneyland has always been a place that is always brreathtaking, especially during your first time going. Great job.
ReplyDeletePersonally, i like Cali Adventure better probably because i didnt have the best first experience there. It was on a weekend so it was crowded and it was a school field trip which made it worse, and that was just last year MY FIRST "MAGICAL" time there.. so yeah lol but everyone has different opinions
ReplyDeleteI love your story good job (:
ReplyDeletel love your story I love how much detail you put in this story (:
ReplyDeleteI loved this because it brought back such great memories. The imagery made me feel like I was actually there. Good job!
ReplyDeletedisney land is a very happy place for everyone. Im glad you enjoyed it. Great story
ReplyDeleteThis makes me so sad, but so happy. Last year I went to Disneyland at least 15 times and I haven't been in 3 months. It's the only place that makes me extremely happy. Whenever I go I feel like I'm a child again. I'm so happy that I can relate to this and that you had a great experience with your annual pass.
ReplyDeleteIm glad you were finally able to experience Disneyland! I really like this piece because its very honest and it reminds me of my first time at Disneyland. I also really liked how just reading it made me feel like a kid again with all of those magical feelings. Awesome job!
ReplyDeleteI wish I could remember the first time I went to Disneyland. But I do know that every time I go it does make me feel like a little kid again. I think you did a good job explaining your feelings of that day.
ReplyDeleteEvery Disneyland story brings so much joy in me, and this one is no different. I'm glad you had fun, it's really an amazing place, and I like the small details that lead up to your story, it really adds to the interest. Good job on this!
ReplyDeleteI can relate to this, my first time at Disneyland was something I'll never forget. I'm glad you had such a great experience! Reading this makes me want to go again haha!
ReplyDeleteDisneyland is the happiest place on earth,I find this relatable.This piece is very descriptive! Great job!
ReplyDeleteAfter learn this essay i feel really happy.It's make me more happy. I LOVE DISNEYLAND..
ReplyDeleteI have been to Disneyland several times and I don't really like it much but your description of it is so passionate I really would consider going again hah! The main thing is that you sincerely described feelings I think we can all relate to and the way you described them; just reading this gives us a bit of that sensation.
ReplyDeleteLove your theme! aha i wish i could go to Disneyland again. Great job!
ReplyDeletethis brought back up some of my old memories from Disneyland and I thought this was an interesting choice and you did a incredible job.
ReplyDeleteI still feel the same way each time I go to Disneyland! I have a deluxe pass and so each time I get a chance to go I go! I really don't understand why people dislike it so much. Just knowing the right places to eat and go will be worth the trip!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your story! Disneyland is awesome and even now when I go I can still feel the magic in the air.
ReplyDeleteGreat Story! My first time was last year for the eight grade field trip and I honestly like the rides and it was fun but I guess it wasn't that adventurous for me. But the descriptive made me feel like I want to go back and feel like a child and enjoy those forever lasting memories. We all need a place where we can escape and it's great that you chose Disneyland. Wonderful story! :)
ReplyDeleteI can totally agree with you on the hole part because when I go to Disneyland ive never felt so happy and never been so amazed by the creations that have been here for such a long time. over all great job on the details.
ReplyDeleteI loved this story a lot, now I want to go to Disneyland!
ReplyDeleteThat's a nice memory. That is probably why Disneyland is a happy place for you because you associate with this.
ReplyDelete-Martin Landaeta
This was really enjoyable. I love how you took appreciation in your first trip from 4 years ago. I'm a huge Disney fanatic since my mom use to work for Disney Animation and when I entered her work place I turned into my younger curious self. You're right about how most people are trying to grow up too fast. It makes me think that I don't want to grow up fast but take in the time of being a kid. So thanks, for making me smile with your piece.
ReplyDeleteI also enjoy going to Disneyland because sometimes you don't feel like you want to stay at home, instead you want to go to the happiest place on earth with people you love
ReplyDelete-Corbin Cagle
This was so cute! I loved how you described everything and the way you described your love for Disneyland. You showed us that you're never too old for Disney, or for anything we love for that matter. Nice job!
ReplyDeleteIt is so crazy to think that your first time at Disneyland was practically just a few years ago. I love how you use various forms of imagery. you made the story come to life and made feel the sensation that I get when I go to Disneyland. Great Job!
ReplyDeleteIt is so crazy to think that your first time at Disneyland was practically just a few years ago. I love how you use various forms of imagery. you made the story come to life and made feel the sensation that I get when I go to Disneyland. Great Job!
ReplyDeleteKimmy, I cannot stress on how your piece makes me want to go to Disneyland so badly now. I absolutely enjoyed reading your story because it is true, Disneyland is the place to be because it is "The Happiest Place On Earth" and because I loved how you go back to four years ago when you went to Disneyland for your very first time and how going there has made you find your own happy place. As I was reading your piece, I could feel the anticipation you built up just from getting a Disneyland pass because owning a pass is probably one the best items anyone could ever own. Good job on this piece Kimmy! I love you!
ReplyDeleteThis is a great up lifting fun story makes me feel good inside good job!
ReplyDeleteDisneyland is one of the best places to go, great story :)
ReplyDeleteI really liked this story. I cant believe that your first time at Disneyland was only four years ago that's crazy! I really liked that I was able to connect with the story because I am one of those people who just tries to grow up and get out of high school. It made me realize I need to just slow down and enjoy every moment of life and stop trying to rush things.
ReplyDeleteThis is a very true story I remember the first time I went it truely is the happiest place on earth i have some great memories at that place your story really tells you how muchh stuff goes on at once at Disneyland.
ReplyDeleteLove the use of your descriptive words... now i want to go to disneyland
ReplyDeleteEveryone seems to love Disneyland and Disney-related things, and I'm no exception. It is good that you have a place you can think of and instantly grow happy and I hope everyone can have a place or thing that lets them do this.
ReplyDeleteits so nice that you remember your first time at disneyland. the first time i went i was so young and i don't remember much of it.
ReplyDeleteYour descriptions of disneyland and your time there made me want to go and experience it for myself. It was told as descriptively as a very well funded commercial or something.
ReplyDeleteI loved the "Disney" aspect of the piece
ReplyDeleteI love this, and it makes total sense because Disneyland id the happiest place on earth :)
ReplyDeleteReading this makes me want to go to Disneyland again! I haven't been there since the end of 8th grade year last year! Even though we weren't aloud to go to California Adventures which was a bummer.. it was still fun(: btw great story!
ReplyDeleteI really feel what you felt about Disneyland, if my brother ever bought me an annual pass to Disneyland, I'd die of shock and happiness.
ReplyDeleteI can relate alot to this peice(: Alot of my greatest memories come from disneyland too<33 It's good to think back and remember all the good times. great story - Bernadine
ReplyDeletea very good piece of writing. well written with the description of how I see Disney land.
ReplyDelete-garrett lachase