If it wasn’t for the fact that I couldn’t think of any other event in my life, I absolutely
wouldn’t have chosen this one. But alas, I cannot. So here it is, the story of how I chipped my tooth.
I suppose this story really starts on Christmas of 2013. I never ask for much but that year there was definitely a gift on my mind. I wanted a skateboard. As you may have guessed, I ended up getting it. But for me this wasn’t a gift that I’d forget so easily. I had a cousin who was all about this kind of stuff and I learned quick. If it hadn’t been for the accident, I’d probably still be doing it.
Two months had past and I would still skate every day after school. I had just gotten home on Valentine’s day and was about to keep my streak going. My little sister was playing outside and I decided that I would join her. I went into the garage to grab my board from where I always left it. Even today all of this memory is still very clear. My mom had just left the house with my brother and my dad had just got back from work. Now when I left the garage I looked out at the neighborhood from the top of my driveway. It’s steep so it’s an easy way to pick up speed fast. I saw my sister over at the neighbor’s front porch and decided that I could just, roll over there. Which I did, just not as gracefully as I had hoped. As I started to roll down the driveway onto the pavement there was a sense of confidence about me. I had been doing it for quite some time so a little thing like going from one house to another shouldn’t have been a problem.
It was right in front the neighbor’s house where I fell. I was coming in hot and was so close to coming to a nice smooth stop. But there was a variable in all of this that I had no knowledge of. In front of the neighbor’s house there is a crack. Barely visible, but very much present. As I rolled in my left front wheel stopped right in that crack. Causing me to fling off the board. These few seconds would play over and over in my head for the next few months. Instead of covering my face or closing my mouth I did the exact opposite. Which left my front teeth very vulnerable to the curb. My mouth smacked onto the concrete and I knew that something wasn’t right. There was no lying on the ground to catch my breath. I had gotten up right away to assess the damage.
The first thing I noticed was the pressure. It felt like someone has just pressing their finger right on my two front teeth. Eventually my tongue did some inspecting for itself. With the tip of my tongue I felt the bottoms of my two front teeth. At first I wasn’t able to tell that a sufficient amount was missing. What I really felt first was the sharpness. As if I had two blades for teeth. But after a minute I knew that I had to check. So I went up to the side mirror of a random truck and took a good look at it. You know the movie Dumb and Dumber? It was basically as bad as that. At first I just didn’t know what to do. I ran to show my dad and the first thing he said was, “Well, that looks like It’ll be expensive.” Eventually my mom got home to see the damage and
wouldn’t have chosen this one. But alas, I cannot. So here it is, the story of how I chipped my tooth.
I suppose this story really starts on Christmas of 2013. I never ask for much but that year there was definitely a gift on my mind. I wanted a skateboard. As you may have guessed, I ended up getting it. But for me this wasn’t a gift that I’d forget so easily. I had a cousin who was all about this kind of stuff and I learned quick. If it hadn’t been for the accident, I’d probably still be doing it.
Two months had past and I would still skate every day after school. I had just gotten home on Valentine’s day and was about to keep my streak going. My little sister was playing outside and I decided that I would join her. I went into the garage to grab my board from where I always left it. Even today all of this memory is still very clear. My mom had just left the house with my brother and my dad had just got back from work. Now when I left the garage I looked out at the neighborhood from the top of my driveway. It’s steep so it’s an easy way to pick up speed fast. I saw my sister over at the neighbor’s front porch and decided that I could just, roll over there. Which I did, just not as gracefully as I had hoped. As I started to roll down the driveway onto the pavement there was a sense of confidence about me. I had been doing it for quite some time so a little thing like going from one house to another shouldn’t have been a problem.
It was right in front the neighbor’s house where I fell. I was coming in hot and was so close to coming to a nice smooth stop. But there was a variable in all of this that I had no knowledge of. In front of the neighbor’s house there is a crack. Barely visible, but very much present. As I rolled in my left front wheel stopped right in that crack. Causing me to fling off the board. These few seconds would play over and over in my head for the next few months. Instead of covering my face or closing my mouth I did the exact opposite. Which left my front teeth very vulnerable to the curb. My mouth smacked onto the concrete and I knew that something wasn’t right. There was no lying on the ground to catch my breath. I had gotten up right away to assess the damage.
The first thing I noticed was the pressure. It felt like someone has just pressing their finger right on my two front teeth. Eventually my tongue did some inspecting for itself. With the tip of my tongue I felt the bottoms of my two front teeth. At first I wasn’t able to tell that a sufficient amount was missing. What I really felt first was the sharpness. As if I had two blades for teeth. But after a minute I knew that I had to check. So I went up to the side mirror of a random truck and took a good look at it. You know the movie Dumb and Dumber? It was basically as bad as that. At first I just didn’t know what to do. I ran to show my dad and the first thing he said was, “Well, that looks like It’ll be expensive.” Eventually my mom got home to see the damage and
she didn’t take It as well as my old man. Instead she immediately set up a dentist appointment
right then and there. For the next few days I tried to just forget about it. Yet it would pop up in
my head constantly. Just the idea that I was missing this little part of me would be on my mind
day in and day out. Which brings me to why this story is so significant to me.
For months after I would think of the worse things happening all because of this accident. Every 15 you have to go in to replace the false part of the tooth they give you. So for a while I would think of the possibly of me not being able to afford it in the future. Or the possibility that, for some random reason, they would end up just pulling the remains of the tooth and give me a new one entirely. All of this just played in my head and put me in a state of mind that I really did not enjoy. So to really stop thinking about it, I had to take a step back and look at the big picture. I chipped my tooth. A very little part of my tooth that I never even thought of before that day. There are people who lose limbs. People who’ve lost all their teeth because they can’t get proper dental care. Yet there I was all sad over this little occurrence. So in the end, it taught me to be grateful it wasn’t worse. Because I can guarantee there are people out there who would gladly trade my incident for theirs.
For months after I would think of the worse things happening all because of this accident. Every 15 you have to go in to replace the false part of the tooth they give you. So for a while I would think of the possibly of me not being able to afford it in the future. Or the possibility that, for some random reason, they would end up just pulling the remains of the tooth and give me a new one entirely. All of this just played in my head and put me in a state of mind that I really did not enjoy. So to really stop thinking about it, I had to take a step back and look at the big picture. I chipped my tooth. A very little part of my tooth that I never even thought of before that day. There are people who lose limbs. People who’ve lost all their teeth because they can’t get proper dental care. Yet there I was all sad over this little occurrence. So in the end, it taught me to be grateful it wasn’t worse. Because I can guarantee there are people out there who would gladly trade my incident for theirs.
The part in your narrative where it describes front wheel stopping in the crack and causing you to trip and fall over was hilarious because it's so relatable. I really liked how you ended your story because if I were in your case, I would have felt mad about chipping my tooth but like you said, there are other people who have had it worse and would trade a chipped tooth over their incidents.
ReplyDeleteJaden I really enjoyed the story of your tooth getting chipped. I loved the message you sneaked into your story and how you looked at the big picture and accepted that this could've been worse then a chipped tooth.- Giancarlo G
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed this story because I can relate to the way you acted as a young child. As a child I was also very dare devilish and many times this lead to me getting hurt.
ReplyDeleteThe actual part of the collision and you falling was very relatable and funny, doing the same exact thing once or twice just not loosing a tooth over it. Also I really like that message you put in at the end, very uplifting and positive and kinda made me think. - Brendan Sweeney
ReplyDeleteThe use of imagery throughout the narrative helps me envision as if I am actually the one skating. The reference to "Dumb and Dumber" helped establish the connection immediately of what your tooth looked like. Overall, the message of being grateful for your situation not being worse than what it currently is inspirational.
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I liked your story, while it was funny the way you wrote about chipping your tooth, the switch of tone where you look at the situation more broadly, reflecting on it, thinking how it'd affect your future was nice to read and made me think. - Ramsey Perez
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed this story because its details brought images into my head like living in the moment. The message that you conveyed at the end was very deep, be grateful that something worst didn't happen, bringing the positive into this story that seems quite sad. - Anthony Morales
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading this, the tone you bring of a etched incident is cautionary in a comedic way. When you referenced the movie "dumb and dumber" it was a good use of rhetorical distance.
ReplyDeleteI love this piece because I can actually connect with this type of topic which is skateboarding!! Instead of Christmas it was my birthday and I loved my present which was a skateboard and would use it everyday after school! Had a bad accident, never used it again. Overall I like the vocabulary you use! Very descriptive!! - Ian Mendoza
ReplyDeleteI think this was a great story because I'm pretty sure a lot of people, when they were young had to deal with getting physically hurt by doing crazy things but there was some stuff you missed out, like the last paragraph, you said "Every 15 you have to..." every 15 what? but nevertheless it was still a very entertaining personal narrative.
ReplyDeleteThe reliability, humor, and meaningful conclusion of this memory are charming. I used to skate all the time and your description of the moment before the accident is exactly what I went through :). I enjoyed the colorful language dotting your story, Jaden. Nice job!
ReplyDeleteThis story is great because its message applies to so many other aspects of life. I love how your descriptive recalling of the scenario paints the picture perfectly in my mind, but still manages to leave enough room for me to really consider what a microcosm the story is of other ones, and it's nice to see an optimistic message through all of them.
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That's a great and message to get across. I remember where something bad would happen to me and I would think it to be the end of the world, but with time, when my mind calmed and I looked past my ego, I would be able to see how life is still good. I appreciate the spread of positive thinking.
ReplyDeleteThe way you told the story was really entertaining. You built up to the climax very well and kept a humorous tone throughout the whole story. Your many uses of imagery made the story so much more vivid. It was almost like I was watching the entire thing unfold in front of me. It was also really cool how you ended the whole thing with an optimistic view.
ReplyDeleteLiked this story because i can relate to getting a chipped tooth as a child, but you are right about it couldve been worse. Great story and keep it up.
ReplyDeleteAlthough just a piece of your tooth, it is a piece of you that you'll never get back. It was very admirable of you that instead of continuing to feel sad about it, you were grateful instead, grateful that you did not lose something worse. This piece made me realize that in every situation we should do as you did, be grateful because there are those out there who are not as lucky.
ReplyDeleteI love how you were able to reflect on a childhood experience of yours through this piece of writing. It shows how much you've grown as a person to realize how small your problem really was whereas you thought it was the end of the world when it was happening to you.
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This was a very amusing story. I love how you where able to make it funny but still so descriptive and interesting. Although it's quite unfortunate that you chipped your tooth I did enjoy your writing and how smooth it all went together. I also thought that your intro was very well thought out it caught my attention and made me want to continue reading.
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I can definitely relate to this story because my sister an I participated in the same activities, but my sister was always the one who had the bad experiences skating. I really enjoyed reading this story because it brought back memories and the way you wrote/told the story was very easy for me to imagine it from your point of view. I also really like that you were able to create a very important thought/life lesson to keep in mind. --Kayla Leonard
ReplyDeleteVery descriptive! I can relate, but not in the sense that I know the feeling of losing a large portion of a tooth. I was blessed with very crooked teeth and for a long time I was conscious of this. It wasn't until I got braces and then subsequently got them off was I able to smile confidently.
ReplyDeleteThe ending! wow what a way to make the chipped tooth a good life lesson on realization of other possibilities that are worse. I enjoyed your piece because its not just a regular typical childhood story, but a eye opener.
ReplyDeleteYour vivid imagery as you really helped me envison the scene you were illustrating. I could imagine you falling as described in your personal narrative and it is quite funny. Chipping your tooth did not sound fun at all.
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