I pulled into the parking lot. The tall, sleek building towered over me. I’ve seen it many times before, but I couldn’t help but marvel at the sight of it.
“It’s state-of-the-art stuff,” my wife had said when she first brought me here. “The inside looks like it came straight out of a sci-fi film.”
I grabbed my wife’s spare keycard and left the car.
My wife and her team worked on things that people like me could only dream of. Sometimes she’d tell me a bit about their projects.
"Our client wants us to create robots," she said a few weeks ago.
“Robots?” I said.
“Yep.”
“What for?”
“We...actually don’t know. All we know is that the client had hired someone else to make the robots, but they weren’t satisfied with the product so they hired us to redesign them. The robots themselves are more like toys, but the AI they have is incredibly advanced. It’s...strange, but we’re getting paid a lot, so.”
“Huh,” I said, and never thought about it again.
Until now.
The front lobby was in disarray. All the chairs were flipped over, and papers
littered the front desk. “Hello?” I called.
Nobody answered.
A chill crept up my spine. The reason why I came here was to check on my wife. She hadn’t responded to any of my calls. What happened here?
I pushed back my thoughts and pushed forward. I knew my way around the lab. I’m sure the rest of the building is fine...
It wasn’t.
Every room I went to looked like it got caught in a hurricane. All the computers laid broken on their desks. Papers were torn to shreds or burnt. Chairs
laid broken on the floor. The broken remains of half-finished robots covered the tables. Did someone rob the place?
I stepped in something. I looked down.
Blood.
The blood made a trail that led out of the room.
Why is there blood?
I followed the blood out of the room and down the hallway. The blood led to
a scientist lying on the floor. A giant metallic rod pierced the back of his head.
I almost puked. There was another body at the end of the hallway as well.
What in God’s name happened here?
I ventured further into the lab, discovering more unspeakable horrors. I
reached the point where I couldn't take it anymore. I have to turn back. Something moved.
I turned around. The door behind me was ajar. Did the sound come from there? I felt my pockets for my phone but felt nothing. I searched the ground but to no avail. "Great," I mumbled. "The one time I needed to use the emergency service, I leave my phone in the car."
I looked back at the door. A sane person would run away and call the police, but something compelled me to move toward the door and open it.
Like all the other rooms, the entire place was in disarray with broken furniture and dead bodies. On the left wall were giant glass cabinets. Each one contained half-finished toy robots.
All except one.
One of the cabinet doors laid shattered on the ground. The cabinet itself was empty. I stepped over the glass and looked around. A large pile of papers laid on one of the desks. I grabbed the topmost paper and read the title.
“Experiment #29: Birdie.” Below the title was a picture of a stuffed tabby cat plush with a red bandana and big black eyes.
I continued to read. Birdie was one of the robots that the client commissioned to fix. The robot worked fine, but its AI was broken. The plush has reportedly ran off many times and has accidentally harmed personnel.
"Harmed personnel?" I whispered. How does a faulty robot accidentally harm someone?
The sound of running footsteps echoed from outside. I quickly crawled under the nearest desk. A sharp, high pitched scream sounded, and then cut off.
Ice crept up my spine. I inched out from the desk and stood up. A body laid in front of the door I came through. A blade pierced her neck, and blood pooled beneath the wound.
I forced myself to swallow. This is b ad, r eally bad. I need to leave this place immediately.
A figure leaped onto the body's back. Dark red blood stained its striped orange fur. A bright red bandana hung around its neck. Its large, dark eyes scanned the room.
It saw me.
"Birdie," I whispered. The thing jumped onto a nearby desk. It titled its head at me. I pressed myself against the wall, and something poked my back. I glanced behind. A light switch.
I looked back at Birdie. It narrowed its eyes and stepped forward.
I shut off the lights and ran. I didn't dare look back. I turned a corner and saw a green exit sign at the end of the hallway. I sprinted toward the door, pushed it open, and closed it as silently as I could. I leaned against the door and listened.
Nothing.
I took a shaky breath and stood up. “Oh my God,” I panted. “This is real.”
I need to get out of here. The only way out now is through the stairs.
I started going down the stairs but I tripped on my foot. I tumbled down, my
head hitting the rails. My vision blurred. A sharp pain shot through my left wrist.
I landed on my side. My head ached, and my body felt numb. The pain shot through my wrist again, jolting me upright. Lights danced around me. I rubbed my head with my left hand, and the pain spiked again.
I shook my head, and my vision cleared. I looked at my left wrist. I bit my lip from the pain. Great, I sprained it. Grunting, I pulled myself up and continued going down the stairs.
I arrived at the ground level. The exit door greeted me at the end. I sighed in relief.
The door behind me swung open. Birdie leaped from the bar handle, holding a metal rod in its mouth. I ran for the exit door, but the plush jumped in front of me, slowly forcing me back through the other door and into the lab.
I tried to run but tripped.
The plush narrowed its large, dark eyes and lunged at me. I knocked it down just in time. I clenched my teeth and looked around for anything that I could use as a weapon.
A broken glass vase laid a few feet away from me. I grabbed the largest piece and turned around.
Pain shot through my right knee. I yelped and fell to the floor. Birdie climbed up my body and wacked me on the side of my head. My eyes watered, and my ear began to ring. Birdie jumped off me and discarded the metal rod for a shard of glass.
Glass.
It looked at me and angled the shard toward me.
It inched closer. I wiped the tears from my eyes and gripped my own glass
shard. The cold tip of the plush’s glass touched my face.
I jabbed my glass piece into Birdie’s head with all the force my injured body
could muster. The plush fell to the ground.
I ran back into the emergency exit and left the building.
The door led me to the back parking lot. There was a gate to the left of me. I hobbled over to it, and it opened. I made my way to my car and sat in the seat.
Everything hurt. My wrist, my hand, my knee, my head...
I leaned against the car seat and allowed myself to think. All those brilliant minds are now dead. And my wife? Is she...
I shook my head, making my headache worse. No, no, I can't think of that now. I need help, professional help. This accident needs to be reported. I grabbed my phone from the cupholder and dialed 9-1-1.
Very exciting story, I really wanna know what happened to the wife, was the body on the floor hers, or is she alive?
ReplyDelete-Caitlin Munar
this was really intriguing to read. i love that it started out very calm and collected and caught me completely by surprise. it kept me questioning what was going to happen next and because of that element, i wanted to keep reading.
ReplyDelete- alissah w.
This story has open ends, which I like because it makes me continuously wonder what happened in the labs. I loved the thrill that the status of the wife, questioning whether she is alive or dead. The way you described the scenery of the accident is very detailed and well said. _ Mary Ojo
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed the thrill of your story as well as the cliffhanger. I also commend you for doing something completely original, I did not expect the villain one of the subjects. I would really like to find out what happened to the wife.
ReplyDelete-Abbey Jimenez
I really love the cliffhanger at the end! The story kept me guessing and the hinting at a deeper backstory to the robots really got me interested in what exactly happened to the first group of developers. Great job, and I'd love to read a part 2 of this! :)
ReplyDelete-Aubrey Peterson
You did a great job at building suspense. It really made me want to keep reading and I was scared that he might find his wife dead. I also really like the idea that the little cat plush is the villain in the story, that was really intriguing and a nice twist! -Maia vonHempel
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your story! The details made it very suspenseful and left me wanting to read more of what happened. I liked how you left your story on a cliffhanger, as well. -Samantha Le
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ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your story. It was very suspenseful and I love the sci-fi theme you have going on. This reminded me a bit of Stranger Things and I love that. - Neomie Tulac
ReplyDeleteYour story is very origonal and well written. I loved the use of suspense to hook the readers in! -abbie
ReplyDeleteI love the way you wrote this story! It never lost my interest and always had me wondering what would happen next. I like how you included the husband's inner thoughts mixed in with what he was experiencing and seeing. Very creative and well written! - Angelique Maylad
ReplyDeleteOh my goodness, that was so amazing! The suspense and action was so enthralling and the entire concept was so intriguing, especially the villain! Having a cute little plush end up being the main threat is so creative, I love it so much, you did a wonderful job! - Sumbal Sharif
ReplyDeleteI really love the way you built suspense while conveying the story it was a really great story and I can't wait to see more of your writing in the future-Kasaia Gray
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed the story! I always felt on edge during the entire story. I love the cliffhanger at the end as well. I hope we can get a part 2 soon! - Alezza Deserva
ReplyDeleteIn the end, I do love the cliffhanger! The plot held me guessing and it also got me involved in what exactly happened to the first community of developers by hinting at a deeper backstory to the robots. Fantastic work.- Hashim mumtaz
ReplyDeleteIn the end, I do love the cliffhanger! The plot held me guessing and it also got me involved in what exactly happened to the first community of developers by hinting at a deeper backstory to the robots. Fantastic work.-Hashim Mumtaz
ReplyDeleteThis story was so incredibly written. Your word choice is so professional and amazingly laid out. And the cliffhanger at the end was definitely a good touch. I was on the edge of my seat the whole time!
ReplyDelete-Amy Harvey :)
Hey Tatianna, I loved the detail and imagery you used in your story. It was fun to read! -Nora Mahmoud
ReplyDeleteI really found your story interesting and I scoffed at the use of a bird, "birdie" as the thing trying to kill. I was also shocked at the end, I need to find out what happened next. That Cliffhanger UGH!
ReplyDelete-Rebekah Diaz
This was a really good story. I always have such a soft spot for sci-fi and technology, especially conflict that revolves around AI. What you made was a really good and original story, and I really enjoyed reading it. A part of me wishes I could read more, though I like how the cliffhanger just leaves you on the edge of your seat. You did a great job!
ReplyDelete-Ronneth Kennedy
Beautiful writing. The setting was set perfectly, and I was on the edge of my seat as the story unfolded.
ReplyDelete-Gannon Smith
This story was very creative and truly grabbed my attention. You took great attention to detail and the buildup of suspense, I was on my toes. -Marissa Rivera
ReplyDeleteThe story was amazing! I love how it gives the same vibe as Frankenstein. The cliffhanger at the end gives an amazing effect. Good Job!!!
ReplyDelete-Hrishika Reddy Nanamala