Wednesday, May 11, 2016
The letter--Janae
These words flow from me like a blow to me blood gushing out the impact hit me and
now i know what lifes about .Your venomous juices touched me in the most intimate
place my seed you told me to waste .I would say that i hate you but we know that so
untrue truthfully you make me blue going through life brushin off the truth and
disregarding responsibilities .In time you are slowly disappearing by myself i'm fearing
having to nurture this seed into a tree on my own , i wish i could have known what you
were about from the first time we went out and sweet nothings flowed from your mouth
.I project my voice in frustration but my complaints fall on deaf ears.You made things a
sport from day 2 day you would take my heart and distort it i refuse to support it ,your
bad habits and lustin lifestyle sometimes i cath myself getting jealous i wish i could
relish like you ,It seems like karma never gets you as you runaway from it fast cutting
corners and hurting others.Somewhere in this fit of emotional unsableness i snapped
myself back in to reality and realized these feelings are only temporary.Any negativity i
feel towards you only hurts me we have to live and let go .Ive learned throught this
whole process of loss and disspointment people arent going to see what you see and
find value in whats presious to us.In life thing happen and pain occurs we must maintain
and push through the worst ann strive for what we deserve.People will always reveal
their true colors but its up to us to maitain ourselfs .
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I really liked the poetic flow & rhyming. I typically don't like rhyming poems but I really loved the way the rhymes made your poem sound strong and determined instead of sing-song like. I really liked the message behind it, especially the last line, I agree that even when people hurt you or don't turn out to be what you expected, the way you react determine who you are. Great Job! :)
ReplyDeleteThis message is so important. So many times do we lose ourselves when surrounded by others, it is easy to get lost in the beautiful things and be blinded to the bad. Sometimes, as you said, we have to let go. Well Written!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed this piece. I liked the rhyming aspect of it, it almost sounded like a song. Overall I liked the message that was embedded throughout the descriptive words. Nice job
ReplyDelete-Kathlyn Juarez
This piece was very touching, I think it shows your maturity both as a writer and as a woman. Keep it up!
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