She is
spring. On Monday she pours down, but on Tuesday a beautiful bouquet of flowers
blooms from her chest. The next day they’ve all fallen to the ground, within an
hour new buds have sprouted in place of the wilted ones. How do you love a girl
like this? A girl too inconsistent, different each day. She changes her mind
more than spring changes its climate; one day she’ll take you by the hands and
dance with you, her smile invites you into her heart. The next day she’s
hellish, hot tempered and strikes fear into you. She avoids you as if saying one
word will cause the building you two are in to crumble. But she wouldn’t look any
less beautiful with chaos surrounding her. You find yourself questioning how
her cold eyes burned you on Monday but warmed you on Tuesday. On Thursday, she
rains down on everything, not caring who drowns in her tears. Skies that were
previously bright and clear are now cloudy. The following day is dark and so is
she. She moves as if a weight is on her shoulders that cannot be removed, one
look at her and darkness surrounds you. She glances at you and lightning cracks,
a minute later rain pours down hitting the ground like bullets. She doesn’t
bother with an umbrella, and when you offer her one she declines. Sometimes you
think she’d rather drown. A week later she appears to you, the flowers in her
heart have fully bloomed once again, she is bright and her smile brings the
warmth you’ve been deprived of. She is spring and as inconsistent as the
weather. Her warmth never lasts too long and in a week or two you’re positive
rain will fall again, flooding the town and your mind. She doesn’t care that
you can’t swim.
This was beautiful. I love the ups and downs and metaphorical emotions conveyed through the imager. You maintained my interest throughout the entire piece. Yeah, wow, keep on keeping on and continue to improve in these next few years.
ReplyDeleteMikaela!!! lol i love how you use very descriptive words on this piece good job!:)
ReplyDeleteThe emotions in the story were amazing. good job
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