After
practicing for since 8th grade promotion, I couldn’t wait to suit up
and play as an eagle. Emotions came over
me as I started to realize what was about to happen. “Could I handle being the
point? What if I forget two-game? How many of my friends are gonna be here to
watch?” I asked myself this in the locker room. Coach must’ve been able to read
minds because out of the blue he says,” Should be a full house tonight!” Full
house? First game? At the time I didn’t think I could handle the pressure but
my good friend Julian was sitting next to me and said,” Your gonna go off for
30, watch.” This took some of the stress of but not completely. Coach called us
to gather around and we did so, preparing for his pre-game speech. He didn’t
say much because the team we were about to play wasn’t even competition to us.
We put all our hands in the middle and I said,” Family on 3, Family on me! 1,
2, 3” and we all yelled family. Coach told us to go out on the floor and get
loose, he threw two balls at us. The second I walked out those doors, I viewed
the mass amount of people in the stands. Parents, friends, foes and unfamiliar
faces was the mixture. I sat down and started stretch but couldn’t stop
thinking about the crowd. Coach came around and said,” Lay-up lines.” And we
did so. My first try and I slap the backboard as hard as I can hoping people
will be amazed. We do this for about 10 minutes, then the buzzer rings. We run to
our bench and gather around coach again. He told us to play under control and
don’t be easy. We walk to half court and listen to the ref’s rules, shake hands
with the opposing team and then our own. Here it is. The final moment. Neftal
jumps up and hurls the ball back to me. It begins. Throughout the game I play
fairly well except for a bad pass here and there. Now the game is over. I feel
terrible with my performance, I only had 15 points and I could’ve had 30. We
beat the team 64-12 but we all know there’s more work to be done. As we leave
the locker room all our friends are outside to congratulate us and tell us how
good we played. I’m relieved. They’re mentioning plays I can’t even remember
but to them it was cool! Now I know how it feels to play as an eagle, and it
felt pretty darn awesome!
Jordan! I'm glad you chose to share this experience on the blog! I love how you described this event with such detail and your punctuation with the quotation marks are on point! Great job!
ReplyDeleteGreat piece! I like how you described how you were feeling before the game and mentioned your thoughts, after you played. Good luck next season!
ReplyDeleteEven though I don't understand basketball at all,this piece was amazing. You explained your thoughts and feelings in a way where I felt like I was being "Jordan." Great Piece!
ReplyDeleteI love this and love our basketball team so much! It is well written and entertaining, good luck in the future!
ReplyDeleteExcellent work! I enjoyed your thorough use of detail, and it really brought the story and your emotions through it all to life. This type of experience, first times, is something we can all relate to, and I think you were able to express your thoughts extremely well. Great job!
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