The day I realized I could succeed in anything I put my mine to was on
March 30th, I participated in a Track and Field Invitational at
Trabuco Hills; I remember this day like it was yesterday, and on this day I was
entered into the 400x meter run. I was in lane 5 and just before my heat was
called to the line I started to get hot, and it was not because it was blazing
outside. My hands and legs were soft and slippery. I started to get
butterflies. As the other competitors began to talk amongst themselves they
started to discuss their times. As a sophomore, I was still running a 67 (seconds
to complete a lap). I started hearing “67, 68, and 71”. I started to calm down.
All I knew was I wanted to make this race count.
Before I knew it, it was time for me to get on the line. I set my blocks
and told all the girls good luck; when really it was I that needed the luck.
“Boom!”, the gun went off and I was on my way. I heard a voice say, “Lane 5,
Ayomide Ademorijimi pushes to first place”. That was me. I started to think “Keep
going Ayo, pocket the chin- a slogan Coach Bennie had repeated countless times-
you’re at the 300m mark, now go! Don’t give up. I listened to the voice inside
me and as I came back to reality, I began to hear footsteps behind me. I was
not going to let this girl past me. I did not come all this way and push this
hard to lose, so I persevered. I heard her footsteps approach and I pushed
myself even harder, even though I was physically ready to give up. We were on
the last 100m and I was still in first place,” Ayo you’re almost there”, I
repeated to myself. I heard the crowd cheering. I heard my coach cheering. I
crossed the finish line at 1:04:83. I had PR’d! - I had beaten my personal
record. Although I was ready to collapse to the floor, I silently cheered in my
head and exited the field.
My coach came to me and asked me how I felt, I said “Exhausted”. He
laughed and said “You did great Ayo; I saw you pushed through the pain”. I said thank you and took a deep breath. The
girl that came in second told me after the race that my perseverance to finish
and stay in first place pushed her to stay with me, she finished strong as well.
It turns out she also beat her personal record that day. I never felt happier,
and from this moment on I knew that I could accomplish anything I wanted to if
I put my mind to it. It took a long time before I realized this, but I’m
content with the knowledge I gained.
This piece reminded me of one of those feel good sports movies (Bring it On etc) which I absolutely love. I love your can do attitude. It's nice to read about people achieving their goals. Great job!
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ReplyDeleteAyo ! First off I just want to say I am going to miss your class clowin, beautiful soul. This piece is great. I love how you have shared such an amazing accomplishment to us all. Keep doing your best in all you do and with God behind you he will never leave you know forsake you. Great job girl and keep that attitude of wanting to succeed. Oh and great detail too ! :)
ReplyDeleteAyo that is an amazing story. I know that a moment like that is very significant in a persons life. I love how you incorporated so much imagery as well into your piece. The piece was so inspiring and encouraged me to work hard until the end. Great Job and congrats!
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job portraying how you felt before, during, and after the race. This contributed to the overall message, of putting your mind to something and accomplishing it at all costs. Great job!
ReplyDeleteWow! This piece was really inspiring! Influencing others that they can do it if they put their minds to it! Nice details, I felt as if I was right there on your shoulder witnessing the race alongside you. Overall, great work!
ReplyDeleteAyo, I really enjoyed reading this piece! It really shows your dedication and ability to push yourself to reach new heights. The situation was explained very well and in great detail. Great job!
ReplyDeleteThrough reading this, I could really imagine myself right there with you. I admire the hard work and dedication you put into obtaining such a large accomplishment. Good Job!
ReplyDeleteAyo! This is wonderful and inspirational and I can really hear your voice in it, I can imagine you reading this aloud to me. Good job keisha!(:
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