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Tuesday, May 12, 2015

Jaedon--Lone Guardian



It wasn't long before I lived a few thousand years ago that the collapse completely annihilated almost every living thing on our planets. The war lasted a millennium, causing us to use as many soldiers and guardians as possible in order to save our kind from the darkness. There were many casualties as what usually happens during war. You get used to the fact that people will die. No not everything in our army is human, yet what they have inside of them makes them a person. Yes I am dead, I am alive however. The interesting thing is that I died during the war when it was about 1275 years into the long lasting war, and the extinction happened about 500 years after that. I was reborn about 200 years later, I had no idea what was going on but this little light had revived me. He said he was called a ghost and I started to remember things. When I was reborn, I woke up on the same place I died 1975 years ago.....next to my fire team....dead of course...they weren't the lucky ones this time. They were good people, good friends. They meant no harm than to hunt and kill anything that would hurt the city. Atlas-32, he was one of our ground soldiers, he died when he tried to save our lives by using his dome shield, a protective shield made up of void light, we took heavy fire and the shield broke. Next thing you know aliens decide to shoot their explosive lasers at us. We were bleeding out, it was only minutes until we all were going to die. I was the last of them to die. Atlas-32's eyes were dimming and Maggie's flame was extinguishing. I watched them suffer as light was getting brighter and I felt nothingness. Emptiness. No darkness at all. It feels like how I met Maggie when we went through training. She was a wizard and I was and still am a darkness assassin. I remember she used to be the daredevil of the tower's training facility. She'd always jump off a building and somehow make it back up in one piece. She pushed me off... And when I got back up we started talking. She was the one who grew up with me during those times. Both of our parents were dead and we had nobody. Maggie and I found atlas on Earth's moon, so we decided to take him back and reset his hard drive system so he can have a fresh mind, however with him keeping his old memories. We found him as atlas-31 and now he's been reset. The number after a robot's name represents how many times their system has been reset. That is hardly all I remember about my past. I must have lost some brain cells in the explosion, or maybe my brain has aged to a point where I cant remember much anymore. Although I cant remember much, these people in my life have faced some hard times alongside with me, and I will never forget them due to the fact they were the only ones who were there when nobody else was.....

2 comments:

  1. I appreciate all the hard work you put into that. Obviously, you are a fan of dystopian stories. Interesting, are you going to expand the storyline some more? Be careful of the run-on sentences.

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  2. This was really good, you had an awesome recollection of events. Great use of emotion to depict imagery. My one comment would be, to look over your capitals, make sure that all your nouns are capitalized. Other than that, Great Job!!

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