So many people today
have had so many problems throughout their lives, it surprises me that many of
them have grown up into the respectable individuals they are today, whereas
others are sadly not so fortunate. I myself have experienced very little
hardship, unless you count having to wait till Christmas to get a certain toy
as one. I have an ideal life, and I’m immensely grateful for it. I have amazing
family, friends, and I live in a great community. All of these factors have molded
me into the responsible, reliable, and respectful individual I am today. I
cannot thank them all enough. However throughout my childhood and even now my
older brother (by two years) and I have constantly competed against one
another, whether it was school, sports, or wrestling one another. I have lost
again and again to him, and for most of my life I’ve hated it due to the
constant teasing I’ve faced from him. He always did just a little better in
school, and he was a much better water polo player than I, so I was always
jealous of him. I felt as though I’d never be as good as him. But now, as high
school is ending I’ve looked back and I’m honored to have had a brother like
him. He has been the one to push me through almost everything I’ve done, thanks
to our natural competitiveness. Thanks to this I’ve maintained a 4.0 GPA
throughout almost all of high school, and I’m currently the captain of the
varsity swim team, and I was captain of the varsity water polo team earlier in
the year. He’s taught me not only to not compare myself to others, but to be
happy with who I am, to be proud of myself, and of course to be graceful in
defeat. My dad is currently a superior court judge and a business law
professor, and thanks to him I’m hoping to attend law school after college to become
a lawyer when I’m older. In addition to my family, my friends have stuck with
me and allowed me to enjoy these 4 years of high school, so I am grateful to
them as well. I can’t think of how different my high school experience would’ve
been without them. Just like my older brother, they’ve pushed me throughout
these 4 years not only academically, but in sports as well, with many laughs
along the way. I honestly cannot thank them all enough, for all the love and
support they’ve given me. Although we’re all going our separate ways for
college, I know we’ll still keep in touch as much as possible. Now we’re all
about to be on our way to college, and hopefully, success. My family and
friends have helped me become the passionate, loving, and content person I am
today, and I don’t think I’ll ever be able to repay them.
This has a good message. It seems that many might benefit from realizing how many people support them.
ReplyDeleteAwh Jake! I love how you chose to write about your success with the help of your parents! I admire the amount of detail in your story and personal emotions that you felt that made this piece easy to relate to. Great job Jake!
ReplyDeleteThis post really made me smile! Reminding me of how blessed my life is! And how to never take it for granted. Amazing piece, a lot of us can learn from the message you are providing. Good job and good luck!
ReplyDeleteJake,
ReplyDeleteI can totally relate to this piece. I also have an older sister, whom I have always felt that I was in a competition with. If she got an A in the class I had to get an A+, but it was not until she left for college that I actually felt kinda lost in the crowd. That is when I realized she was always my role model, without her guidance, support, doubt, and brains (she is a genius) I do not think I would be where I am right now. Thanks for helping me reflect. Awesome job, and I wish you the best after high school.
Great job! I can definitely relate to this because my family and I argue A LOT. Your vivid description of how your family has helped you grow is very moving and it reaches out to readers, encouraging them to appreciate their loved ones. Awesome piece!
ReplyDeleteYou and your brother seem to have a great relationship with one another. Having someone like him pushing you to do your best is something that everyone would benefit from. Support from others helps more than people may realize. Great reflection and story.
ReplyDeletehonestly you and your brother seem like best buds and because you're following in MY footsteps in becoming a lawyer I guess ill have some more competition from me :) This was a great piece, I enjoyed reading it. I hope you enjoy your future!!
ReplyDeleteThis is such a relatable piece. I always feel like I want to be better than my sister but I think it's because I want to be just like her. This was such a nice piece to read. Great story
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