Ball
is Life
Basketball. Simple enough, a sphere that goes through a
hoop, right? But, what does it mean? To
some, it’s a useless sport that measures no value. To others, it’s boring to watch, but fun to
play. But to those enthusiasts, it’s
what they indulge in. It’s their
pass-time, their entertainment, fitness, and mentality. Without basketball, those certain individuals
don’t know what to do. But why is it so? At least once in their life, everyone picks
up a basketball and does something with it.
All those children no matter where have tried to shoot “something” into
a “hoop”. Whether it be the basketball
court, the trash can, the recycling bin, a hula hoop and a rubber ball. They’ve all done it. Don’t try and deny it. You have at least tried it. And why is that so? Monkey see, monkey do? Maybe. Inspiration? Close. Because it holds something more than just the
moves and the sport? Exactly that.
Basketball expands way more outside its circle of NBA and what we watch
on TV. It’s about focus, discipline,
inspiration, and fun.
In
basketball, we create focus. We focus on
the game being played. We focus on
Derrick Rose’s health. We focus on how
the game will play out. We focus so much
into how things will be, it also applies to how it is outside. That focus we can put into that, can go into
other aspects of one’s work, school, or whatever it is.
In
basketball, we use discipline. We
discipline ourselves to watch the game so profusely. We discipline ourselves just as Kobe did to
perfect Michael Jordan’s jump shot. We
discipline ourselves to work harder. The
discipline we see, is something that we use to motivate ourselves in life.
In
basketball, we have inspiration. We
inspire ourselves every time we hear Michael Jordan’s story of not making his high
school basketball team. We inspire
ourselves to learn that move we just saw on TV.
We put inspiration in the great comebacks and find motivation through
that. This inspiration is something
greatly seen through other outlets, but very evident here.
And
most importantly, in basketball, we find fun.
The laughs we get after a crazy missed shot. The fun we get out of playing with
friends. The joy we get from making that
shot you’ve been trying to get all day.
The fun and happiness we gain in such a simple action portrays that of
the way one should feel almost all the time.
Basketball
doesn’t just stick as one “thing”. It’s
more of one big “thing” with so many small intricacies that it becomes an
infinite amount of “things”. And isn’t
that what life is all about? But to make
things evident, it only means one thing. “Ball is life”.
I really liked how I could tell how passionate you are about basketball just by reading this. Great Job!
ReplyDeleteI liked the last half of your intro. Also, I liked how you eulogized an everyday item. Good job and thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteThis was really good. I love how you tied basketball into our everyday lives by implying that the factors used to describe a basketball player and the game itself are the same factors used to describe anyone and any situation in life. lol i guess "ball is life". monkey see, monkey do. right?
ReplyDeleteThat's was a very good story the way you think of basketball and it is your passion. You want everyone to know how fun basketball is if you have fun with it.
ReplyDeleteReally like how you used your vocabulary and explained real-life situations that real basketball players have gone through. Good job!
ReplyDeletegood Job and very good detail. :)
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed how you were able to connect such a simple action to all these huge ideas that people should really learn to apply to life. Great work!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading this piece because I like how you go into depth about the sport and how it is so much more than what people think. I like how you mention the life lessons that you can gain from just playing and how these life lessons affect you and others around you. Good job! (:
ReplyDeleteAlec,
ReplyDeleteI find it unique that out of all possible subjects, you chose basketball. You certainly have adapted the common sport and a popular phrase to be your central idea. Being an active fan of this sport myself, I find enjoyment in just seeing athletes put so much effort into their work out on the court. It truly does inspire me to try harder. Great Job, in taking a common thing and defining it in an unusual way.
that's so true every kid looks at something and the shoots a ball through it because its fun. Basketball does give you discipline and also motivation to achieve your goals in success in life. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI used to play basketball in middle school. I wasn't good at it, but it was fun to play during lunch break. Your story really gave a good point of view on what basketball means to people. Good job!
ReplyDeleteIt's funny how from every single personal narrative I've read, I've always found something to relate to. I'm not much of a basketball player myself, although it is pretty fun. Yet I found myself definitely agreeing with your statements, especially with my perspective and experience upon marching band. The people who don't participate in it, don't quite understand it, which is why it is often stereotyped and misjudged. But both activities require the same components - focus, discipline, inspiration, and fun.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing! :)
Wow. I never knew how much basketball incorporates the important aspects of life. You did a great job! Keep up the great work!
ReplyDeletei love basketball myself i agree with all that u said ball is life this sport inspires me as well makes me want to work hard to some day hopefully play like the professionals this was a great paper
ReplyDeleteGreat way of explaining how basketall inspires you and how it connects to your life.
ReplyDeleteI can tell you really love basketball which is a quality all good players have. I liked how you connected basketball to other things like school.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you explain how you love basketball and how you give examples for professional players
ReplyDeleteI like to play basketball to ball is life and sports really inspire me to.
ReplyDeleteWow. This is a great pice of work. You applied basketball to all of our lives and none of us ever took the time to pay attention to how basketball is in our lives. You did a great job and I like your work!
ReplyDeleteVery good story! I like watching and playing basketball so it was really enjoying reading your story.
ReplyDeleteReally good job! As I read, I felt very connected to what you are trying to say. In my house, basketball is the only thing we watch on t.v. so ball is pretty much our life. All in all, the message was really inspiring and the aspect too. Good job again!
ReplyDeleteHaha! Great job on connecting basketball to everyone's daily lives. The shooting a paper ball into the trash can was gold, I mean who can deny the fact that they've attempted at least once in their lives. Amazing job for making something so specific as basketball so.. relative to the general people
ReplyDeleteYou had me on being focused. If we are not focused, then we can't accomplish our goals. In sports, the main goal is to win and to be communicating. Great job!!
ReplyDeleteThis was hilarious considering the great examples you gave (especially about Derrick Rose). I think this had a great message and many can relate to it. I love basketball and what it teaches you on and off the court. Good Job
ReplyDeleteAwesome story! I can relate to your passion for basketball since I'm the same way with water polo.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your blog, I specifically liked how you defined basketball as multiple ideas and not just the basic ideas of basketball. I also enjoyed the structure of your writing. Great job.
ReplyDeletethis was a really great piece, I especially liked it because you gave a different perspective to how some use that phrase and how much passion someone can feel for a sport.
ReplyDeletelove your comparison of life and basketball great job
ReplyDeletei love how you gave that simple phrase so much meaning and just so much passion and i can definitely feel the sense of happiness it brings you. overall what was an amazing paper, good job
ReplyDeletewow....wow this is such a great piece you made me look at basketball in a whole new perspective and i can tell you are very passionate about this sport.
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing, your love of the game really shows through. The repetition of key words highlights passion for the sport.
ReplyDeleteYour passion for basketball is made very evident by the connections you have made to everyday life with it. I never realized the connection between me trying to toss something into the trash can and basketball until now.
ReplyDeleteReally nice job! I like how you structured your piece & also how you included the quote at the end!
ReplyDeleteI love the Passion to put in your piece:)
ReplyDeletewow great job! :)
ReplyDeleteI really like your inspiration for basketball
I like how you put basketball into a different perspective that very few people take the time to realize. Well written my friend.
ReplyDeleteI like how you were able to give such a popular phrase and even greater meaning. Your use of detail made it even better.
ReplyDeleteBro, I couldn't stop smiling and giggling. It was hilarious, entertaining, and relative. You got us all on the spot and made a pinpoint connection that we all can relate (which is where I started to chuckle). Good Job Calvin. Ball is Life!
ReplyDeleteAlec i really heard your voice as a writer in this poem great job being true to your style! the fact that you used life values to prove the idea that a sport can be so much more real is a great way to illustrate your point so maybe ball is really life? haha great job man.
ReplyDeleteI really like your use of descriptive language. Such a great use of imagery! This made me want to keep reading and wanting more. What a great job!
ReplyDeleteThis is such a great piece of literature. You made this so funny yet entertaining and really showed how much passion you have for basketball. Great job bro.
ReplyDeleteThis was an amazing piece! I love how basketball is more than just a game to you. I loved reading this. Good job!!
ReplyDeleteI love the passion you have for this sport and the way you turned it into a bigger meaning than just "basketball". Ball is life!
ReplyDeleteNice job on how basketball relates to your life! I also loved how much passion that you have for the sport well done Alec.
ReplyDeletevery well written. it made me think more about basket ball more than i have and in a different way.
ReplyDeleteThat was really funny, ball is life!
ReplyDeleteInteresting application of literary devices to your life. It's clear that you care about basketball a lot.
ReplyDeletei like your passion for basketball
ReplyDeleteAs an athlete I connected to your story, and I felt your emotions and passion in your words.
ReplyDeleteDude. Can I just say: Wow? I love abstract pieces, and I love how you managed to draw a mundane object, which pretty much anyone can relate to it, and expand it to create this web of intricate ideas. Love, love, love.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you connected basketball to everyday life.
ReplyDeleteIt was extremely well written, and almost relatable! I like how you picked out different traits of the sport, like disicpline, and related it to many things. You go your point across very clearly.
ReplyDeleteFunny story and nice work.
ReplyDelete"We put inspiration into the great comebacks" was my favorite part of this piece because thats where I connected the most. You were able to put basketball into every aspect of any life and that was great! good job
ReplyDeleteThis piece is so great! I love the abstract idea of basketball, although at the same time the reader can tell that you also truly enjoy the sport. Great way to demonstrate how something can symbolize many things.
ReplyDeleteYour piece was very well written. I can easily tell how passionate you are about basketball. Great job!
ReplyDeleteNice use of the title, 'Ball is Life' to incorporate your inner voice and set the stage. Good job.
ReplyDeleteyou really expressed yourself with the tone in order to show that you really are passionate, I like how you wrote about what you know.
ReplyDelete- Martin Landaeta
I think this is a really great piece of writing! I really like how you incorporated something that you love into everyday actions. It's similar to me and my flying! I love it keep up the great work!
ReplyDeleteYou really applied your own personal touch to this piece with diction.
ReplyDeleteMy favorite sport good job :)
ReplyDeleteBruh! I can totally hear your voice as I was reading this! I love how you chose how to embody your piece on this popular phrase and was able to successfully expand and apply it to life. Great job, son! (:
ReplyDeleteWow. I could definitely understand why your title is "Ball is Life." I'm happy that you have a side passion other than always stressing about school!
ReplyDeleteThis is real deep, you might as well become a philosopher who credited to be the founder of classical principle of ball.
ReplyDeleteThis was a good read. Very entertaining and always nice to hear someone say ball is life.
ReplyDeleteYou're right we all have done it! Good job, your piece was inspiring and made connections to all of us!
ReplyDeleteVery relatable story! The fact that you love basketball so much really speaks to me. I know that pretty much everyone has something that they love to do and its nice to see someone else express their joy in something that they enjoy! Awesome job.
ReplyDelete-Lauren Waitman
i loved that you made a slang term into a real life topic. You can feel your passion for the sport in every paragraph. Your transitions flowed and although your vocabulary was casual, it didnt effect the piece negatively.
ReplyDeleteThis is very good. I don't know to much about basketball but this made me know alot more than before. Really good job, keep it up.
ReplyDeleteI like it but you could of done better
ReplyDeletePutting too many questions makes is sound lower, but the information and comparisons made me think a lot about the sport and even others.
ReplyDeletewell done in giving us a detailed story in basketball 4 stars
ReplyDelete-Ian Rendon
This is a good piece. there was a lot of info. I liked the part about the focus. it was really cool to see what to think.
ReplyDelete-Garrett Lachase