Just Friends
Are friendship began on January
3rd. I was late to my morning class, I was running through the hallways trying
to make it on time to my class and I
broke out in a nervous sweat thinking that the professor would lock me out.
About time I got to my class I was out of breathe and tired, with only a few
seconds to spare. I grabbed the seat closes to the door, the teacher started
his lecture exactly at 10:00. Everyone already had their lecture book out, and
when I went to grab my book from out of my bag just to notice that it wasn't there. I panicked
only for a second until the guy sitting next to me offered to share his book
with me. HIs name was Christopher and he
saved me that day. After class we ended up getting coffee together and our
conversation just started to flow automatically. We sat in the coffee shop for hours only to
realize that we were the only ones left. From that day on we became best friends,
and everyone would always say that we will end up getting together, that a male
and female can't stay "just friends". Me and Christopher would just
laugh them off. We have proven everyone wrong for the last 8 years. I just
came home from New York and called Christopher, " Hey I just arrived at
the airport , are u still coming to get me"? he said, "yea of course
I'm like 30 minutes away", my reply was "ok I'll see you soon".
After Christopher got off the phone he looked down to the passenger seat where
the dozen of red roses laid, and the black box thathad the diamond ring inside.
He focused back on the road with a smile on his face remembering the morning of January 3rd.
This is so cute! I love cute little stories like these. So cute! Great job!
ReplyDeleteAwww, I love the last two sentences, I wasn't exactly expecting that! Very cute story :)
ReplyDeleteAWHH.... What a cute ending! I really want to know what happens next! I love the Romantic chick flick fiction going on! It's too cute. Great Job!
ReplyDeleteOhh I like this; short and sweet. So basically everyone was wrong for 8 years and then BOOM the wedding is on. On a more serious note, I feel like your story flowed really well and that the ending was just lovely :)
ReplyDeleteI love this Taylorrrrr!! Taylor its Our not Are! jk best friend but no seriously(: but on a serious note I love this short story it makes me want to find out what happens next with Christopher and the narrator!
ReplyDeleteAaaawwwww! thats so adorable! For some reason i feel like if the story continued the girl could have said "no" and hen aaaww shoot plot twist will they still be friends, will they eventually get married, is she engaged with someone else? so many questions no answers! But i like how you stopped it there and kept the reader (like me) thinking. Good Job!
ReplyDeleteThe end brought it all to very clean close, great job!
ReplyDeleteAHHHHHH that's great "Short and sweet," like Ferrero Rocher Chocolates :P Hope they get married.
ReplyDeleteI love, love stories like that where the best friends get together. Or at least they better have gotten together! Too cute!
ReplyDelete- Hannah Mueller (12) per.3
Oh my gosh, how cute i knew that some how , some way one of those two people had to come forth with the feelings. The whole rose, ring and him looking straight ahead with a smile on his face was so cute to me. Short story but i enjoyed the read :)
ReplyDeleteToo cute! Maybe in college Ill meet someone similar to the cutie in the story! haha Anyways great job on this piece:)
ReplyDeleteThe ending seriously made me start to cry.....This was so great and made me so happy....Thank you Taylor for writing exactly what I needed to hear...thank you.
ReplyDeleteAw this is so sweet! I can't believe he waited 8 years! This is the kind of story that puts a smile on my face. Nice work! I also wonder why you chose January 3.
ReplyDeleteShort stories are always my favorite!!
ReplyDeleteAHHH i love love stories! this was so adorable! this was such a short story but it was so good! short but sweet(: great job!
ReplyDeleteehehehehahesdfha oh man. To the point but i was still so surprised. I feel kinda lame that i let stories like this affect me so but i mean hey we all need it some time.
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing:)
SO CUTE! My heart is so warm lol :) such a cute little story. awesome job!
ReplyDeleteI was so happy that it ended happily! I was getting scared that something was going to happen to him like other stories posted on the blog.
ReplyDeleteHmmm... there's hope for me in college! I felt like I was reading a mini Nicholas Sparks story. Nice job
ReplyDeleteThis seems like it can be made into a cute little book. happy endings are loved by all.
ReplyDeleteGutz! I feel like she might tell him no! That would be so sad:( I really liked this story. It was absolutely adorable <3
ReplyDeleteAwwww this is so cute! Now I have to punch a wall to regain my maniliness
ReplyDeleteIt's like a movie! AH! I love pieces like this, it just gives me hope. So so cute!
ReplyDeleteVery sweet ending I hopefully meet someone like that in life I loved the characters and how they were with each other
ReplyDeletehahaha you put are instead of "our" haha but man.. i wanna give a shoutout to christopher. abling to break the friendzone. we dont see this everyday. now thats a trooper and this was cute and fun
ReplyDeleteCute stories like these happen to be a guilty pleasure of mine, but this one is good enough to where I'm not even ashamed to show my enjoyment.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you rapped it all up at the end. I loved it!!
ReplyDeleteYour ending was so great! Throughout the entire thing i was wondering what was going to happen next...and still at the end i wasnt to know what happens next! Great work!
ReplyDeleteNice little story! Pretty big meaning. Great Imagery! Now make it a movie!
ReplyDeleteOOOOOhhhhhh plot twist! I always love a surprise ending, I loved it.
ReplyDeleteThat was nice and sweet, good job.
ReplyDeleteLIES LIES LIESSS ahhhhhh no two best friends (for that long of a friendship) ever agree truthfully that they can be just friends. i thought there was something funny going on!
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