Monday, March 20, 2017
True Colors--Alison
Messy hair, unironed shirt, and I reek of coffee. I am late to work again and I pray that there is
a parking spot left. Once I pull in I am surrounded by cars nicer than mine which gives me
motivation for this Monday morning. My ego has grown since working here, being the number
one sales person at this car dealership. I sneak into my office and run into Jarred, my boss, and
he greets me with a pretentious attitude saying something about how I shouldn’t always be late
and complaining about this homeless man that’s loitering out front. “I’ll go deal with the man”, I
say animatedly because this gives me a reason to get away from him. Rushing out of the office I
see what he’s talking about, the man sticks out like a sore thumb. Gently approaching him I ask
how I can help him and he’s caught off guard. “I’ve been waiting around for an hour and no one
has approached me yet”, he said. We started conversing about the different cars and at first I
don’t take this him seriously but why not give him a chance? Finally he asks to test drive one of
our most expensive cars, I become a little reluctant but then think that maybe he won’t get a
chance to ever drive something so luxurious because of his lower lifestyle. Once I hand him the
keys his eyes get so big, they look like they’re going to pop out. “What are you waiting for get in
already”, I tell him as I enter the passenger seat, “Lets just take it around the block and bring it
back before my boss notices.” The whole car ride is silent except for the directions I give him.
Once we get back Jarred is furious. I get out of the car and Jarred starts yelling at me saying
that I should have never let this lowlife drive the car without his permission and that I was about
to lose my job, he storms off right now. I turn to the homeless man and begin to apologize when
he pulls out a stack of cash. “I’ll take it”, he says looking over at the car. At this point my head is
spinning and i’m waiting to wake up from my nightmare so I close my eyes for a few seconds
but once I open them the man is still there, hand extended to me with the money. “Well alright
then”, I say very confused. As we sit to fill out the paperwork I can’t hold it in any longer and I
ask “How can you afford this anyways?” He gives me small smile and says,”My name is Andrew
Reed and i’m actually a very successful businessman but I rather not show off. I prefer when
people show their true colors around me and when you dress as if you have nothing it really
weeds out the shallow people.”
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I got chills at the end of this. I really really liked this story because that is a very smart way to "weed out the shallow people". I liked how you used alot of description so that we can picture what is happening in our head. Good piece!
ReplyDeleteThis amazing story inspired me to go do a random act of kindness to the next person I see. The message sticks out like a sore thumb, just like Andrew :P, and I think everyone should change how they treat people who's appearance is not to their liking. Outstanding Job!!
ReplyDelete- Aliyah Dumas
This piece was remarkably deep to how people can reveal their true personality and receive good Karma for it. Amazing piece indeed!!
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely amazing piece!!! You have highlighted the simple fact that people should show kindness to others regardless of the circumstance. This is highlighted by the actions of the main character towards the end of your story.
ReplyDeleteOmg, I really loved this story! It had humbleness and a great example of "don't judge a book by its cover."
ReplyDelete-Marlene Gonzalez
It is so true that assumptions are made based on how you dress and if you look like you have money. You did a great job with your message at the end.
ReplyDeleteThis was AMAZING, you really pointed out the fact that others really need to be nice, because we dont know their story, great job! -Lyndsey Ortega
ReplyDeleteI loved reading this, it reminded me how we should treat everyone with respect and to never think that we are above someone. Great Job
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ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed this piece because it is so true to how there are some people that make assumptions of people based off looks and will treat them differently but there are other people that don't make assumptions and are nice regardless. I feel like more
ReplyDeleteof us should be like that too and I like how you incorporated that message in the end of the piece nicely. Great piece! -Brianna Garcia
Wow that was an amazing hidden life lesson to not judge a book by its cover. People like the salesman are rare to find these days, but this gives me hope that they still exist. great job!
ReplyDeleteI felt like this really brought a whole new meaning to "don't judge a book by its cover". Because that's generally what we do as a society, we make assumptions about people just on their wardrobe and their appearance. Even though we don't know them or their life, and for all we know we're assuming the exact opposite of what's true. Great job!!
ReplyDeleteI admire the fact this that piece demonstrates the truth in "Never judge a book by its cover" and how the homeless man is the perfect embodiment of how we as people should act.
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ReplyDeleteI love this piece sooo much! It goes with the don't judge a book by its cover theme. Although its bad, it is true that many people judge other people's wealth by the way they dress and the things they own. I believe being humble is the best way to go such as that business man because it really does show the true colors of others.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed this piece, I could see and feel the different expressions on the man's face and the car dealer's. They say true colors show within time, you may be fooled for a moment, but if you're patient, things will come into place. Good job :)
ReplyDeleteI absolutely love rewarding messages in short narratives! The speaker truly has a kind heart and displayed a tremendous amount of trust within this "homeless man". I believe we should all strive to be the speaker no matter how small the good deed may be.
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ReplyDeleteThis reminds of what Youtubers do as “social experiments.” It’s pretty sad how that’s how people nowadays see one another… they tend to easily judge someone without even knowing who they actually are. They don’t get the concept of “Don’t judge a book by its cover.”
ReplyDeleteThis is a great piece, I really enjoyed it. I think its message is so important, and everyone needs to read it. Your description of everything enhanced everything too. Great job! -Lisa Ryu
ReplyDeleteI loved this piece so much. I knew right away that this "homeless man" was going to turn out rich! I loved this story so much and it really drew me in short and seeet but so powerful!
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job depicting materialism and how everyone should be nice to everyone regaurdless of how they appear, very endearing and powerful message !
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed the message behind this. Your story emphasizes the message that we shouldn't judge people based on appearances. I really enjoyed how you wrote this, and how your main character showcased kindness and empathy. You did good job.
ReplyDeleteI love the motif of "don't judge a book by its cover". I think we often forget about this when dealing with other people. Very nice depiction.
ReplyDeleteGreat piece, with a greater message. Not only is this purposeful, but entertaining as well. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThis is such a unique piece that you wrote very well. I love the twist at the end with your homeless man's true identity and I think that thus piece is something that many people relate to because of the common reaction towards someone with a certain appearance. Greta Job!
ReplyDeleteI loved reading this so much, and it made me very happy. At first, I was a bit thrown off by the homeless man and the boss, but in the end, it really enhanced the meaning of "don't judge a book by its cover." I love how there are still people who can go out of their way to satisfy others, no matter who they are. Great job!
ReplyDeleteI liked the unexpected turn of this story , because first I thought it would be about how her jobs sucks but then it turned out to be a lesson in shallowness. I appreciate this piece because I haven't read a blog like this one yet, where there is a shift and then a key lesson. I also like the diction and vocab used.
ReplyDeleteThis was such a nice message conveyed through a very well written story. It really makes you stop to think about how you should treat everyone you meet, as people are often more than meets the eye. Good job!
ReplyDeleteYes! I applaud you for bringing up such an important concept about personality and putting it to a plot, the characters were perfectly displayed, great work
ReplyDeletehaha your piece made me smile it's so cute. I really liked how you made a lot of your piece dialogue based it made it really interesting! Also, great descriptions and setting the scene, very easy to picture. -Vanessa Lai
ReplyDeleteI just love pieces like this and the use of situational satire as well as how it was so funny on you should not judge anyone on their appearances.
ReplyDeleteI really liked this piece because it shows the reality of how harsh and shallow people can really be. The kindness of the main character reminds me to not be so quick to judge those around me. Great job!
ReplyDeleteThese piece really embodies the way we should treat people, by not judging them and actually giving everyone a fair chance. It's a very short piece that really puts an impression on the audience. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI loved the message this piece provided. We should never prematurely judge another person because we never know who they truly are.
ReplyDeleteWOW , i absolutely adored your piece alison. this is definitely a sad and relevant problem that has been around forever, sadly people do judge others by their appearance and what i got from your piece was that we should not judge by the way they look or dress. beautiful piece girl!
ReplyDelete-Narelle Stewart
Wow that took a very unexpected turn. It was such an amazing piece and it showed how some people hide who they truly are
ReplyDeleteWow... that was deep. I appreciate this piece so much it's amazing. You displayed a very detailed scene and wrote great dialogue that left me trying to predict what the ending would be. I love how you brought up the importance of not judging others and how stereotypes can be completely wrong. Amazing story!
ReplyDeleteI loved this! I believe this peice did a really great job at showcasing the idea that we should never judge a book by its cover, which unfortunately occurs too often in today's society. It's sad to think that this exact situation could very likely occur if anyone who wasn't "dressed the part" showed up in an expensive designer store or car dealership like the main character in this peice.
ReplyDeleteDang! This story is very eye opening! The plot twist in the end was thought out! Great theme of the story! Good Job!!
ReplyDelete-Harley Liera
I guess you can't judge a book by its cover, can you? We should be more careful who we are talking to and not forget that people are people. Overall good piece I enjoyed it very much.
ReplyDelete-Ruben Becerra
Your story is very inspiring as it shows how everyone we meet should be treated. Great piece!
ReplyDeletewow I love this. It really does put the whole "Don't judge a book by a cover" into perspective. Beautiful, thematic and strong piece, great job!
ReplyDelete- Ishrat Khan
This was a very amazing piece. It was well written because of how important this subject is. You have explained this message by great examples. Good job
ReplyDelete- Benjamin Chong
This was a great story everyone can learn from! It's perfect because it is short yet it got the point across and conveyed the message very well. This is very insightful and makes the reader realize that we shouldn't judge a book by it's cover. Great job!
ReplyDelete"Never judge a book by its cover" I love theme of this piece and its very much so relevant to out society today. Everything is about looks and popularity and no one can show who they really are without being judged. I loved the message
ReplyDeleteThis is one of the most valuable lessons that everyone needs to learn in life. This was absolutely the best depiction of how people judge a book by its cover. Great job!
ReplyDelete-Jordan Lee
I love the message woven into your piece! It's a great reminder to everyone. Great job! :) -Jessica B.
ReplyDeleteThis piece is such a deep and nice message to the readers. It was well written and unique especially on how you incorporated how materialism can be with some people. Such a great piece!
ReplyDeleteThis story truly demonstrates how appearances don't define someone. The ending really made me smile because it proves a very important point. Good job! :)
ReplyDeleteI loved the message behind the piece and how you had the speaker show kindness to the seemingly homeless man. One has no right to think of themselves as superior to another based on how they dress and appear; we should all show love to and have respect for one another until we have a valid reason not to. Again I love everything about this piece. Great job!
ReplyDeleteI loved this story ! The way you brought out the importance of being kind and treating people with respect is so important especially in the world we live in now , overall great story
ReplyDeleteABSOLUTELY AMAZING WOW. This. is. so. important. Learning not to judge others by how they look is huge because you don't know their story! We need to spread kindness and respect no matter how people look! Great work!
ReplyDeleteThe passage have a realistic tone. Many people in the busy, modern society developed the habit of judging others base off appearances. The tone successfully assisted the speaker to convey that idea that the author wish the readers to be aware of.
ReplyDeleteThis was by far one of the most well written works! The whole story is very engaging and the message you displayed throughout the story was phenomenal!
ReplyDeleteI love the message that sits behind this piece because not only is it relatable to whats to come in our future but it is also relatable now as we are getting closer to graduation. Some of us are seeing who our TRUE friends are and seeing others TRUE COLORS, realizing that some of these people are not good for us and that some of the people that we have met in the last couple of months are better for us than some of the other people we have known for years. Great job!
ReplyDeleteI really like this story! It perfectly portrays the prejudices we have as humans and it blatantly points out our overall first instinct to just judge a person by their looks and not their heart. Beautiful job!
ReplyDeleteAlison omg this was so great to read! A+ on the story and A+ on the writing :)
ReplyDelete-Andre Burgos
I can't say I didn't expect it to take a twist at the end, but the way it was framed completely caught me off guard. I've heard stories of things happening like this in real life, but it has been a while, they always make me happy to know there are people still trying to be good out there. Great job.
ReplyDeleteI try to treat people the way you discribe in your story! Great job
ReplyDeleteThis piece shows us how important it is to be nice and respectful to everyone. Great job! -karina l.
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