Tuesday, January 26, 2016
Maite--Procrastination
Procrastination something that everyone does and some just happen to do it so well that it could
be considered an art. Well for this guy that's the case prom was 2 weeks away and one of those
weeks being spring break he had to figure out the best way to ask his friend to prom. Poor
Emmanuel running around everywhere searching for that one right idea so he could ask Noelle
but he could find it anywhere. Then during this period, yearbook it was like an angel came and
saved him, Nora had the perfect idea for his she told him “hey why don't you make 5 cakes and
cut out the letters to spell out prom,” it was a perfect idea he just couldn't understand why his
perfect self didn't think of that idea I guess he wasn't as perfect as he thought he was.
Emmanuel only had one problem he didn't know Noelle favorite type of cake but then Kayla told
him “Why don't you just make each letter a different flavors and I can help you in make some
good box cake” and that's what needed up happening they all went to the store that day to grab
all the materials they needed to make the cakes;they all headed to Emmanuel house and spent
the next 3 hours baking, cutting out letters and frosting all 5 of the cakes with bright color
frosting. The only thing next to do was to find out where Noelle was so his first thought was to
go to Sam and figure out that she was just at Sam's house, so they all drove to Sam's house
while making sure that they didn't mess up any of the letters as they drove. Once they got to
Sam's house they walked straight in and placed all the letters on the table , they walked upstarts
to the loft to and luckily for Emmanuel, Noelle doesn't have the best ear so they were able to
walk up there without her knowing and blindfold her. To make it a little more fun they made her
walk all all round Sam's house a couple times which to her felt forever. Then when they were all
done having fun they took her down stairs to the table and unblindfolded her. Once the blindfold
fell off her face she immediately reacted with joy and tears and said yes.
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This is such a cute story! I loved reading it!
ReplyDeleteI might steal this idea when I ask my prom date, so thanks for that haha.
ReplyDeleteProcrastination is something we can all relate too but I particularly loved how there was a good outcome in this case. Love love it!
ReplyDeleteI think this is very relatable because everyone procrastinates whether it's only a few times or all the times everyone has done it. The fact that in the end she got asked made the story that much more enjoyable
ReplyDeleteThis is such a cute way to ask someone to prom, and some of the best ideas are born out of procrastination. Such an adorable story
ReplyDeleteVery accurate choice of a title. Good choice of an idea. -Joshua Kidwell
ReplyDeleteGreat story! That's great she said yes. It is actually a pretty good idea haha.^
ReplyDelete~ Gregory Gomez
This is a really nice story. I enjoyed reading it!
ReplyDelete-Kasandra Felix
Aww this is so cute, I enjoyed reading it, Great Job!
ReplyDelete-Sirikanya Boonyanant
This story symbolizes the struggles of a guy trying to find a not cliche way to ask a girl to prom. This story is too real and too good. -Brian Rojas
ReplyDeleteI love it! What a wonderful short story and way to ask someone to prom. That Emmanuel guy sure is a keeper ;)
ReplyDelete-Emmanuel Huntspon
This is waaaaay better than the day before homecoming proposal. Now that's procrastination
DeleteI wish I would be asked to prom this way, who wouldn't want all that cake?? Cute story, just be aware of punctuation!
ReplyDeleteSo cute nd heart warming.
ReplyDeleteI liked the procrastination with a good ending, cute story!
ReplyDelete-Lorena Meza
Nice story and also great prom idea.
ReplyDeleteI really like how the simple diction allowed the piece to be very understanding and permitted it to convey the overall message of procrastination with a cute topic that could be very relatable for many.
ReplyDeleteThat was a life lesson right there just do it. Then at the same time something good came out of it. Good job.
ReplyDeleteAwww this was cute!Every girl's dream is to have a creative prom proposal!
ReplyDeleteWhat a cute story! It's lovely how this piece has a happy ending. I truly enjoyed all the twists and turns Emmanuel had to go through to ask Noelle out. Great piece!
ReplyDelete-Jerelle Medina
I can definitely relate!
ReplyDeleteQuick but very eventful with so much happening so quickly. It makes the story feel so spontaneous and all the more fun. Good Job! -Luke Riddington
ReplyDeleteReally sweet story, I enjoyed reading it.
ReplyDeleteI can really relate to this story because I'm procrastinating right now which has led me to wait till the last day to read all these wonderful stories, but keep up the great work! -Damian Echavarria
ReplyDeleteDefinitely can relate since I'm a habitual procrastinator but it doesn't always bode well for me even tho for the most part it does.
ReplyDeleteThis is a great piece maite. 😃👏🏻
ReplyDelete-anya
Haha, proves that good things can come to those who wait. I liked your story and it made me question whether or not I'll be in a similar situation when prom comes. Hopefully not, but I don't think I'd be down for the whole baking situation. Emmanuel deserves some props.
ReplyDeleteI like how you took something so relatable in students lives and turned it into a cute story. I also love how unlike most people with procrastination issues this story ended with a happy ending. Great job really cute.
ReplyDelete-Nahome Woldearegay
I agree with everyone in the comments, in that we can all relate to procrastination and that sometimes the most creative ideas are made out of procrastination. I wished the story was just slightly more drawn out as well as the character development/emotion , but you did a great job very creative and fun story!
ReplyDeleteI wish procrastination left me with a positive outcome like in your story. I love the promposal idea as well.
ReplyDeleteI wish procrastination left me with a positive outcome like in your story. I love the promposal idea as well.
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