A few summers ago, I went on a trip to Hawaii.
My family and I were really excited to go there because we’d never been. A
couple days after arriving we went to a small beach by our hotel because it was
recommended by one of the clerks in the front desk. On the shore I could see a
large cliff. I wondered if it were safe to jump because it didn’t look that
tall. I climbed it and surprisingly it was a lot higher than I expected. My dad
was with me and he kept telling me to jump. He said it would be fun. So I
agreed but I told him he had to jump first. After he jumped I knew there was no
backing out now. I had no choice unless I wanted to hear him rant about it when
we got back to our room. I looked over from the edge of the cliff and realized
how breathtaking the view was. I have to admit, it did scare me a little but
instead of thinking too hard about it I ran off and let go. For a brief moment
I felt as if all the worries I’ve ever had stayed there on that cliff. It felt
good to let go and not expect anyone to catch me.
Now, I understand most of you who are
reading this have thought long and hard about senior year and how it has almost
come to an end. Realistically speaking, there are only about 9 weeks or so
left. 9 short weeks until it’s real as Anderson likes to call it. I’ve got to
say I’ve had a pretty good run these past four years. High school has finally
come to an end and it can be intimidating at times. However, this is what we’ve
been preparing for. To finally be independent instead of dependent. I am
extremely thankful for the proper guidance I’ve been given. From my teachers
and friends to my two most important mentors, my parents. I can honestly say
I’m ready. I’m ready to take on life and be the best that I can be. And the
weirdest part is, this is really only the beginning. I mean we still have a
whole life ahead of us. There’s a whole world out there so I strongly recommend
you get to see as much as you can because you might not get another chance to.
This made me realize that high school will go by so fast and enjoy everything while you can. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed how you turned a seemingly fun and irrelevant memory into something that is actually very symbolic. My favorite quote was "For a brief moment I felt as if all my worries I've ever had stayed there on that cliff." Overall, I like the message that you put out there for all the seniors. Nice job!
ReplyDeleteI like how you connected your experience and something relevant to what's going on in most of our lives. Well written but maybe you should use some more descriptors for the scene just to make it more visual!
ReplyDeletethis is amazing advice and such an amazing way to look at high school it makes me want to look forward to my senior year, and makes me think about all the people ill come to meet and all the people who will influence me.thank you for allowing us to see a little bit of how u see things. being a freshman i feel like ill have a great next three years. goodluck on your new beginning love.
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job i want to go to Hawaii now lol but great job
ReplyDelete- Diamend De Silva
Wow, that anecdote went amazing with your message! I agree live life to the fullest, because we might not get another chance. I still can't believe we graduate in less than 30 days. It's like an emotional roller coaster for me.
ReplyDeleteI was not expecting this to be about senior year, I loved this! Time is flying by and it is good to remember to stop and smell the roses. Great job!
ReplyDeleteThis is really good. I enjoyed reading about the trip to Hawaii. but it is true about its real after high school. and I cant wait till im a senior.
ReplyDelete-Garrett Lachase