August 8th, 2014 was the day my family received the call that my aunt was in labor and it
was the scariest and happiest day of our lives. I remember being excited because I finally had a cousin on my moms' side, although the thing was that he wasn’t due for another two months. My family and I were very scared because we knew my cousin wasn’t fully developed. Once we were at the hospital my cousin had already been born and they named him Mason. He was in the neonatal intensive care unit and I remember seeing so many IV’s on him along with a breathing tube because he wasn’t able to breathe on his own. He was born being only a little bit over 2 pounds. We were told that they had a very slim chance of surviving due to how underdeveloped he was. It was a devastating day, although we knew he could do it and he started to prove us right.
My cousin began to get better and about two weeks later he was able to breathe on his own. Now he just had to be monitored along with having his feeding tube, but we hoped soon he would overcome that. Then September 20th came and he had to have surgery so he could have a piece of his intestine pokes out of his stomach which is how he could remove waste. This was another complication that was due to his underdevelopment. He now had to live with that until they could see he had improved medically. Finally, in October some good news happened, he
was much better and weighed 6 pounds now. Mason was now able to come home on October
19th, and my whole family was very excited. We couldn’t wait to spend time with him out of the
hospital. Of course, he did have frequent doctor appointments to just check upon him, but each
time we were told he was fine.
He hadn’t been admitted to the hospital for something serious for a while, but then in May 2015, he had another surgery. The surgery meant good news because they could now put his intestines back in and he would no longer need a colostomy bag. The surgery went great, but the next couple of days were extremely hard. On post-op day six Mason coded and his doctors had to work hard to revive him. Thankfully, he was able to be saved and he was rushed back into surgery to have a piece of his intestine out of his body again. After that, he was on a breathing tube, fully sedated, and he couldn’t eat on his own. At the end of the month, he received a blood transfusion which kept his heart from dropping and he was getting a lot better now, no longer needing to be intubated. Mason remained in the hospital to be monitored and he had the surgery once again to place his intestines back into his body. This time everything remained good, although during the surgery he had a G-Tube placed in his stomach which is how he would be fed. Three months have passed and he was doing better, he had some scary moments but he made it to be one year old. We were all so grateful that he survived everything he went through and in September he was finally home for good.
Mason is now five years old and healthy despite him still needing his G-tube. We also found out throughout the years that he is autistic and he has little to no vision in one eye but that hasn’t affected him in any negative way. Thankfully nothing medically serious has happened to him and we hope it continues to stay that way. The reason for telling Mason's story is because he
He hadn’t been admitted to the hospital for something serious for a while, but then in May 2015, he had another surgery. The surgery meant good news because they could now put his intestines back in and he would no longer need a colostomy bag. The surgery went great, but the next couple of days were extremely hard. On post-op day six Mason coded and his doctors had to work hard to revive him. Thankfully, he was able to be saved and he was rushed back into surgery to have a piece of his intestine out of his body again. After that, he was on a breathing tube, fully sedated, and he couldn’t eat on his own. At the end of the month, he received a blood transfusion which kept his heart from dropping and he was getting a lot better now, no longer needing to be intubated. Mason remained in the hospital to be monitored and he had the surgery once again to place his intestines back into his body. This time everything remained good, although during the surgery he had a G-Tube placed in his stomach which is how he would be fed. Three months have passed and he was doing better, he had some scary moments but he made it to be one year old. We were all so grateful that he survived everything he went through and in September he was finally home for good.
Mason is now five years old and healthy despite him still needing his G-tube. We also found out throughout the years that he is autistic and he has little to no vision in one eye but that hasn’t affected him in any negative way. Thankfully nothing medically serious has happened to him and we hope it continues to stay that way. The reason for telling Mason's story is because he
is the reason why I got inspired to be in the medical field. I was always at the hospital watching
everything they did to help him get better and it always fascinated me, although it was very hard
to watch because he is my family. I also was inspired by how the nurses and doctors treated us,
his family, they always made sure that we knew everything that was happening but also
comforted us in hard times. Not only did they build a relationship with Mason but also with us. I
loved seeing how they were with him even when they would just come in to visit him when they
didn't need to. This also caused me to be interested in pediatrics, work with children, because I
think being able to help a patient get better medically and then see them continue their life and
get older is very rewarding, although sadly that is not always the case. I have always enjoyed
helping others and even though it was a hard situation, I am happy that I was inspired and
continued to believe that my cousin could get through it. I realized that I want to be the type of
person who doesn’t treat an individual like another patient but takes the time to get to know them
and their family because from experience it makes a big difference. I will never forget how much
of a fighter my cousin is and how his story continues to inspire me and my future.
Thank you for sharing Masons story! I really loved what you have taken away from his situation, learning to enjoy caring for others and persevering through hard and difficult times.
ReplyDeleteI love the way you started and then expanded on your main story; it made your piece very interesting and made me want to keep reading. I also like that you tied the story back to how it has affected you and how you are using a negative experience to improve yourself. Overall I really enjoyed your piece.
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First off, thanks for sharing your story! I really appreciate you sharing this story with us, even though I'm sure it was all very scary at the time. So glad to hear that he's doing well, and it's also really inspiring that he was able to push through and that it made you want to study in the field of medicine. Best of luck to you and Mason! -- Cristian Herrera.
ReplyDeleteThis piece was exceptionally inspiring. It was really fun to read a story so dear and personal to you. Overall the writing was extremely well executed. It conveyed a lot of emotion; throughout you conveyed how fearful you were but also how hopeful. I also liked the fact that you wrote it like a roller coaster, every time something seemed to go wrong, Mason always overcame it. It really exemplified the amount of fight Mason had in him. -Nikki Cisneros
ReplyDeleteI loved Mason's story. I love how I could feel your love for your cousin through your writing and you conveyed a great deal of emotion in your writing. The ending where you brought the story back to yourself was also a great way to show how you are improving yourself. - Shrey Shah
ReplyDeleteThis story was really personal and let the reader into your life. It's inspiring that you didn't let this affect you negatively. I'm glad Mason's doing well!-Katryna Kerth
ReplyDeleteMonica, I love how you were able to show the readers the experience that you and your family had to experience such a scary moment for your cousin but finishing it with a positive message in how Mason's situation influenced your life in a big way. Very well written.
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your story, I really enjoyed how much you care for your family and how it inspired you to enter a medical field. - Christian O
ReplyDeleteI appreciate you for sharing a confidential, vulnerable story of yours. Mason is a very strong kid and he will continue to be inspirational to all. -Isabella Nakafu
ReplyDeleteFirst off thank you for sharing an inspiring story. Your cousin truly showed how much of a fighter he is. I'm glad that everything is ok with him and that you turned his situation into something that inspires you. Great Job!! ~ Alec Bailey
ReplyDeleteI love the way you wrote this and i personally connect to this story. First off it was very pleasing and easy to read and you knew every exact detail that occur so it helped me visualize it. Second i relate to this, i myself was a preemie being born 7 weeks early and so a lot of what happened to Mason occured to me. Great Job - Kylie Houghton
ReplyDeleteI appreciate you sharing your cousins story, it is very inspiring. He is so strong and this is an inspiring story to everyone. I wish you luck for entering the medical field, and hope Mason is doing well. Very well written, Good Job! -Johanna Medina
ReplyDeleteThis was a beautiful story. Your cousin is strong and I thank you for writing this story. It was well-written and the dates helped readers keep up with the timeline. ~Marisa J.
ReplyDeleteI agree. Helping others and seeing them live on healthily is one of the best things one can ever experience. I really hope this story continues to inspire others to be hopeful and optimistic because it definitely did for me. I wish you the best of luck in your career! Thank you for sharing this inspiring story with us.
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your family's experiences! Your inclusion of medical terminology and devices illustrates how much you care for your cousin. Your ability to turn a frightening scenario into something beneficial for society is inspiring and uplifting. -Diego Olmos
ReplyDeleteI love how open the piece was and to want to be more involved because of what you saw is inspiring.
ReplyDeleteSuch a powerful story. I'm so glad that you and your family are so strong and got through this. I love all the details and little things to make this story that much more powerful. -Christopher Vergara
ReplyDeleteIt's inspiring how your passion was created from such personal experiences. I admire you and your families support for each other during such harsh situations. Not only are you motivating yourself, but you are motivating your peers who wish to be in a the same work field as you. Thank you for taking the time to share the story of your strong cousin I wish you, and your family, the very best. - Saidy G.
ReplyDeleteI loved how you describing the events and you could tell you were there pretty much every step of the way, which is very admirable. Also, the ending in the story's connection to your life was beyond amazing and I'm overall glad that you found your true calling is to be in the medical field. Amazing Job!
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing Masons inspirational story! Your piece was so touching and I really hope he continues to strive everyday to be the best he can be. My favorite part of your piece was how you talked about pursuing your career in the medical field. Overall, Beautiful piece! - Lauren Valencia
ReplyDeleteThank you Monica for sharing this story with us, it takes a lot of courage and strength to discuss and even post topics like these and you did it beautifully. I love how you mentioned in the end that this is what inspired you to be in the medical field, seeing all the help that went towards helping baby Mason was very inspiring to you and is very inspiring to us as readers. Amazing job.
ReplyDeleteI admired multiple elements of this piece: the structure, word choices, and detail provided for a powerful, dramatic, and emotional experience to read.
ReplyDelete- Andrew Kim
Your piece was so inspiring that I feel like I can do anything, thank you so much for your braveness!
ReplyDelete-Brandon Santos
Thank you for writting this and sharing masons story. This piece brought me to tears im very glad to hear that Mason is okay now. It is inspring that this got you intrested in the medical field and you ae very brave and compassinate for always being by his side. Thank you for sharing this piece
ReplyDeleteMy sister works in neonatal care and this blows my mind not only by the miraculous recovery that Mason has but the realization as to why my sister says her job is hard yet enjoyable. The work may be alot but the feeling you've had of hope and happiness is something that she shares too and is why she loves her job. Amazing job and I hope you succeed in your future career.
ReplyDelete-Kahea DePonte
Mason's story is truly inspiring and heart-warming and it is proof that having hope in difficult situations can have the most amazing outcome and I'm glad to hear that neither your family nor Mason never gave up despite the situation.
ReplyDeleteThis was an amazing story for me, this truly brought emotions to me and allowed me to see how truly fragile and precious life is and how we shouldn't be taking what we have for granted. Its truly motivating to me to see how you all stayed strong right by his side.
ReplyDeleteI really love how inspiring your story is. Your story shows a miraculous recovery of a strong baby. I really liked that you wanted to share your story with us and I hope Mason is okay.
ReplyDeleteThis is a very inspirational story how you all never lost hope and I appreciate you for sharing Mason's story, it shows that life is a gift and should not be taken lightly
ReplyDeleteWhat an amazing piece. I loved how you told the readers about your cousin through this narrative. I enjoyed how the manner in which the story was told was more casual in order to create a friendlier bond with the audience. This deepens the connection between the reader and the piece, which enhances its overall effect.
ReplyDelete- Danica Gopez, P.4
Your story is super touching and it inspired me a lot , its truly motivating to see that you guys stayed by his side and were strong for him. This showed me just how precious and fragile life is for us and that it can be all taken away so quickly.
ReplyDeleteThis story was a roller coaster. Your beautiful writing made us feel as if we were there with you. This work is thought provoking, as far as the futility of life, but it also has you sitting on the edge of your seat hoping everything will end well.
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