High School may be fun for some people and horrible for others. High School may even be
a mixture of both. For me it was a complete ride. It was full of realization, maturity, love, broken
hearts, surprises, phases, and many more. I walked into High School with one group of friends
and I am now about to exit high school with a whole different group of people. I see it as a roller
coaster. Full of twists, curves, and heart racing moments. Freshman and Sophomore year were
the worst because I looked like a potato and then came Junior year. Junior year was the year I
began to look like an average potato so it wasn’t that bad. I learned many things throughout
these years but the best thing that I high school was my addiction to music and all of the groovy
people that I met within the years. Senior has by far been my favorite year since it was the time I
truly went out of my way to go have fun! So go out and explore while you still can! The year is
still young just like we are. All those times I was depressed or happy didn’t stop me from being
who I truly am! The end of this ride is coming to an end and the start of another is about to
begin. Thank you to everyone who has made my high school years the most memorable years
in my lifetime. I cannot wait to start this next ride with you guys and the other people to come.
Short. simple. it's sweet and kind
ReplyDeleteThis narrative was really relatable, especially the part where you went from looking like a potato to a better potato, which I thought was very funny as well. -Fatima J.
ReplyDeleteI liked your story, super relatable and straight to the point. The potato thing was funny. -Ramsey Perez
ReplyDeleteI like how your narrative is very straight to the point but also informative. You included past and present experiences and I really enjoyed it.
ReplyDelete-Diana Flores
I loved this, although it was short it was straight to the point and showed exactly how i feel. Senior year is coming to an end but never stop having fun!
ReplyDeleteThis is a sweet story concerning your journey through high school. Seems more like an abstract idea though. Either or, very good!
ReplyDeleteThis perfectly summed up a lot of people's high school experience! You kept it extremely real and to the point. Great job on expressing not only how you felt about high school throughout the years but how you think people should handle it as well!
ReplyDeleteThis piece gets to the point and is very relatable, because senior year is our last year so a lot of people are trying new things this year. I enjoyed reading this piece it hit the nail right here.
ReplyDeletegreat relatable narrative and i'm glad I got to ride along with you!!
ReplyDeleteThis piece get straight to the point, but is so relatable and funny with the use metaphors and description. I love this and it is perfect as our high school experience is coming to a close.- Taren Thomas,Period 2
ReplyDeleteThis piece is relatable to me and my high school experience, it was short and you said what you needed to say without dragging it out. - Andrew Rodriguez
ReplyDeleteThis piece is so relatable to all of us, especially now as graduation approaches. For me, high school was a ride full of different surprises as well, and I feel that is true for many people. It's where many of us start to first discover ourselves. I liked the relevancy and timing of this piece as I'm sure we are all eager for graduation as seniors! -Kenneth Chen
ReplyDeleteI can relate to this on a spiritual level. This is a relatable piece for teens but especially students who are near the end of high school. Also I’m glad that you pulled yourself through and stayed positive.
ReplyDeleteSarah Skibby
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I can't help but feel accomplished reading this. We've all come a long way and have grown so much over these past years. Many things that happened to you happened to me. Reading this makes me feel positive and excited about the future.
ReplyDeleteThis piece is short & sweet. High school is definitely a ride but this is such a positive piece to end the year with.
ReplyDeletei loved how you didnt beat around the bush and went straight to the point, i find your piece very relatable. good job, i agree with this is our last year and live it up as much as you can,were all still young, yeah! hope you grow to be the potato you strive to be. - Natalee
ReplyDeleteThis piece is very relatable with all the different emotions you described. You also made me giggle about the potato thing because I describe myself like that too. Great Job! - Jada cruz
ReplyDeleteThis piece is so relatable. I’m ending high school with a whole new set of friends and I’m so glad and thankful for that. High school is exactly how you described it “full of towpaths, curves, and heart racinging movements.”
ReplyDeleteI like things when there just straight to the point and this was it. Very relatable and good story overall. Keep up the good work!
ReplyDelete-Michael Hernandez
I enjoyed this narrative because I think we can all relate to it, especially with the end approaching so rapidly. I'm gonna take in your positive energy revolving around this time and apply it to life. Thanks for the motivation!
ReplyDelete- tommy Lemelle
I loved it since you made it relateable and kept it short and keepong motivation in it great piece.
ReplyDeletei really loved the piece because it was short, sweet and also very relatable. -lexy m
ReplyDeleteLove how you covered quality information in a way that is short and pinpoints to the idea you are trying to go at
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