School is the most important element in a young person’s life, it is the very fodder that promotes growth and innovation for the youth, and shapes them for the rest of their life.. People in America experience 13 years of required schooling and are encouraged to do at least another four years in college. Some people spend even more time in college, school is the one constant in a young person’s life and plays a huge part in the way the youth live their lives. Schooling is not only occurring in America, but rather it is a worldwide phenomenon that is an essential part of life for the youth. Whether it’s homeschool, private school, or public school, people in every country are attending schools. Although every country has schools not all education centers are created equal, and each one has a different way of managing their school system and running their curriculum. I had the privilege of interviewing a foreign exchange student who recently came to California from Italy about one month ago, his name is Federico Battaglia and he is a senior this year at Etiwanda High School. Federico talked to me about his former school life and taught me about the high school system in Italy, and how it compared to American learning institutions. American schools are not like schools across the world, these education centers feature extracurriculars, and although they seem normal for the people who live here, others might find it strange. In America there are sports teams, rallies, dances, and after school clubs. Although these are common in high schools across the nation this is not common in Italy and it is not featured in the high schools. If one wants to play sports they must play outside of school. Dances, rallies, and clubs are not offered. The only clubs high school students go to are dancing clubs, since they are allowed to go clubbing at 16. Mr. Battaglia plays basketball and he is quite good but unlike most American high school basketball players he did not play for the school because basketball was not offered. Instead, he played in a league outside of his school. Typically students here wake up around 78 am and attend school Monday through Friday. In Italy school is from 7 am to 12am and is from Monday through Saturday. High School is defined by either freshman, sophomore, junior or senior. Italians define it as year one, year two, year three, year for or year five. Italians have five years of high school. In Federico’s case he can either decide to return to Italy or attend college in America. Just like in America Italian schools are from September to June and lasts approximately two hundred and twenty days. The curriculum itself is pretty much like the American version. Except in Italy students learn up to 9 subjects in one year, and their schedule changes every few days. For example a student will have their first four subjects on one day, and their next 5 subjects on another day, they ran on a block schedule. Americans typically know one language, English, and although there are courses offered that teach foreign languages students are not given a very good education on the study of languages. In the next 5 years the students will probably forget the information they learned in their foreign language. In Italy, as well in other countries, students are offered an in depth language study curriculum that guarantees a student will know that language fluently by the end of their study. Federico knows four languages, English, Italian, French, and Spanish. His language skills are perfect and he is completely fluent. Federico describes American schools as “easy” and then described to me what made Italian schools so difficult. There are more subjects to be learned at Italian schools, and tests are not only written but oral as well, which Federico feels to be exceptionally difficult.
In interviewing Federico I inadvertently discovered why we are behind in all subjects in comparison to other countries. I discovered we use time inefficiently and we waste our resources on items that we do not really need, and spend copious amounts of time focusing on the irrelevant tasks. If our schools are inefficient and subpar in comparison to Italy then why did he come? The answer is simple. Federico came to sound like a native English speaker, to play basketball, and to come to the land of opportunity, California. I learned from this interview that our schools need a complete and total transformation, and we should possibly adopt methods from other countries in our to further ourselves. We have the potential to be great, and instead we are wasting our resources.
It's cool that you were able to interview someone outside of the United States and gain an new perspective, the information in your writing/article/thing sheds additional light on the knowledge previously had about foreign countries. It was a good read and flowed nicely.
ReplyDeleteI thought this was very interesting to hear from the viewpoint of someone who is experiencing our school system for the first time. We're so used to being at Etiwanda that we never really see it from the view of a newcomer, let alone one from another country. nice job :)
ReplyDeleteI learned something new! Good job describing, very informative. Also, I see you left something to think about at the end, a sort of catalyst for action. I respect that :)
ReplyDeleteinteresting piece, it's definitely something not many people consider. Our school is great when it comes to the different opportunities offered, but like you said there are still ways to improve. Did you have any specific ideas as to making more use out of our resources?
ReplyDeleteWow I never knew that's how it was outside of the U.S. it seems very hard thank you for sharing this information this is well written it has an official feel to it nice job.
ReplyDeleteI wasn't expecting this but I liked it, I've also been talking to a German foreign exchange student and Luxembourgian (is that how you say it?) exchange student and there are definitely a ton of differences, apparently we're not as smart as we thought. Anyway writing wise it is beautiful as always.
ReplyDeleteI like how the reader is able to see the school system from a different viewpoint which also provides us with feedback on what needs to be changed and what should be kept the same. I knew the American system was behind in education, but I did not realize that we were this lackluster compared to other nations. Very insightful piece, keep up the good work :>
ReplyDeleteThis essay was very informative and flowed very well. I learned much about the schools in Italy and had much change in my opinion of our schooling. I thank you for informing me as a student and as a person of this great ordeal.-Joshua Kidwell
ReplyDeleteVery nice job Sade! I loved the fluidity, description and how you compared a specific education system to ours. Definitely broadened my view and made me think of whats beyond the norm we're used to, and how we could do so much to improve. -Aileen Munoz
ReplyDeleteThis was really good! I completely agreed with everything you said, and it was cool that you got the perspective of someone from another country as well. Etiwanda is pretty inviting but as a former "new-student" myself it is kind of overwhelming to meet and interact with so many new people all of a sudden. Really nice commentary and great flow of the writing!!
ReplyDeleteThis has made me realize some important task i need to develop skills in, because not everyone has what we have. I also knew and foreign exchange student, her name is Anna she came from Germany and to be honest made me think about visiting out their sometime, different isn't as bad as it looks. If they can do it why cant we. Any way nice writing i love it.
ReplyDelete- Janier Ajila
I liked this piece. I went to school in the Philippines and it was somewhat the same. I remember in 6th grade I had 11 classes and I had to learn tagalog, english, and chinese. I did not know it was like that in Italy as well.
ReplyDeleteThis was very informative and well put together. I liked how you gave suggested why the U.S. was so behind in being productive. Good Job :)
ReplyDeleteIt is really amazing to see different aspect of education. It enables me to see our strengths and weaknesses, and to appreciate education from all over the world.
ReplyDeleteGreat Piece! I very much enjoyed the fluidity and content of your work and found it extremely interesting to learn about the differences in the Education system across the globe! Very nice job!
ReplyDelete-Maddie Alegria (p.4)
This piece was very informative about other schooling systems which is really interesting to think about. I like your added comparison about how the schools differ and share your opinion about change for bettering our nations schooling. The flow of the piece seemed abrupt in some places where there were imputed sentences that seemed like it could have been conjoined with the previous sentence instead of 2 separate thoughts. Overall the material was engaging and left me wondering about how schooling would be if we shared other countries systems which is interesting in thought.
ReplyDeleteVery insightful. I feel like we as Americans are so trapped within our own world that we forget that there are parts of the world that are indeed advancing further than we are. I definitely see why it is that America is so lacking and I hate that we aren't offered or as encouraged to do our best compared to those of other countries like Italy. Imagine if we all knew more than two languages how much more well rounded we'd be and it'd be a great opportunity to expand our knowledge of other cultures rather than just the American one. It's nice to be aware of the various differences and your writing style incorporated the interview section very well. Good job!
ReplyDelete- Alyssa Tandoc
This piece not only compared the differences between the educational systems in two different countries, it also explained why one is behind the other. This was a very informative piece, good job!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed the layout of your report, the back to back comparisons helped to really grasp the difference between the two countries. I learned a lot that I was unaware of and I'm glad that you were able to interview such an interesting person!
ReplyDeleteWe almost never think about the world outside of our social circle much less the lives of people around the world. Very informative piece - Kamilah McMillon
ReplyDeleteThis is brilliant! It's not often that we reflect on the education system in other countries as we're so preoccupied with ourselves and our own self-interests. I think this piece brings to light a flaw in the American education system that we've never considered before. Now, you've got me thinking about methods we can incorporate to prevent our education from becoming a waste! Plus, I learned something new!
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I really liked this piece Sade. The information was presented very clearly and the piece gave an in depth look into how school in Italy functions. By connecting the Italian school system to how Etiwanda is operated I was intrigued the whole time I was reading. I really like how, at the end, you challenge readers to change help start a change in their local school systems. ~August Byant
ReplyDeleteWow! Thank-you for teaching me something new. Not only was this piece informative but also eye opening to how our schools differ to those in Italy. It also made me think about all the other things students in the United States would accomplish if school were run like those of Italy. Very well written.
ReplyDeleteSounds like an awesome experience to be able to interview frederico. On point analysis as well.
ReplyDeleteGreat Job! It was amazing to know about the differences with schools in other countries. IT was also great to know how the experiences and point of views of another student.
ReplyDeleteEffectively expressed the point without being too wordy or boring. I definitely feel more aware of the differences in the two country's schooling as well. Often times we hear that America is now behind in the way it is educating it's youth as a whole but this outlines some specific problems and even possible solutions. The interview adds an extra snippet of intrigue, job well done!
ReplyDelete-Kayla Salas
I love that you used personal reflection on your own education, as well as opinions from someone with a totally different education. It really made me think that many of us do not know about the world outside of our tiny bubbles and it made me interested to learn more about other countries. It always amazes me how when people from other countries come to Etiwanda High School for the first time they think it is amazing because a lot of the time we take for granted all of the amazing opportunities and education tools right in front of us! Amazing job!
ReplyDelete-Chloe Hopkins
I was thinking the same thing! I shared a similar enlightening experience when I visited Spain last year. I could not believe how different the day to day lives of our peers across the pond could be! Anyway...I love how reflective this piece is, but I feel like I lost some of its depth along the way with all the short sentences. None the less, it got a great point across, nice work!
DeleteGreat peice! I love the comparisons and contrasts you made throughout the peice. It was very informative and interesting. It's cool to see how others live around the world and how different it is compared to here. I've also met Frederico and he is a cool dude. Again, excellent peice!
ReplyDelete-Karyna Gandara
It is indeed true that schools around the world are completely different from the schools here in the U.S. You dwelled on the topic very well and your experience was wonderfully written! Perhaps more schools here in the U.S. can contribute to changing or adding other courses that can effectively make a difference. I know a foreign exchange student from Germany who is a freshman at Etiwanda and he says the same thing about American schools being easy. Very interesting!
ReplyDelete- Gregory Gomez (P.3)
I really enjoyed all of the information that was presented throughout the reading and the constant comparison of the American school to other schools in different countries. -Brian Rojas
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading this because, as it opened your eyes, it opened mine as well on the topic of international education. Great job!
ReplyDeleteI always heard foreign exchange students tell me how different school is compared to America, and it's fairly interesting how much Federico had to say about Etiwanda High School in comparison to his school in Italy. Your piece of writing is very influential for most teenagers in America, because we constantly complain about our six classes that they're hard, but turns out we don't know how easy we have it. Your piece of writing is inspiring to see what else the world has to offer.
ReplyDelete- Diana Godinez
I loved this. I've heard of Federico and how he's a new student to our school and it was nice that you gave your reader a little story on one of their peers. I felt this was informational as well and agree with you on how America's education system is lacking in certain areas of our academic criteria. Overall i thought this was well written and you did a good job on writing about something your readers can relate to. Great job
ReplyDelete-Celeste Martinez
It was amazing to know about the differences between schools in other countries.
ReplyDelete-Ashley Lowman
This was really informative and it really opened my eyes to way things are run in Italy. I hope the very best for your friend in his adventures, here in America!
ReplyDeleteThe different perspective on our school system was very informative. The comparisons between the two different systems bring up good questions and a call to action. Very well written!
ReplyDelete-Lorena Meza
This is very information about schools in different countries. It is pretty interesting to know the differences of schools in different areas of the world. It is also really cool that you were able to talk to someone from a different country and be able to use his experience in your writing.-Kaelin Bone
ReplyDeleteI am so glad that i have learned more about how the education system in other countries work, namely Italy. I fount your piece very intriguing and full of very insightful views on how inefficient our county is in the education of our youth, and made me realize that these are one of the most important times in our lives, and what we do in school today can shape our destiny for the rest of our lives. Loved It!!!
ReplyDeleteIt was very interesting reading about how the Western School System has shortened hours and more extra curricular activities compared to the Italian School System. Reading that a foreign exchange student had come to California in order to experience extra curricular activities and come to an area where more opportunities are available is intriguing.
ReplyDelete~Ryan Kang
I can totally relate to you and your curiosity for school systems other than our own. It's very cool that you were able to discover new things by talking to someone versus searching it on the internet!
ReplyDelete-Marissa Putrick
Wow! What a great perspective to be allowed to look in on and who knew we were so different. It was pretty cool to get this insight into a completely different way of living especially when its something we never seek out to do. Also just with the beginning part of the work it started to get a little repetitive when it came to the use of the word school, I know there aren't many alternative words but maybe had it been placed in sentences farther apart from each other it would've flowed better.
ReplyDelete-Reymie Morris
The comparison of different countries and systems further your argument in regards to how we can use them as examples to make or education system better and more efficient. I feel that your interview with Frederico only shined light towards the negative side of the American curriculum, which can be justified due to our own experiences within the system as well. Overall, your argument was supported by genuine fact from first-hand foreigners as well. As a side note, I would provide more thorough evidence in order to strengthen your argument towards reform of U.S. schooling.
ReplyDeletevery interesting and informative. it really makes you question the efficiency of the current education system. great job.
ReplyDeleteI really loved how you offered us a chance to read an interview instead of a story. It gives something new into the mix of posts for this month. The interview was very informative and i'm pretty sure everyone who read this learned something new!
ReplyDeleteI love how you wrote about school and compared it to Italian school. It was very interesting and I learned a lot.- Camille B.
ReplyDeleteThat is really awesome that you were able to interview a student form another part of the world. I liked that just in this piece I can get a rough idea of schools in Europe.
ReplyDelete-Oyinda Akinnusi
I like how you contrasted the schools in America with the schools in Italy, it was really interesting to read about all the differences. I also like how you were able to get the opinion of someone who has actually experienced a different learning system. Nice job :)
ReplyDelete-Kathlyn Juarez
It is interesting to learn about how school systems differ in curriculum. I really liked how you gave all the interesting evidence then at the end came forward and called for change; it made the piece impactful with being preachy which is something i really appreciate. You did really well!
ReplyDelete-Luke Riddington
I admire your detail to our schooling system. I also appreciate your statement at the end of the article proposing things we should do in the future to promote change. It's very inspiring to know that you pay specific attention to the areas we need to improve in and that you treated your interaction with Federico as a learning experience. -Brittany Hackney
ReplyDeleteIt was really great to see how is school outside the states and to see the major differences between the two. Great Job.
ReplyDeleteThis piece was nice ! Good to let the reader see from a student position -Paige jackson
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed that you went out of your way to reach out to this student. I had no idea the curriculum was that rough in another country. This had made me want to reach out to other foreign exchange student to compare your data to see really how different our world is. I feel that exploring another country for school would be a very great experience that would change a life for the better. Great research!
ReplyDeleteThis piece was nice, it shows that the U.S. should meet at a half way point between the way schools are run here and in Italy to create a balance between schooling and extracurricular activities to increase the benefit for students that are involved.
ReplyDelete-Damian Echavarria
I enjoyed this piece, it's interesting to read about all the differences from the two places.
ReplyDelete-Maite
I find it very interesting to learn more about the educational system in other countries! I think it's great to expand our knowledge of different cultures and perspectives. By doing so we become a lot more aware of the world around us which then allows us to build our character.
ReplyDelete- Sam Nugroho
This was actually a really great and very interesting read! I love how you were able to interview an Italian exchange student at our school and tell us about what school life is like in Italy. I found it very interesting that Italian schools are so much more different than American schools, and how their schedules differ from day to day. Overall a very informative read! - Allyssa Flores
ReplyDeleteI really like how you used this experience with someone from Italy to expose how messed up our school system is. Even though everyone always says how corrupt the system is it was good to actually have a comparison to see the difference and how we can make it better.
ReplyDeleteI think this piece really helps show what school is from different perspectives other than our own and how it is elsewhere. I was able to learn something new! Good job.
ReplyDelete- Alan Viernes
Great Insight on how the education systems of two different societies compare and contrast in many varying way. Great Work Sade!
ReplyDeleteHahha, now I've understand why people wanted to come to study in America. Anyway your writing was awesome!
ReplyDelete-Anita Kong
I love this style of writing and learning from a real life example. Great job!
ReplyDeleteI liked how you wrote about a topic that everyone especially us students can really relate to. I liked how you talked about how other schools in other places run things and how they differ from how we are used to what school is. It was very informative and interesting to read.
ReplyDelete-Jeremiah Eugenio
I absolutely love this! I don't how to explain it but this story just caught my attention.
ReplyDelete-Anita Kong
Really interesting thoughts on the schooling systems of America and other countries like Italy! The argument was strong but I feel like you could have used some outside information to better your argument and confirm that the American School System is way behind many other countries.
ReplyDeleteThis interview was thought-provoking to say the least. I love that you didn't simply type up information about the differing school styles but rather used the information you received from the interview to formulate an argument about American school systems. By doing this, you showed more maturity in your writing and more effectively kept my attention on the topic and the connections you were making. Also great job on choosing a relevant topic for your audience.
ReplyDeleteThis gave me a great insight to education in foreign countries. American schooling does have a heavy focus on non-essential skills and it's reflected greatly in our society.
ReplyDeleteYour story was very interesting! I enjoyed reading the story and I liked it. I went to school in Thailand and it is the same as the school in Italy but instead of taking 9 classes, we have to take 12-14 classes every year. We have to learn English, Chinese, and Thai. I love American school better because I can choose what I want to learn but in Thailand we can only choose one and I think American school isn't behind another country. So, thank you for sharing, it is nice to see the difference between American school and Italian school. -Sirikanya Boonyanant
ReplyDeleteThe cultural comparison throughout the entire piece was excellent because you compared and contrasted each of the topics side by side with one another which made it very clear how much different our schools are from the schools in Italy. I really enjoyed reading this piece because it is completely relate able as high school students. Very interesting, I was intrigued throughout reading, very nice work! -Sienna Carbajal
ReplyDeleteSade, what an absolutely breathtaking piece. I gasped, I cried, and I felt like a member of a sub-par and frivolous education system. However, I would've liked to hear more direct quotes from the fine young Italian man. His actual words would add more emotional depth to the interview!
ReplyDeleteInteresting read! I have many friends throughout the world and we discuss occasionally about the differences between American and say, British schools. I think it is fascinating how different each is, for example, how in the Middle East, they do not have any schools that mingle the two genders. I noticed a few grammatical and spelling errors, but everyone makes mistakes, I recommend next time, breaking it up into multiple paragraphs rather than just one large one! Either way, wonderful job, and I hope you keep writing!
ReplyDeleteGood job describing all the different types of school out there that all have different types of systems and rules.
ReplyDeleteThis piece makes me want to appreciate and criticize the school system we have in this country, never really knew how it was outside of our place, I barely know how it works now. Thanks for the info!
ReplyDeleteI think that it was a really cool thing for you to get to know a foreign exchange student and learn so much about how the education system in America differs than those of other countries. I agree that its time our school system had some changes to better compete with other countries. Nice job :)
ReplyDeletewhat inspired you to right this story and what was your feelings about this short story
ReplyDelete- Aurelius Valdez
Lovely insight on foreign education. Some grammatical and spelling errors, but nonetheless very interesting!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed this. I had a foreign exchange friend from Sweden who loved the people at Etiwanda, but questioned the education system. I agree that we need some change, but that's also what Common Core is trying to achieve. Imagine, some people already find Common Core to be difficult, even though it's nowhere close to international standards.
ReplyDeleteVery humbling and informative. I understood that other countries have a different level of education but this provided a greater perspective. Very well written!
ReplyDelete-Blue Andrade
Its always great to see things in anothers eyes.
ReplyDeleteIt's crazy how we as american students get caught up and accustomed to our average education, we believe we have it hard but in reality thanks to your article, it made me realize that our education is quite the minimum and we could be doing so much more. Agreed, our school systems calls for a change.
ReplyDeleteStrong ending sentence. I completely agree.
ReplyDeleteI'm actually a classmate of Frederico, I sit right behind him. I was very interested in how things are in Italy and its educational systems. This was very insightful.
ReplyDeleteGreat job! I really loved how this article was all school related and just proved how important school really is in a person's life, because not many people see that these days. I totally agree with every word in this article.
ReplyDeleteI liked it because it was different from the others. Good use of information that backed up every statement you made. Strong use of evidence. Good job.
ReplyDeleteI love how you took time and gained a new perspective on schooling by an interview. Any one could of just googled "Italy school vs American schools". I enjoyed how you kept contrasting his school to Etiwanda, because it left me to rethink the entire school system. Any way great text and thank you for the new insight!
ReplyDelete-Nahome Woldearegay
Its intimidating how mature your writing is, I thought it was thought provoking and insightful you shared someone's personal look to have opportunities here in America with resoucres that he wouldn't take for granted as so many of us do.
ReplyDeleteThe new perspective is refreshing for it provided insight on the differences in the school systems. It was descriptive and well written.
ReplyDelete-Jerelle Medina
It was interesting to observe your views on our school system, and your outside information coming from the foreign exchange student supported your argument. The only things that hurt you were some of you're grammatical errors. I feel you could've made your argument stronger if you provided specific reasons on how we are wasting resources.
ReplyDeleteVery insightful! In a way, it makes me appreciate the education system of different countries. I also find it very true when you stated, it wouldn't hurt to look towards other countries as academic examples.
ReplyDelete-Korbie Sevilla
I think it's awesome how we get to have a foreign exchange students at our school and I like how you Told us how school is different here in America than other countries.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your take on the interview; analyzing the conversation rather than simply allowing readers to listen in on it. That allowed for your own voice to show through the work, and made thoughtful connections to our own schooling. I would however, focus on syntax, combing smaller sentences for a more eloquent approach.
ReplyDeleteI really found this interesting. I liked the comparison between two different cultures. I can see the differences between USA and other countries and it opens up my eyes to the real world.
ReplyDeleteThanks for informing me about this wonderful person that we have attending our school. This is a well-written article that could go in the school's journalism website.
ReplyDeleteHey I know Freddie! I love how you incorporated your opinion according to facts of education in Italy.
ReplyDeleteI guess we all don't understand how easy we have it until we hear it from a foreign perspective but at the same time, we are lucky to have so many extra-curricular opportunities. Most Americans are completely oblivious to how other countries run their school systems and we can all definitely agree that there are pros and cons to both. There is a lot we can learn to attempt to improve our own school system for the better.
ReplyDeleteA very educational and unique point of view. I love learning about how other people live around the world.
ReplyDeletei much enjoyed this piece because it was very educational and made me realize and ignorant I am to schooling outside my standard community.
ReplyDeleteI didn't know that the education system operated so differently in other nations as far as extracurricular activities! I'd thought that rallies, high school sports and school clubs were a universally understood aspect of typical student life, but this piece really brings a lot of insight to the table.
ReplyDelete-Brandon Lim
I love the fact that this is like an informational piece. It's like I learned something new for today!
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