The Beautiful Game
No words can describe the feelings I receive when I step onto a soccer field. The smell of the dirt and the freshly cut grass, the butterflies in my stomach, the prayer that is repeated one hundred times in my head, a team I could call my own; and when that whistle blows, that’s when I instantly know I am home. Soccer has been a talent, and an accomplishment I have acquired for most of my life, which I still wish to carry on for more years to come. Soccer has shaped my life ever since I started playing the beautiful game, and has turned me into the persistent, diligent, faithful person I am today. All these qualities I now currently uphold are all needed to be successful in soccer, and I have learned to take my knowledge of the game, and connect it to the real world. I am proud to say soccer has not only transformed me physically, but mentally as well. The word teamwork is very important in all sports, especially soccer. This sport has brought me friendships, and close bonds with all my teammates. Teamwork is not only important in soccer, but in the real world as well. To succeed in life, many have to learn how to cooperate with others, and learn that the more people who learn to work together as a team find that the job gets done, and accomplished more efficiently. Soccer is a great example for that because when I first joined my Riverside Impact team, I instantly knew I was devoted to that team, and will always give it my all to never let them down. Everyone relies on every single player on a team to do their job, and to do it well, otherwise the team won’t be as strong as many others. It never takes the effort of one player to make a goal, it takes the effort of the whole team to make a goal, and win a game. “I’ve worked too hard and too long to let anything stand in the way of my goals. I will not let my teammates down and I will not let myself down.” My teammates and I live by this quote said by Mia Hamm, the best woman soccer player to ever live. We feel that statement defines us as a team, and reminds us that the name in the front of our jerseys will always be more important than the ones on our backs. I see my teammates as my second family; we see each other five days a week, have a close bond that can never be fully described, go through hard times together, and may sometimes disagree with one another, however in the end we will always be faithful to one another, and always have each other’s back no matter what is thrown at us. I am proud to call myself a soccer player, because this amazing sport has taught and directed me on how to live life successfully. Soccer is my comfort zone, whenever I feel overwhelmed, hurt, or have too much on my mind I love to just go outside and let the lovely game take over my mind, and leave my emotions on the field. I can honestly say I have learned about life with a ball at my feet, and am glad I have not learned about it any other way.
What a great comparison of a sport to our everyday lives. Also, what a great sport to be involved in. Well done.
ReplyDeleteI could really feel your passion and love of the game! I used to play as well and so I know how much of a connection you need to have with the sport in order to enjoy it good job man! I loved your tone!
ReplyDeleteIf you have time look up the video titled "Why we play games" by VSauce on Youtube ... I truly believe it's worth your time. I find it interesting how you apply the lessons of soccer to the complexity of every day life.
ReplyDeleteI really loved your last sentence. I loved how you tied in how your love of the game has taught you about life and I loved how the wording flowed so easily :)
ReplyDeleteGreat job! I really loved how you brought the story together it flowed perfectly :)
ReplyDeletethis was a great way in showing how a sport can help you grow, the teamwork and etc is all good way of encouraging and becoming better good job.
ReplyDeleteVery great writing! This post couldnt have come at a better time as I am finishing my time as a volleyball player. Reading this I have realized how important sports have been and how much they have shapped me in my life. I see know that even the struggles I have experienced from sports have brought me out as a more well rounded person. Im glad you have had a positive experience. Thanks for sharing your story!
ReplyDeleteYour story brings out your personality and readers can understand your more based on this. It really brings out your best qualities such as determination, loyalty, athletic, hard working, etc.
ReplyDeleteI can relate to this because I don't know what I would do without a sport that I can dedicate my life to. It's the best feeling and this was a great way to put that feeling into words. Great job!
ReplyDeleteI had mentioned in another commentary about soccer to, i know the hard work and dedication it takes for the team to strive and its very hard work with lots of dedication. I love the way you described soccer great short story!
ReplyDeleteThis was really interesting and made me want to get involved in sports more! good job!
ReplyDeleteI know that rush you feel when you playing soccer. It can't explained with words, but seeing how you wrote your feelings towards soccer is probably the best explanation. Great job!
ReplyDelete"'I’ve worked too hard and too long to let anything stand in the way of my goals. I will not let my teammates down and I will not let myself down.' My teammates and I live by this quote said by Mia Hamm, the best woman soccer player to ever live. We feel that statement defines us as a team, and reminds us that the name in the front of our jerseys will always be more important than the ones on our backs." STAHP IT. THIS IS SO GREAT. WOW thank you. I never really had that large family, group experience and never thought i was missing out but now i can say i truly appreciate what you guys are. The idea just makes me so happy, i, oh so cute, thank you for sharing:)
ReplyDeleteyour really dedicated to soccer i can relate to this because im in track and i have the same feelings you have but a little different towards my sport
ReplyDeleteThis made me miss soccer so much! You really made me think back and remember how much fun it was to be on a team and be dedicated to the sport. Thank you for writing this!
ReplyDeleteI really love how you thoroughly expressed yourself in the sport you adore so much! This shows how much you are very dedicated in sports and shows how good of a lady athlete you achieve in the game! Thank you for sharing your personality, it really got me thinking of how people look up to things that they love to do which is their own place called their "comfort zone".
ReplyDeleteIts great to hear about your passion in your own words. Its always an amazing thing when some one comes across their passion in life an to watch them take a hold of it and really grow with it is a wonderful thing!
ReplyDeletei can really relate to your love for soccer, because i myself love the sport as well. all of the things you said about soccer and how it makes you feel, i felt as if i was writing this. its great to know that someone appreciates the sport i love as much as i do! Great Job!
ReplyDeleteI really respect how soccer provides as an inspirational outlet to your life; it goes beyond kicking a ball into a net as there are various values such as teamwork branched throughout one sport. Athletes are like artists where they create their own playing style, more so, like art, you are able to express freely the emotions that excitingly build in a game.
ReplyDeleteI LOVE THIS SO MUCH. I can relate to the fullest with your story. This is literally my life except for being on the Riverside team. I love the empowerment in your voice when you describe soccer. You story is so relatable and and enjoyable to read. I also love the sentence where you said, "We feel that statement defines us as a team, and reminds us that the name in the front of our jerseys will always be more important than the ones on our backs." Very clever.
ReplyDeleteI can totally relate to this because i am an athlete! i feel the same emotion and passion you have for soccer but for basketball. It's always refreshing to hear about sports.
ReplyDeleteI loved your story very much! It reminded me of my swim team and I and what makes a team truly be successful no matter if they win or lose.
ReplyDeleteawww now I want to play soccer even though I've never played and am probably terrible lol. nice detailing of the game and how it relates back to your life. good job
ReplyDeleteHaha, so many soccer story. Again, I wish I loved a sport as much as you do! But it's a beautiful passion and the syntax used is outstanding.
ReplyDeleteI feel like this would be a good thing to turn in for a college essay. Very well done!
ReplyDeleteSoccer really is an amazing sport! great comparison between life and the game! good job
ReplyDeletethis is real passion. the story runs smoothly and kept me very interested. this honestly inspired me to do better once premier league starts this winter.
ReplyDeleteYour narrative is phenomenal. I admire your personally recognized qualities you possess as an individual because of the sport, in your case is not just a sport, but a passion.
ReplyDeleteI love the quote you and your team live your life by! This story is very inspiring, thank you^.^
ReplyDeleteI love the part whee you said, "...the name on the front of our jerseys is more important than the one on the back". This line beautifully ties your paper together. Great job!
ReplyDeleteI'm not much of a soccer person... or a sports person... But I really liked this.
ReplyDeleteI love your passion for soccer! I love the last sentence it really shows positivity with no regrets and how soccer is not just a sport for you but a lifestyle. Well done!
ReplyDeletei can really relate to your passion for soccer because that is how i feel about track! I love how i am not the only dedicated to the sport i love either
ReplyDeleteYour dedication to soccer is really brought out in this read. The connection to shaping our character and your passion for soccer really made this story amazing. Your narration also brought out conviction which I felt added the extra push of inspiration to be committed and compassionate about the things that we love.
ReplyDeleteI love the way you wrote this because I can feel the passion you have for soccer and it brings back memories from when we played together.
ReplyDeleteI absolutely love and agree with the way you described the relationship and bond you have with your teammates. What really stood out to me was the fact that you talked about that although you guys may disagree and butt heads, when you are on the field playing side by side, helping eachother for a common goal, you guys are back to being teammates and part of a family, and none of that irrelevant stuff matters. I love it. Beautiful piece, your passion was felt through every line!
ReplyDeleteWow! I love how soccer has really helped form the person you are today. I have had a similar experience in my life and realize how important one constant thing in life can be and how it can affect you.
ReplyDeleteI really like how this piece showed your feeling toward soccer. Just from reading this piece i can tell how much time and energy you put in soccer.
ReplyDeleteThis piece of writing sounds so blissful and passionate. I also liked that you chose this topic to write about because now alot of us got to see the ambitious and hard working side of you.
ReplyDeleteYESS! This is my life all written down! I really respect how much you love the sport and are willing to drop anything you are doing to go and step onto that field! When you said stepping onto the field made you feel at home I go chills up my spine! GREAT JOB!
ReplyDeleteI believe that the way we connect with Sports and other activities is unique to each other and the way we connect is awesome. I enjoy how you described the passion for the game and also how you set that optimistic tone and inspiring mood for the reader. I also enjoy sport specially swimming its the only way I can forget of the troubles around me and ironically as I look to the bottom of the pool feel like I can fly. A childhood dream cone true. And thank you for giving us that glimpse of your life.
ReplyDeleteThe passion you have for soccer is shown here, as Nia said I have much respect for you, really good job comparing it to life, I am not a huge soccer guy but I enjoyed this narrative
ReplyDeleteIt's good to have something in your life that you love to do and are passionate about. I'm happy that soccer is that for you as you have very clearly shown in this passage.
ReplyDeleteIt's really refreshing to see someone who has such a passion. Never give up on what you love! :)
ReplyDeletenice! I wanna go play soccer now!
ReplyDeleteas a fellow soccer player I have to say I LOVE THIS, because its true that the bond that comes with sports and a team is soo unbelievably strong, keep playing soccer girl, never give up your passion, cause soccer will always love you back ;p
ReplyDeleteI see when there is something you are passionate about, you are able to grasp on the subject and write in such a passionate way!
ReplyDeleteIts great how you showed the connection, I understand the relation in life one has with sports, and I enjoyed how you showed this.
ReplyDeleteTrue Passion for a sport is always a great thing to see in others! Nice writing.
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