Everyone has had a moment in their life where they have sensed a presence other than the
people surrounding them. Whether that individual was by themselves or accompanied by friends
and family, they were able to detect an unusual presence. For instance, when people wash their
faces in the shower and feel the sudden urge to open their eyes and turn around it’s because they
feel a supernatural presence. This leads me to question if the presence that is sensed is the
presence of a demon or if stress is controlling their thought process. The literal definition of
demon means, “an evil spirit or devil, especially one thought to possess a person or act as a
tormentor in hell.” In the bible demons are referred to as, “ fallen angels,” a fallen angel is an
angel who rebelled against God and was cast out of heaven. In the bible an angel named Lucifer
( better known as Satan) was cast out of heaven after rebelling against God along with the angels
he persuaded. “ So the great dragon was cast out, that serpent of old, called the Devil and Satan,
who deceives the whole world; he was cast to the earth, and his angels were cast out with him”(
Revelation 12:9). Although Satan and the angels he persuaded were cast out of heaven they were
still able to interfere with humans. “ For Jesus had commanded the impure spirit to come out of
the man. Many times it had seized him, and though he was chained hand and foot and kept under
guard, he had broken his chains and had been driven by the demon into solitary places” (Luke 8:
29). This shows that demons have the ability to possess the human mind and body. “Night and
day among the tombs and in the hills he would cry out and cut himself with stones” (Mark 5:5).
Demons can often lead people to come out of character resulting in them committing self harm.
This can be seen in society as stress, depression or mental health issues.
Oftentimes people will not equate spiritual warfare with mental health problems. For example, there are several teens and adults that suffer from self- harm. They inflict wounds by picking at their skin or by cutting themselves with sharp objects. “She drew blood, but she continued to scratch and cut. In her mind, self-injury was the only way she could deal with all the dealing with stress” (WebMD). Oftentimes the term, “ stress demon,” will be used when people describe the amount of pressure that they are under. This is because of the negative effects stress can have on an individual’s body. Stress can cause a person to have anxiety, depression, or mental health issues. Stress is “ a state of mental or emotional strain or tension resulting from adverse or very demanding circumstances.” Despite the fact that stress is common within society if it is strong enough to affect an individuals health it should not be overlooked nor normalized. There are several ways that stress can be reduced. A few of the ways are to identify what is causing the stress, seek help, and to walk away from situations when you are angry. In conclusion, taking steps towards ensuring that both mental and spiritual health is taken care of can help an individual fight their own battles with their demons.
Oftentimes people will not equate spiritual warfare with mental health problems. For example, there are several teens and adults that suffer from self- harm. They inflict wounds by picking at their skin or by cutting themselves with sharp objects. “She drew blood, but she continued to scratch and cut. In her mind, self-injury was the only way she could deal with all the dealing with stress” (WebMD). Oftentimes the term, “ stress demon,” will be used when people describe the amount of pressure that they are under. This is because of the negative effects stress can have on an individual’s body. Stress can cause a person to have anxiety, depression, or mental health issues. Stress is “ a state of mental or emotional strain or tension resulting from adverse or very demanding circumstances.” Despite the fact that stress is common within society if it is strong enough to affect an individuals health it should not be overlooked nor normalized. There are several ways that stress can be reduced. A few of the ways are to identify what is causing the stress, seek help, and to walk away from situations when you are angry. In conclusion, taking steps towards ensuring that both mental and spiritual health is taken care of can help an individual fight their own battles with their demons.
The comparison of a demon with stress and mental health is very powerful. The piece inspires the reader to confront their own demons. Good job! -Katryna Kerth
ReplyDeleteI was really intrigued by this topic that you chose. I was brought up by the fact when you compared demons to stress or actual demons. I see it as demons are the ones who tempt us and if we allow it then they can eventually take over us.They start to mess with our minds and just like you said there are mental people who deal with this and I know someone who said he would hear voices and even the voices would tell him to do bad things, like when he got on the roof to stab himself because the devil told him too, he said. This can be due to drugs and depression, it's like they let there minds slowly disappear elsewhere and have no control but they do, the mind is just powerful. GREAT JOB TAJA. I liked it a lot, luv u girl
ReplyDeleteThis was a very interesting piece, and you put together demon and stress very well. This made me feel that we create the stress inside of us, which in turn will bring rise to the demons who will definitely affect the body negatively. - Shrey
ReplyDeleteI really like the concept you drew of spiritual warfare tied with mental health problems. The connection you made with biblical stories and present-day health issues was a very fascinating perspective that I have never thought of. I can see myself ruminating about this theory the next time I encounter my "stress demon". Nice job! -Arianna Santos
ReplyDeleteIt is very interesting how you compared stress to a demon. Thus drawing to the conclusion that we have demons inside us tha we must face everyday. All your citations make your point very valid and you executed it well. Great job!!
ReplyDeleteLove the mental health aspect of demons and stress its extreamly relatable to teens and anyone really dealing with those demons and knowing they arent alone
ReplyDeleteI think that this is a very interesting topic to bring up in the correlation of demonic presence and what it has to do with mental health issues. The biblical references help provide imagery as well as the definitions give an easy psychological explanation. This is very eye opening to different possibilities. - Victoria Giliberto
ReplyDeleteThe way you compared mental health issues to spiritual warfare was incredibly insightful and very accessible. I also thought that it was interesting how you chose to present the topic of mental health in a more objective, yet faithful way. Overall, well done. - Serina Ko
ReplyDeleteThis piece is well though out and overall powerful. To begin with, your hooking title and concept with the demons and angels are interesting choices. It's unique and demonstrates the writer's creativity as well as adds depth to it's comparison. I think that tackling mental health is hard to do because it is so talked about, however you found a unique way to explain and describe it which is impressive. -Nikki Cisneros
ReplyDeleteThis topic is very interesting as you compare mental health to demons. This comparison uses real life mental health problems as well as biblical allusions in order to show that mental health problems are fixable. Inspiring the reader to fight their mental problems.
ReplyDeleteStress is something that everyone deals with and this story is a way to comfort readers who deal with stress by personifying it as a "stress demon" instead of it being something that is part of the individual themselves. - christian o
ReplyDeleteTaja, your piece is wonderfully written and I liked how you brought up the scenario that people have felt a unseen presence and draw that all the way to stress demon and metal health problems. Because yes, in our society stress is a huge part that takes its toll on people. I really enjoyed this piece. Overall, great job Taja!
ReplyDeleteVery interesting! Many people describe their stress or anxiety as "inner demons" and you took it to the next level. It was a little spooky~ I also like the definitions and quotes because they clearly explain your point. Good job! :D
ReplyDeleteThis was a really interesting take on things! I love how you referenced specific parts of the bible. Also, way to bring awareness to the importance of mental health! -Destiny Okonkwo
ReplyDeleteWhat reeled me into your piece was the title as it grabbed my attention and seemed intriguing. I like how you connected demons to mental health and how they can affect others. I particularly enjoyed where you discussed that we should not overlook nor normalize stress and the issues it can cause. This piece did well at raising awareness. Great job Taja!
ReplyDeleteI admire your work and the topic you have chosen, it is interesting how things not of this world can influence our lives and you have done a great job in explaining that. It does shine a light on other explanations to metal health and self harm that others are willing to over look. Great Job!
ReplyDeleteThe way you approached the subject with both a spiritual and scientific analysis made for an interesting and unique abstract idea piece. Very well done!
ReplyDeleteI thoroughly enjoyed reading this piece and I personally believe that this is a very important topic to discuss. I admire the fluidity of your writing and how you directly addressed the issue of "stress demons", as I believe many of us reading this can relate to. I also thought it was very interesting that you compared the feeling of a spirit or ominous being to the amount of stress someone may have. Overall, this was very well executed, great job!
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I enjoyed reading this. It was really smart to include biblical references. I also liked that you wrote about this in general. This calls for society to reflect on itself. Great job !!-Kyra Perry
ReplyDeletei did not want to stop reading this piece. first of all the supernatural intrigues me very much and second i love how you correlated the mental health aspect to this supernatural presence.
ReplyDeleteThis piece was very interesting and well written. The introduction was what hooked me into this great piece, and the correlation between mental health and demons brings to light that mental illness is not permanent, we just need to fight our demons.
ReplyDeleteThe quotes and citations were helpful, showing thought and research into the piece, helping readers unfamiliar with the bible understand. It was well written, good job, and thanks for writing. ~Marisa Johnson
ReplyDeleteThe comparison between the effects of stress and the effects of demons is very interesting to consider. Overall, I appreciate the fact that you are bringing awareness to mental health. -- Gilberto Diaz
ReplyDeleteTAJA!!!!!! I love how you brought awareness to mental health. Its such a touchy topic and you were able to write about it in a way that grabs attention and is easy to read. It was written beautifully.
ReplyDeleteThis piece is a huge attention grabber! The topic is so interesting and it was wonderful on how you connected spirtual warfare with mental health. - Jeovany Ventura
ReplyDeleteI like how you've shown how stress and mental health aren't really permanent things, but are like demons we are fighting in our own spiritual warfare. I will definitely think about this next time I encounter a stressful situation.
ReplyDeleteSee this is easy. Very unique that you compared demons to stress. But it is actually very true, most people don't confront things that stress them out but that only leads to more stress. In the same way, many people don't face their demons. I applaud you for bringing mental health up given it is a very sensitive topic, great job Taja!
ReplyDeleteI loved reading how approached the topic. Seeing how you compared everything made me even more interested. I think a lot of us can relate too with stress especially during these times. Great piece! - Monica Morales
ReplyDeleteI really admire how you compared demons with stress and mental health, overall relating to the phrase, "facing your demons." Your comparison also brings to light the issues with mental illnesses that many readers need to hear. Great job :) -Melanie Viernes
ReplyDeleteI absolutely love the how your piece brought awareness to mental health a very important and prominent issue especially in tens, especially through your use of diction and imagery to hook in your reader. Well done!
ReplyDeleteYour topic was so fascinating and interesting. I like how you pieced together stress and demon. I also love how you state how we all have inner demons in us that we face day to day. Good Job!!! ~Alec Bailey
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