Change is a word I will never enjoy
hearing. Ever since I was little, I loved my simple schedule of waking up and
going to school. What I didn’t enjoy was the fact that after each school year,
my teachers and classes changed. Routine is something that makes me feel secure
and when that changes, my whole world gets turned upside down.
Senior year
was full of changes and adjusting to environments along with situations that I
wasn’t used to. Freshman, Sophomore, and most of Junior year were all simple
because I was set in my ways. I was happy to be a part of Etiwanda’s Associated
Student Body because it was full of structure and it gave me a place to be
myself. Setting up rallies, planning events, being creative in our ideas and
overall, just having people to depend on was great. ASB made me happy but
unfortunately, that all changed.
During the
middle of Junior year, ASB became an environment that I not longer wanted to be
included in. Many of the routines that ASB was known for began to change and
the new changes made me uncomfortable. I didn’t agree with the choices that
were being made and a lot of the students felt the same way. I was concerned
and upset that the program that made me happy was no longer the same. A big
change was happening and I wasn’t sure if I wanted to be a part of this new
program. Since I had been in ASB so long, I felt obligated to stick with it for
my Senior year and get used to the changes that had been made. This decision
was based on my friends and my obligations, not my true feelings.
The
beginning of my Senior year was filled with confusion and distress. I hated the
person I was becoming and dreaded going to ASB. Everything about it irritated
me and I complained constantly about this program that I was a part in. After a
few months, I decided that I shouldn’t be a part of the class. It made me
unhappy and all my complaining was affecting the class in a negative way. This
decision was difficult to make because I knew it would be a major change in my
life. The thought of this change worried me but I knew it was the right thing
to do.
Now that a
couple months have passed since I quit ASB, I know it was the right decision.
I’m so much happier now that I have time to spend. I discovered how much I
enjoy the art of photography, I now have a job, and I can actually spend time
with my family and friends. Although change is difficult for me, I now
understand how important it can be. Change can truly be a great thing. If
change didn’t exist, our life would be boring and stagnant. I’m so happy and
grateful for all the blessings I’ve received after making this difficult
decision. Change may be uncomfortable at first but in the end, it can make us
better and happier people.
I like how you aren't completely against ASB as I was reading this piece I noticed how you were mentioning both sides.The side where you were very fond of ASB and the side where you began to not like it. Great Job
ReplyDeleteIm also fond of ASB and not fond of ASB ! great job .
ReplyDeletegreat work on this piece, and changing is really hard to do unless you find some sort of comfortable way doing so. I liked how this also wasn't biased towards your feelings
ReplyDeleteI like how you stated your true feelings about ASB and how you pushed yourself out of your comfort zone.
ReplyDeleteI think you don't give yourself enough credit. You made a tough decision, stuck by it and became happier for doing so. Change is inevitable as we mature and move out into the world. This was an interesting account of your life and I think you are going to be just fine.
ReplyDeleteVery inspiring story, I'm glad you could make the decision and stand by it, and that it made you happy in the long run. Well written!
ReplyDeleteI love how you changed for the better. I think it's great how you left something you knew was bad for your spiritual mental physical emotional ALL THE HEALTHS. Haha! I love how your diction made your narrative feel truly personal Great job!
ReplyDeleteLauren, you made a wise decision, if you were not happy and it was negatively affecting your lifestyle then it is probably not the place for you. It is an interesting account for the events that had happened. Change is sometimes scary, but it is necessary, for us to evolve. And we must adjust. So I hope your life carries you forward and you never stop changing until you are perfectly comfortable. Great job!
ReplyDeleteGreat job i like how you started off with ASB and how your want to push your self!
ReplyDeleteChange could be either a good or a bad thing but mostly theres a way to adjust
ReplyDeletei completely love the honesty in your piece you werent tip toeing trying to be nice about how u dislike ASB but u flat out said u hate it lol i love it, bold move and beautifully written. and i agree 100% and i admire you for being one of the few to admit something like this. its something most wouldnt say on there own.
ReplyDeleteLauren! I love this so much! I remember you telling me how hard it was for you to leave ASB, and even though I wish you were still in it, I realize that it was probably the best for you. I love how much you said that you love it in this writing. We all really miss you still. :)
ReplyDeleteVery good story! A lot of people think being part of ASB is all fun and games but it can be hard. You made a hard decision that hopefully your happy with.
ReplyDeletegood job on this piece and it is hard to get out of your comfort zone but it is all for the better good great story
ReplyDeleteWow! I admire how you got the courage to make this big decision and go for change. I loved how you explained your thoughts clearly in your piece and how it had a positive outcome. Congrats on your decision and your success and great job on this piece! (:
ReplyDeleteChange will always feel uncomfortable in the beginning but that's life. Eventually you start to become as comfortable as you were when there was no change. I'm glad you're much happier!
ReplyDeleteI totally agree with you that change can be scary, but it can sometimes be a benefit in our lives. Nice job on the detailing and using your personal experiences as an example.
ReplyDeleteYou explain both sides so well to me, and some writers usually forgot what the others have to say about it, good job!
ReplyDeleteYou are making senior year sound scary...... just kidding :) I loved the adjectives in this story and all of the different terms you used. Keep up the good work. :)
ReplyDeleteThe adjectives in this story were wonderful! Keep up the great work!
ReplyDeleteJordan Battle
That's really inspiring that you decided to quit something that was taking a toll on you but at the same time had so much meaning.
ReplyDeleteI have always been afraid of change as well and I admire that you were able to make the brave decision to stop doing something that no longer made you happy. This was a very inspiring piece.
ReplyDeleteThis piece was absolutely amazing! I loved how you expressed your personal feelings with so much detail great job!! ~Isabella Torres
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you described the good and the bad about asb. Change is sometimes hard for me because your stuck to it and you already know what to do but sometimes it always good to change things up. Overall, this a very well written piece.
ReplyDelete- Jerico M. G. Franco
Wow !!! Lauren this piece is put together quite well. Its great to find new avenues in our life, especially if something is making us unhappy. Without change there is no growth, Without growth there is no change. Great Job Girl
ReplyDeleteloved how you used some personal examples great job
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you're happy with your decision, and it's true, change can be overwhelming but at the end of the day it's how you handle it that makes it worthwhile. Thanks for sharinnnnnnng!!(:
ReplyDeleteVery relatable story for us seniors and great title to tie it all in! Change indeed! so much change at once.
ReplyDeletei liked this piece because i also hate change like no no, i thought that it was great that you explained both sides so it wasn't completley one sided.
ReplyDeleteI think you made a wise decision because your happiness comes first. Well written and relatable in the sense that many people feel the same way about change. Good job!
ReplyDeleteVery inspiring! its good you made your own choice and you were happy with it great work!!!
ReplyDeleteCongratulations on making the right choice. i don't like change either but this piece makes me think it might be a good thing to do once in a while.
ReplyDeleteyour voice comes off very clear and strong in this piece and the way you presented your dilemma by giving strong points on both sides. I admire your strength in deciding to make that change and it turned into a better outcome.
ReplyDeleteChange can be a great thing, something new is sometimes strange it just needs time to adjust. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI like how you said how you really felt because usually most people can't do that and thats what makes this so good your honesty . Great Job !
ReplyDeletei like the way you put your feelings out there towards ASB
ReplyDeleteGreat job! It really shows the difficulty of the decisions us adolescents are forced to make throughout our high school years. Very personable, good job. :)
ReplyDeleteI believe everyone that has the choice to be happy and it's great you chose to be. You seem mature and knowledgeable because you made an effort that wasn't working out and made a decision that was huge to you based on your feelings and long term thoughts. Continue to make choices that you are proud of and never let something hold you back. This piece has me questioning a lot and I appreciate that so thank you. -Natalie Cruz
ReplyDeleteMostly everyone has the same fear you have. I admire that you did what made you happy and what helped not just you but the people around too. Being happy is all that matters.
ReplyDeleteI know it doesn't mean much, but there's a quote I live by. "Change is... good." - Kha'zix. I think you made the right choice
ReplyDeleteIt's really cool that you're so positive about all this change because yes, I agree change may be tough sometimes but it's what keeps us going. Without change, we have nothing to look forward to. Nice job.
ReplyDeleteChange isnt always bad as you realized. Great way to express a personal experience
ReplyDeleteGood job with the story. It was written well and presented fantastically. Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteThis started out to be negative but by the end it was a positive,you did something you were unsure of and because you took a chance you ended up happier, great job!
ReplyDeleteGreat job and I love the way it was written.
ReplyDeleteThis was a nice sequence of events, lots of ups and downs, as, I suppose, life can be. I sympathize, as many do, with your....complicated ASB opinion and congratulate you for making the best decision for you.
ReplyDeleteWell done, Lauren! Speaking from the fellow ASB member perspective, change can be very scary, or as your boyfriend would put it, "satanic", and it is something we all struggle with. This narrative helps me understand your point of view and how although something may seem important, leaving it can bring even more important things. I really enjoyed reading this because I love seeing this revelation in you. I am so happy to feel your happiness, and you expressed it very well in your submission. Excellent job! PS: I miss you so much in ASB.
ReplyDeletechange is always hard but this was great!!
ReplyDeleteI agree, change is hard. I am a freshman, and the adjustment was hard. coming from middle school was easy, but the schedules were different. it was having a schedule for the past years, then a change.
ReplyDelete-garrett lachase
I agree change is hard and something like that seems like its no small choice, so the fact that you struggled with it is understandable. great explanation and personal narrative.
ReplyDeleteChange is always hard for me but I feel like that there had to be a reason on the changes. I really enjoyed this piece and love the way it was written and the details. Also with the ASB being fond of it and not be fond, it's great on how you expressed your feelings on that.
ReplyDeleteLauren, although ASB was such a huge part of your life and helped you become the young woman that you are today, I'm so proud of the fact that you were able to make a decision that stood out not only from your daily routine, but from what everyone expected of you. Even through your fears and doubts, you searched deep within yourself and made the conscious decision to give up something that you had at one point dedicated your whole life to, and because of this decision, you've become even more independent and willing to take risks that may lead to change.
ReplyDeleteI can tell you were very passionate about ASB at first, but I have a lot of respect for you for being able to look at yourself and your feelings and be honest enough to quit. I did the same thing with swim this year, and it's hard to quit but it ends up feeling a lot better! Thanks for sharing ^_^
ReplyDeleteim glad that you too charge and stood up for what you wanted. when you made your decision you also looked at how it affected the others around you which shows that care you.
ReplyDeleteYour piece is very relatable. I love how honest this sounds and I'm very happy that you've come to accept change.
ReplyDeleteThis was obviously my favorite piece. ;) But i really did like it i really connected with you obviously because we both lived through it lol! Good Job babe!
ReplyDeleteChange can be hard and then it could be good once you discover the new positive ways it brings. :) great job.
ReplyDeleteits amazing how you incorporated both the good and bad about asb i honestly would be against asb in every way shape and form this was great
ReplyDeleteGreat piece describing your course of change and how it can sometimes be for the best
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