Before
Reading this I will admit, I have watched Blackfish
I agree with and disagree with many things in that movie. If you’d like to
debate about that see me in person I’d love to chat.
Like many
young children, I developed a passion to work with killer whales when my
parents took me to Sea World at the age of four. A typical story, I
know. However, my story is not as conventional as you might think. What
makes this story distinct is that I have remained whole-heartedly committed to
my dream.
I
remember the first time I went to Sea World as a child. I was in the car with my mother, father, and
two older cousins. The two-hour trip
made me even more anxious to arrive at our destination. As we approached, I could see the park from
the freeway and my excitement increased. We finally arrived, parked the car and began
our trek into the theme park. As I
entered the gates, I could smell the salt water in the air, hear the smooth
jazz music in the background, and the noises from other excited children. We walked toward “Shamu Stadium.” There I saw the most incredible animal - a
creature enormous in size, with smooth black skin, a white underside, and
complementary white patches…the killer whale. As it swam past me, I could see the muscles
under the skin working effortlessly to perform its movements. I was in a state of awe. I then left “Shamu Stadium” and visited other
animals in the park: dolphins, beluga whales, seals, and a myriad of other
aquatic creatures. Each had its own
unique characteristics and environment and every time I saw a new animal, I had
the same reaction. By the end of day, a
passion had been sparked in me that would not be quenched. I wanted
to spend my life working with marine animals.
To this
very day, I remain committed to my dream, which will soon become my
reality. I have spent the last several years in preparation. I
studied numerous documentaries on the ocean and performed countless hours of
research on many different aquatic animals. I also became a
junior lifeguard and devoted myself to that program, which positioned me to
become a fully certified lifeguard. Being a lifeguard helped me to become a strong
swimmer, taught me many valuable life skills, and increased my love for the
water. I learned to be independent,
responsible and developed a strong work ethic. My love for the water and marine animals has
greatly influenced my career choice, a goal to which I have been fully
devoted. I approach this next phase of my life with fortitude and
tenacity ready to embrace the challenges ahead of me.
I find that we both are currently working to make our passions our careers, and for that I have a lot of respect for you. It's so hard to find people like that nowadays, especially those have remained committed to their career choice from a very young age. I have no doubt you'll do great to where you're going Caleb.
ReplyDeleteachieving dreams is hard unless you really set your mind to it, I was once told,"if you really want it, its already yours"...great job
ReplyDeleteobviously you are committed to your career choice, You have already done so much to prepare yourself to work with marine animals. I envy you for realizing so early what you wanted to do and sticking with it. I know you are going to succeed and I wish you "good skill".
ReplyDeleteI love how you wove together a narration and explanation in this piece. You told the story of your Sea World visit and you also explained your plans for the next phase of your life. Good luck in following your dreams!
ReplyDeleteExcellent use of detail in your story, and you tied it into your passion and future career so well! Nicely done
ReplyDeleteI love how you knew what you wanted to do at such a young age and continued to work your way to it. I hope it is everything you imagined and more. Good luck in the future!!
ReplyDeleteProps to you for sticking with your dream, though there has been controversy and negativity towards the captivity of those animals. We can all learn from this, there will be struggles in achieving our goals or dreams but thats what creates our drive to keep striving. Good job!
ReplyDeleteWow I like how you showed us both the roots and the fruits of your life. All this hard work towards the dream you got when you were young is now finally paying off. It's definitely not over but it's not just a dream anymore, it's a possibility in reality.
ReplyDeleteThis is awesome Caleb! I always knew you loved marine animals but I didn't know you wanted that to be your career! That's so cool! I really enjoyed this piece because it informed me about your life and your plans! Great job!
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Caleb, I will have to admit you have a LOT of guts publishing this piece, because a lot of people, including myself, have many problems with Sea World. But you know what, you keep doing what you are doing and don't let anyone step over your opinion. I truly did enjoy reading this piece, because it showed your determination, it showed me that you are willing to go beyond what is expected and venture out into the realms in which some people refuse to enter, to make a statement. And I say good for you, keep your head up, and I hope your life and journey treats you well. Who knows maybe one day you could change my opinion on Sea World. But for now Great job and thanks for showing me a new perspective. :D
ReplyDeleteThanks DIMA! I remember our conversations:) and hopefully! but that subject matter is for another day!
DeleteI love how you told us about your trip to sea world and what your plans are in life great job!
ReplyDeleteI love how committed you are to making your passions work and your dreams a reality, great job
ReplyDeletei love how u use imagery so well in your piece and make me feel the passion u have for this. exactly how much you love the water and how youve came step by step to reach your goal so u can work to be what u want. and what youve learned on the way. beautifully written love.
ReplyDeleteI love how I can see how much thought you put into this Caleb! Knowing you personally, I know how ambitious you are, and when you first told me this story I knew you would be able to achieve it. You have so much ambition and determination and those are some of my favorite qualities about you. All in all, great job and I really hope you continue to follow your dreams :)
ReplyDeleteYour piece was great for a number of reasons. First off, you provided a great amount of detail in describing the feelings you had as a little kid and that was an excellent way to make the reader connect. But, what I admired most of all was the overall message, to set and goal and work hard until you achieve it. I think the work ethic you posses is something that our generation is lacking and it's great to see that some people still do. Well done!
ReplyDeleteThank You Aaron. I really appreciate and like what you said. Those words are very deep and can be life changing to a lot of people.
DeleteVery nice story! I liked how you had your mind sent on achieving your dream. I also liked how you explained your trip to Sea world and how it was important to you.
ReplyDeleteAwh Caleb! I loved reading this piece! I admire how you are fully committed to your career and your ambitious drive to make your dream career into a reality! Good luck in the future and wonderful job on your piece! (:
ReplyDeleteI like how you gave us a backstory of how you came to love your future passion of working with marine animals. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI like the vivid detail you provide for the reader and definitely pursue your passion/dream! Not anyone or anything should stop you from being you! I know you will succeed Caleb!
ReplyDeleteYour work is really inspiring, good luck for the following years! :)
ReplyDeleteI can tell you're really determined to be successful and because a you're so determined I'm sure you will be successful. Your piece was really inspiring.
ReplyDeleteYou seemed to be really determined to be successful so I'm sure you will be. Your piece was really inspiring.
ReplyDeleteI can completely feel your passion for that field from what you wrote and that's really great to have such a passion because it gives you motivation in life!
ReplyDeleteI respect every aspect you pointed out in your piece. As we close this chapter in our life, we are getting ready to embark on a new chapter, where we are going to pursue our dreams and become great and mighty individuals that God has called us to be. It's great to have a mindset and what you want to do. Keep up the good work Caleb !
ReplyDeleteKeep doing what you're doing ! try your hardest always be determined and you will achieve your goal. this is a very good message for people. great job!(:
ReplyDeleteaww Caleb, I'm proud of you kid. I'm happy for you because you're on the right path to successfully making your dream come true. I give you props, many people aren't as dedicated to thrive so good job!
ReplyDeleteGreat story any good job writing about something that you yourself are passionate about. Gives me a deeper insight into what you love great job!
ReplyDeleteI remember the first time I went to Sea World too! I could picture you working with killer whales, I think you would be great. Your piece was well written and I wish you the best of luck.
ReplyDeletei love sea world. great story
ReplyDeleteYour determination and willingness to chase after your passion of marine life is very inspiring. Truthfully, working with killer whales or any other sea creature bigger than a gold fish sounds terrifying. It is good of you to research them in person so the rest of us dont have to :P
ReplyDeleteThis is awesome! Im glad youre sticking with your passion and I hope it all works out. Great job on inspiring others to do the same, nicely done!
ReplyDeleteVery determined to be successful ! this is very inspiring to me . Great job :)
ReplyDeleteIn a sense I can relate to you because when I was younger I had such devotion to saving animals, specifically whales. Being so disgusted with the cruelty whales faced, I poured my heart out and actually wrote a letter to the president at the time. I know, a little too much... It's refreshing to know someone will stop at no ends to have a career that truly makes them happy. I wish the best of luck to you in your journey. -Natalie Cruz
ReplyDeleteTo be quite honest if you do your own research and truly investigate the situation with whales and animals in captivity. One thing that makes me angry is the fact that everyone assumes that Blackfish is 100% fact. When actually it's not. I do agree that many things companies have done in the past were wrong but new they are in so many better conditions. And besides what can you do? Majority of all captive animals are all born in captivity and cannot simply be placed into the ocean. One thing though that I Will stand by is that if I finally get to where I want I will immediately leave if I don't agree with the treatment of the animals. But I do see your side.
DeleteAside from the fact that this piece is superbly written, the actually story of your passion of the sea if told so eloquently that the reader almost wishes they could have been there to, to feel the same awe as you did. Good job, and i hope you get the chance to make your dream come true.
ReplyDeleteThe whole time I was reading the piece, I could hear your voice telling me your story. I admire your dedication in pursuing your dreams, despite any possible opposition, which is pretty inevitable in any case. I wish you the best of luck with everything!
ReplyDeleteAn awesome film and inspiring narrative.
ReplyDeleteI love your determination! You're inspiring me to push harder in what I'm passionate about since I was 6. I hope everything you do and the challenges you face make you better and get you to where you want to be with the marine life/killer whales. Good luck in the years to come!
ReplyDeleteYour determination and passion is extremely evident in this piece. Its great that your following your dream.
ReplyDeleteCaleb. Do you remember that one time at summer camp where we played sea world. Haha, you're going to go far kid, this is a very motivating piece and I'll always be rooting for you.
ReplyDeleteThis piece shows a lot about you. Great job!
ReplyDeleteGreat pice i hope you become successful in life keep doing what your doing.
ReplyDeleteCaleb, your words really show your passion for marine animals. Follow your dreams! It's good to find something that you love in life and with your ambition, I'm sure you'll end up in that field. Great work!
ReplyDeleteCaleb Alexander Bills. You have always been one of the most dedicated and determined people I know, and I have no doubt that if anyone is going to chase their dreams until they reach them, it's you. This piece was very well written and I feel like it inspired all of us readers to have the same mindset you have. As we all start new lives, it is important to keep our goals in view, and that is how we will discover true happiness. Well done!
ReplyDeleteThis was really enjoyable. I liked reading and about the journey and time for a goal.
ReplyDelete-garrett lachase
Thank you everyone! I really appreciate everyone for staying away from the controversial side of my piece! All of you have encouraged me and have driven me to work even harder.
ReplyDeleteThis is relatable because anybody that already has their life set out in front of them should work hard to achieve their dreams and have a job that you enjoy having.
ReplyDelete-Corbin Cagle
I think it is great that you know what you want to be and that you have such a passion for it. the passion will get you far and you will get a job that makes you happy. in my opinion that's one of the best thing you can hope for in life
ReplyDeleteI'm glad that you pursue your dreams without letting others affect! It's amazing having a dream for that long and having it come true.
ReplyDeleteYour use of detail and imagery in describing your first Seaworld trip and your job as a lifeguard really helped me to see the burning passion you really have for this calling over your life. Your determination has brought you this far and will continue to guide you places that you couldn't imagine! Good skill!!!
ReplyDeleteGood job Bills! I knew you wanted to do this but never really knew to what extent! And you know lauren she loved it too all about animals lol! Great job through really I enjoyed a little insight into your future plans
ReplyDeletethe amount of dedication i see in this piece is amazing caleb this was great i have faith in you brother
ReplyDeleteYour passion really showed throughout this piece. It was because of your great use of diction.
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