Power of Art
The last stroke of her brush pushed
against the canvas, she stepped back and examined her masterpiece, the eloquent
patterns painted so vividly, an image created from the depths of her mind now
alive-alive as beautiful chaos. Wild colors of blue, green, purple, yellow and
orange now occupy the once empty white space, her imagination painted onto that
canvas, part of her soul, saved onto the colorful peaks and dips of her image,
as a clear depiction of her mentality. Art was no doubt what she created that
day, for she allowed her own mind to wander and create something magical.
The ink of his black pen finished,
as soon as he started, he completed writing his first novel-a novel that he
hoped would take the public back to the Roaring Twenties and enrich humanity
with a sense of history and luxury. He longed to achieve stardom for his art,
wanting to raise awareness for all the underground artists waiting for someone
to make it big so the public could appreciate the arts of language and
literature. He dreamed of writing a novel close to that of the story of Gatsby,
but could only get so far, for he remained further away from his green light
than Gatsby had been.
As the orchestra finished their
performance the crowd longed to hear the sounds of the sweet stringed
instruments, the violin, the cello, the viola, the sounds of the subtle
percussion and pit, the roar produced by the trumpets and saxophone, and the
delicate riffs of the piano. The sound of music causing an emotional response
from the audience, some to turn and shiver with chills as goose-bumps crept
along the hairs of their skin. The art in which the orchestra produced
catalyzed a series of responses from its viewers, the players stood up for
their final curtain call, to smile at one another, for they all knew they
poured their heart and soul onto that stage.
I was not the painter, the writer, or
the musician. I was Dima, plain and talentless Dima. I was a mediocre piano
player and a near tone-deaf singer and nothing more. My only form of self-expression
was my ability to communicate with others through debate, but that was not
enough to satisfy my wants, I devoted multiple years of my life trying to
figure out what my talent outside of school was. I went to numerous art and
music schools only to get bored quickly and quit. Wanting to have something I
could call my passion consumed every second of my existence, I just wanted to
have the validation that I could posses a skill that would differentiate me
from a fellow human being. One day my family adopted a DSLR Cannon T3i Rebel
Camera, and after receiving a few pointers from my older sister on how to use
the equipment, I taught myself to use the power that the camera bestowed upon
me to make images that would move others and myself. I found my medium because
I never gave up on trying to find something that was mine, some form of art
that would be unique to me. My desire to create art pushed me out of my comfort
zone, and forced me to chase my visions-my art-my photos.
Art is the only thing that makes the
seven billion people who are living on this planet we call home different. It
allows individuals to express their beliefs in a form that is universally
understood, it is a passion, it is a way of life, it is a skill, which requires
diverse and practiced technique. The ultimate result of art is satisfaction, for
“art enables us to find ourselves and loose ourselves at the same time.” It is
the way to cleanse oneself of the terrible events of the day and start fresh. Once
adopted it is the only thing that stays constant throughout years and years. To have that much power over individuals
inspires creativity and drives change, it is through art humanity evolves. Art
has become my obsession, I think about all the things and people I would want
to photograph if time was not of the essence.
But, I know that if you need me you will find me behind the ephemeral
lens.
Sources:
http://www.goodreads.com/quotes/tag/art
I love how you described a different form of art in each paragraph and then jumped in to your struggle of trying to discover the artsy part of you. The flow of your piece is very smooth feeling like you are taking me on a journey through the art world it self, describing "Beautiful chaos"(great oxymoron) "Wild colors" "Empty white space" "Ink of his black pen" "Sounds of the sweet stringed instruments" and then the roaring twenties. Then its you discovering your talent and how you discovered it, why you discovered it and how long it took you to discover it. I love it ! Great work girl !
ReplyDeleteDima! I knew from the way you expressed your emotions about photography that this had to be you! you always so eloquently express your thoughts and feelings and that is admirable in itself. This piece was absolutely beautiful and the entire time I was reading this, I was thinking "only Dima would be able to write like this". Anyways, I loved every word in this personal narrative and I would very much love to read something else of yours as well :)
ReplyDeletethis narrative and ideas was fantastic! it was really unique and inspiring, I loved your appreciation for art and creativity in the piece. My fa vorite had to of been your commentary that it is what makes us 7 billion people different, and that you included all art forms. Honestly have nothing that I can see that I would change. So good girl! :)
ReplyDeleteWow. That was GREAT!!!! A lot of descriptive words in this piece. I could see every detail that you made come to life. You have a real talent, my friend.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you used three paragraphs just to describe the different forms of art, the way you organized your narrative in the middle created better understanding of the entire text. I loved the way you described how hard you tried to find an art that you could own, your work is a masterpiece!
ReplyDeleteThis was very inspiring. I loved how you used the many forms of art to show that art is more complex than what people normally expect it to be. Also, I liked how you found your love of art through photography when other forms of art wasn't interesting enough. Overall, this was a wonderful narrative . Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteDima. This was incredible and inspiring. I loved every bit of it! I loved how you described the different aspects of art and how you found yourself through art. I also loved the metaphorical reference you used towards the Great Gatsby. That was genius! Absolutely loved the entire piece! Fantastic Job!
ReplyDeleteLots of ways art is more complex the how other people see it and think art is just some brush and paint. Great job
ReplyDeleteNice opening with various forms of art and then introducing yourself as someone that had not yet found their passion or calling. No doubt that I was not the only one who found it very easy to connect to the idea of self discovery. I loved how you accomplished this connection through sharing your experience with discovering your talent for photography. Very inspiring!
ReplyDeleteI could list so many possible reasons as to why I enjoyed your piece. First let me say, I highly connected to it. It's as if your words understood me and depicted how I feel about art. Other than that, the imagery was beautiful. I was able to visualize every scene to articulately with a great amount of detail. You say you express yourself through a camera, yet I highly believe that you do so just as well through words. Amazing.
ReplyDeleteYour writing is extremely eloquent and mature. The courage you have to share this piece with a whole bunch of people you don't know is inspirational. Mrs.Cutts would be proud :)
ReplyDeleteEvery detail was so descriptive I felt as if I was actually experiencing each art. I could definitely make so many connections, especially the struggle to find yourself because that really is everyone's goal. Great job President Dima!
ReplyDeleteFavourite part? The second paragraph.
ReplyDeleteThis piece (because it's a piece of art, get it? ) really astounds me. There's just an art (haha, see what I did there?) to this writing that flows so beautifully, and the transition from the various forms of art to your own personal encounter with art is just... wow.
You may only envision yourself as an artist behind those lenses, but I think you're pretty good with words too ;)
I understand when you mean that art lets humans expressed themselves. It lets us draw what we feel and the colors represent our emotions. UNIQUE JOB!
ReplyDeleteWOW! I really like the fact that you expressed your thoughts and feelings about art. This piece is distinctive and creative as well. Nicely written!!! :)
ReplyDeletewow . this was great I like how you expressed yourself using art and though out the story art lets people express themselves how they feel and what their felling but anyways good job.
ReplyDeleteI love the topic, and the detail is absolutely jaw dropping, amazing effort, love it!
ReplyDeleteWow this article was amazing. I liked how you describe your details and how you express yourself. Mostly I loved how you used art as your feelings and thought. : ) : ) : ) and Great Job!!!!!!
ReplyDeletethat was great. i like how you express art by your thought and feelings
ReplyDeleteI really felt a connection to your piece. I share a similar view on what art is and how it can be anything as long as one expresses themselves. The first few paragraphs discussing "typical" artists was an excellent hook and kept me reading. Nice job!
ReplyDeleteI really like how well written it is,Great Job!!
ReplyDeleteamazing! love your descriptive words! and very inspiring. Great job!!
ReplyDeleteThe way that the piece began by giving different examples, each of a different person and their experiences with one same thing (art) really shows how universal art is.
ReplyDeleteAmazing. It touched me how you explained three different types of artist and that you are none of the three. You expressed what artist you actually are and what makes yourself unique. Reading this makes me feel that I can make my own type of art, to search deep down for who I really am. Great job.
ReplyDeleteDima! That was amazing. Sitting next you in english last year I got to learn a lot about you. There is far more to you than just pictures being your talent. After reading this not only are you a photographer you are a writer. And we all know you are GREAT DEBATER! But overall that was really well written and I loved every part!
ReplyDeleteI really like the fluidity of your piece. The way you transitioned between paragraphs was seamless. I especially love your final paragaraph and think that the concept was brilliant.
ReplyDeleteThat was brilliant! Golden line: "her imagination painted onto that canvas, part of her soul, saved onto the colorful peaks and dips of her image, as a clear depiction of her mentality." Throughout the reading, I repeated the word, "beauty", because it was so inspiring. The mix of storytelling and factual argument(ish) appeals to the duality of the human mind.
ReplyDeleteI'm speechless. Your expression for art is truly amazing. Before I read about your encounter with photography, I knew right then and there that writing is definitely a part of your art. The passion you put through this piece portrayed that on its own. Especially loved how you first used 3 different stories and followed with your own! Amazing work!
ReplyDeleteGreat job at incorporating experiences from your own life and truly defining what art really is.
ReplyDeleteTruly amazing! I never knew that there were so many forms of art and how they all are unique. Very nice choice in vocabulary. Loved how you shared a little background of yourself. Inspiring :)
ReplyDeleteThis is great! Very descriptive writing. Great job!
ReplyDeletegreat story. This makes me feel inspired to find talents I am not aware of. This is a great story, that everyone can feel inspired by. That is the kind of literature that people want to print and publish
ReplyDeleteVery very well written! This tells so much about you Dima. good job writing about what your passionate about!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteThanks for all the positive feedback! You guys made my day :D
ReplyDeleteI love the description in this piece every paragraph is a different type of art and your detail and described it beautifully
ReplyDeleteArt speaks for the unspoken. I cannot fathum what I would do without a simple sheet of paper, pencil, and my imagination. Photography is something that finds beauty in any picture. The way you contrasted between paragraphs, starting off with great examples then expressing your side of the story is truely amazing. I felt every emotion you put into these fragile words, and it only makes me want to read more. Amazing work
ReplyDelete-Bernadine
GREAT job ! you really showed me what art is through your eyes:)
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed all of the different examples of art you put into this writing. I love how descriptive you were, and how you put yourself into this. This was phenomenal!
ReplyDeletewow, I was blown away from your piece. How you described each form of art and the artisans emotions was amazing. The last two paragraphs were my favorite and I completely agree with you. You're not only a photographer but a phenomenal writer. I'm glad you found your talent
ReplyDeleteThat was top notch writing! You used your words so vividly that i could imagine myself there, listening to the orchestra, watching the painter bring the canvas to life. Who said Dima couldn't be a novelist?
ReplyDeleteThe fact that you used examples and explained different types of art leaves the reader enchanted. So many can relate to wanting to belong and you were so brave to personalize it! I loved it!
ReplyDeleteI love the emotion you had put into writing this, it shows how much you're passionate about this subject. Putting you own personal side into it shows how diverse you are in your own creative hobbies. This narrative was absolutely wonderful!
ReplyDeleteWow, Dima! This was very impressive. Your sentence structure was so compelling! This is a great piece because everyone can relate to it. And not only that, we got to know a little more about you. What a great piece to start off a great year! Awesome job!
ReplyDeleteI think it is inspirational, and lets you see that art can be seen in more ways than one
ReplyDeleteMost definitely got chills when I read, "...an image created from the depths of her mind now alive-alive as beautiful chaos." This line completely describes how I feel about art. I will now describe all of my artwork as 'beautiful chaos,' so thanks!
ReplyDeleteI truly loved this narrative. I loved how you expressed the word art as in photography and not something you have to paint or draw. I would compare myself to you because I still don't find what I'm passionate about. But now that I read this, I know that it will come someday
ReplyDeleteI really loved the way you wrote about the different types of artists we encounter and also how you connected it to yourself. Your descriptions were great as well! Fantastic job!
ReplyDeletewhat an amazing read! It really expressed that there are different types of art forms and even when you don't have an art form that you still do have some type of art form somewhere inside of you!
ReplyDeleteGreat job writing this piece. I loved reading all the descriptive kinds of art and how all this art connected to your life and your own form of art. The way you used imagery and detail in the writing really helped make this piece even more beautiful than it already was.
ReplyDeleteThis is truly beautifully written. The way you acknowledge the different types of arts laminated this whole piece with a sensation of compassion. Also the amount of detail given, like how each art evoked feelings intrigued me.
ReplyDeleteGreat job! This piece was very descriptive on art! I liked how you expressed art as Photography, Amazing job!
ReplyDeleteI can totally relate to how you felt because I am still in the process of trying to figure out what my talent is. I enjoyed reading your piece! Very inspiring!
ReplyDeleteBravo! Tres bien! Although I was felt slightly incomplete on the your camera paragraph, it was sensational, using senses to appeal to me. On the contrary, my definition of art differs than yours. When I hold my Lumix DMC_F3 live view camera, I focus on what my subject is. I indeed do have my skills and techniques when it comes to photography, but that comes naturally after a while. When I hold my camera and look for my next shot, my focus is on composition - what makes my photo professional worthy. I believe art is primarily a great composition fabricated from different parts of our personality. This literary piece is your great composition DIMA.
ReplyDeleteDima, I understand the compassion that you have throughout your writing and your usage of different forms of art is very intriguing.
ReplyDeleteI love how you showed that there are different forms of art and art isn't just a painting or a drawing and I enjoyed reading your passion because it gave the piece a personal touch.
ReplyDeleteI think this is very inspirational loved your examples of different forms of art great job ! (:
ReplyDeleteDescribing yourself using art was great how you used the facts to make it work..awesome!
ReplyDeleteWell done President Dima! I was intrigued from the moment I started reading this narrative. Your way of expressing art is like no other. It opened up my mind to what art can really be. This was a beautiful work of ART.
ReplyDeleteMy favorite story by far!!! It really describes how art can come in all shapes and forms. Amazing vocabulary mixed with perfect imagery definitely made me fall in love with this writing piece. I'm so glad I read this and I give this a ten out of ten. People all over the world think they are meaningless and I definitely think that somebody reading this can open up their world to new opportunities.
ReplyDeleteVery good job on this story! I liked how you explained that there is different types of art for everyone to love. I also liked how you expressed your love for art and imagination.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad to hear that you found your passion. Also the build up of other peoples' success effectively depicted essential sources of motivation that many people continuously struggle to find
ReplyDeleteThis is so incredible and inspirational! I love this narrative because the detail was so descriptive and expressed so many different types of art forms. I really enjoyed everything, your choice of words and just your own personal side to it! This narrative just opened my mind to looking at a different perspective towards the different forms of art. Overall, this was fantastic! You are such a phenomenal writer, Dima.
ReplyDeleteI like how you put different examples to lead up to the main point of the story. My favorite was the Gatsby one and how you correlated the green light in it.
ReplyDeleteGreat chain of description that related to yourself! Very relatable, and great way to portray different styles of art. You are an artist!
ReplyDeleteThis seemingly poetic piece is so elegantly and beautifully written that i cant describe how much passion i feel towards this story. I am an artist myself and draw on a daily basis so i can relate to this story. What you say is both true and inspiring. This is perhaps my favorite piece yet!
ReplyDeleteA form of art describing other forms of art. Brilliant. The imagery you created with in your work is outstanding. I could feel your passion for art in this narrative and how it has shaped you to who you are today.
ReplyDeleteI Really like this one, not just because it was interesting but because it was extremely relatable... That and the fact that I love anything that has to do with any type of art. Thank you for writing this!
ReplyDeleteThis is very interesting and different. I like how you started it off with ways of completely different types of art then unexpectedly talk about how you're not into that and went on and talked about what you call art.
ReplyDeleteGreat job on this story! I really liked how the different types of art people do represent their lives as different pieces of art. I really like this piece
ReplyDelete-jaedon adan
Awesome job. I liked how used three different forms of art to show that there are many different mediums. It was great to see how passionate you felt as well as how determined you were to find what suited you. You described each medium from the perspective of others that enjoy them as you enjoy Photography. I especially liked the allusion to Gatsby in the second graph. Overall a really great job and i wish to see more of your writing in the future.
ReplyDeleteI loved how you described different piece of art before you explained what kind of art describes you, I love how the details of imagery within describing the arts showed the feeling of the person
ReplyDeleteI love the way you described different types of art. Basically saying there is no right way to do "art". That its about expressing yourself and not just doing whatever everyone else is doing. I feel like everyone can somewhat relate to this in some type of way.
ReplyDeleteReally really inspirational Dima. I remember I sat next to you in Photo last year for a semester and your photographs that you printed were so good. I could tell the pictures had meaning. Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you gave three examples of art: the writer, painter, and musician, and compared them to yourself, to show how you use to consider yourself talentless until you found your love for photography.
ReplyDeleteI really liked it. I like the title of the writing and how it was descritive. -Garrett La Chase
ReplyDeleteI loved the thoughtfulness in the work. I feel as though after reading this, I've gained a better insight into different artistic perspectives. Thank you for putting so much effort into your work!
ReplyDeleteYour diction allowed for the words to flow very smoothly and your descriptions and explanations provided a very good basis for the reader to make sensory connections, your paragraphs provided a very good argument for the importance of art and you really tied it together well with the conclusion.
ReplyDeleteI loved how you compared the struggle of different types of artist to your own struggle with your art. This piece was great and very inspiring.
ReplyDeleteReally well written. Great narrative about the complexity of art.
ReplyDeleteThis piece is definitely my favorite. I can feel all the passion you had writing this, and I can definitely relate to finding my place when it comes to talent or career choice. The emotion in each and every sentence and really expressing the beauty of art really interested me. Great work.
ReplyDeleteGood job this was a good narrative story i liked how your talked about different artist.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your piece as a whole. The three different artist paragraphs were written nicely but what i enjoyed the most was the abruptness of the change from the other artists to Dima. I was expecting more types of artists but the switch to your life was unexpected, I liked it.
ReplyDeleteThis was well worth the read because it opened up my eyes to see what art really is! Also i really loved how you described different forms of art and the imagery was fantastic (:
ReplyDeletevery good story. loved how you described your feelings.
ReplyDeleteDima you genius you. What I got from this is that no one exists that is talent-less or unable to express their art; there only exists people that still need to find their own special way of expression. And that really is a beautiful message.
ReplyDeleteWOW, this is amazing, this is a perfect story and i like how u were describing it and i love the topic. GREAT JOB
ReplyDeleteThis story intrigues me.
ReplyDeleteNo words can describe how nicely that was written. Every word, sentence, and paragraph made the story more and more intense! Great Job! :)
ReplyDeleteYour definition of art is very interesting, I would define art as "death of logic," but you define it as a rather positive impact. The sequence of you piece is bit strange for me, it start of by describing different professional artists then it end with you as a greenhorn artist.
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely LOVE THIS! The layout is well thought out and your metaphors are written very well. I also love the green light reference to the Great Gatsby! Its very inspiring and overall very well written.
ReplyDeleteDima, this is so beautiful. I love how you explored different types of art with such detailed images. Your perseverance to find the kind of art that fits you is so inspiring. Even though you say that you're not a writer, this is a piece of art.
ReplyDeleteDima , this piece was really captivating. I loved how you applied "The Power of Art" to various situations in life and then related it to your own personal life; in which your ability to capture moments through your camera became your art. The imagery really allowed me to connect to each line , as if i was actually there witnessing to the power of art myself.
ReplyDeleteLots of different type of writing. Very nice to read, great job.
ReplyDelete-Anthony Absher
I really enjoyed reading this because it shows that you aren't just smart, but you're an artist as well. It seems that you would rather be seen that way because it's simpler and more comfortable; it's relatable as well. I've seen some of your photography and it's beautiful. I also liked that you connected a variety of art to your life. The details made a very nice portrayal of what you were saying. Nice work!
ReplyDeleteWhile reading your piece, I was glad that I was given the chance to get to know you more but not just as a friend at school Dima but someone much more than that. Thank you so much for sharing.
ReplyDeleteInspiring words of wisdom, it makes me want to be an artist or do something besides read a book.
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