Thanksgiving is a time for family, reflection and appreciation, and how much I looked
forward to my aunt Lauren’s macaroni salad. I woke up to hearing music, knowing that I’m going to have to be cleaning the house most of the day. I get out of bed and slip on my cow slipper and head downstairs. Sure enough, my mom has a list of chores for me to start doing. Around 12 o’clock, I finished all my chores for my mom to tell me that Thanksgiving is at Uncle Taylor’s house. I just hoped for a small get together with my grandma but this is nice to. Just as long as my favorite cousin is there. I put on the same Thanksgiving outfit I put on every year, and sat downstairs waiting for my family to get ready. About, what seemed like 5 hours to me, we finally left and headed towards Hemet. My dad parks the car in his brother’s driveway and I make my way in, with the store bought apple pie in my hand. I was mentally preparing to be welcomed by relatives and my devilish little cousins. As soon as I walked in, I hear at least 6 kids shout “Kelsey!”, which caused all heads to turn towards my family. I see my family members spread out on the couch, all watching football. I smell the ham cooking in the kitchen. My little cousin, Hailey, comes up to me and gives me a bear hug. I’m looking up and down the hallways looking for Lianna, praying she is here. I gesture Hailey away and put the pie down in the kitchen and see my Aunt Bella. She pulls me into a hug and gives me a kiss on my cheek. I awkwardly hug back and ask if Lia’s family has arrived. I walk into the playroom and see Lia sitting on the bed. I walked over and we watched The Office on television, waiting for dinner to be served. About an hour later, dinner was ready and we all gathered into the dining room. Food was spread out throughout the whole house, since there is so much of it. We all grabbed a plate of food and all sat in various places in the house. I sat at the dining room table, next to my grandpa Sam. Everyone chatted while they ate and you can hear sprinkles of laughter throughout the night. We all finished our meals and started digging into the millions of pies that we had. The rest of the night was light. I got to catch up with my uncle and got to laugh at old memories I had with other family members. Then, my grandpa got up to leave and that’s when we know that the night is over. My family and I kissed and hugged everyone goodbye and made our way home. I put my earbuds on in the car and started smiling looking back at how enjoyable my day was. I look forward to this day of the year because it makes me grateful to have such a wonderful family and how we are all able to come together and make memories.
forward to my aunt Lauren’s macaroni salad. I woke up to hearing music, knowing that I’m going to have to be cleaning the house most of the day. I get out of bed and slip on my cow slipper and head downstairs. Sure enough, my mom has a list of chores for me to start doing. Around 12 o’clock, I finished all my chores for my mom to tell me that Thanksgiving is at Uncle Taylor’s house. I just hoped for a small get together with my grandma but this is nice to. Just as long as my favorite cousin is there. I put on the same Thanksgiving outfit I put on every year, and sat downstairs waiting for my family to get ready. About, what seemed like 5 hours to me, we finally left and headed towards Hemet. My dad parks the car in his brother’s driveway and I make my way in, with the store bought apple pie in my hand. I was mentally preparing to be welcomed by relatives and my devilish little cousins. As soon as I walked in, I hear at least 6 kids shout “Kelsey!”, which caused all heads to turn towards my family. I see my family members spread out on the couch, all watching football. I smell the ham cooking in the kitchen. My little cousin, Hailey, comes up to me and gives me a bear hug. I’m looking up and down the hallways looking for Lianna, praying she is here. I gesture Hailey away and put the pie down in the kitchen and see my Aunt Bella. She pulls me into a hug and gives me a kiss on my cheek. I awkwardly hug back and ask if Lia’s family has arrived. I walk into the playroom and see Lia sitting on the bed. I walked over and we watched The Office on television, waiting for dinner to be served. About an hour later, dinner was ready and we all gathered into the dining room. Food was spread out throughout the whole house, since there is so much of it. We all grabbed a plate of food and all sat in various places in the house. I sat at the dining room table, next to my grandpa Sam. Everyone chatted while they ate and you can hear sprinkles of laughter throughout the night. We all finished our meals and started digging into the millions of pies that we had. The rest of the night was light. I got to catch up with my uncle and got to laugh at old memories I had with other family members. Then, my grandpa got up to leave and that’s when we know that the night is over. My family and I kissed and hugged everyone goodbye and made our way home. I put my earbuds on in the car and started smiling looking back at how enjoyable my day was. I look forward to this day of the year because it makes me grateful to have such a wonderful family and how we are all able to come together and make memories.
The coziness of this is almost tangible. Which is awesome, that means your piece really gave of the feeling of warmth and family. I think food is just the glue that brings everyone together, like you can't be upset with food around. Nice work.
ReplyDeleteI loved the warmth of this piece and how I could smell the cooking ham myself. I also loved how you included the family and the very relatable anticipation of 'the favorite cousin'.
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Thank you for sharing your Thanksgiving experience. Sounds likes it wasn't really what you were expecting but you still ended up having fun because you were with family. I loved how you described the awkwardness and your hopes of your favorite cousin being there. I could completely relate!
ReplyDeleteThis piece is very relatable. I think everyone gets annoyed with family members around the holidays, especially when they make us do chores or are immature and annoying. I used to get annoyed with my mom and younger cousins during the holidays too, but the food and being together always makes me realize that I wouldn't trade them for anything...well maybe for a million dollars but that's about it. -Alexis Reyes
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading this piece. I like the details you used to describe this special day of the year where friends and family get together and share what they are all thankful for. Great job!
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ReplyDeleteVery nice and enjoyable story. I love hearing about the holidays and family and you did a good job of writing about it. This reminds me of spending thanksgiving with my family with all the food and hanging out with my favorite cousins.
This story has such a great emphasis on family and comfort! I enjoyed the little "cow slipper" detail. Great Job!
ReplyDeleteI love this so much Zoe! This is just so heart-warming and it's always a pleasure to read or hear about someone else's life or traditions! I love the attention to detail! I am glad you were able to turn your family experience into a nice short story!
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ReplyDeleteYour piece captured what it is like to be in a beautiful family. Based off your writing, I inferred that you come from a loving family! You and I both understand what it is like to have relationships with our families that those outside of it can understand. Thank you for sharing.
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This story makes me feel warm and it's a nice little story. It well detailed. Sometimes I wish my Thanksgivings could be like what you've described.
ReplyDeleteI liked how personal your essay was, and all the examples you gave of your family traditions and events during Thanksgiving allowed me to actually visualize what your household is like during holidays. This piece was heartwarming and I'm happy that you have a family that comes together for a jolly holiday season. Very nice!
ReplyDeleteThis seemed like it was an ideal Thanksgiving, in my opinion, and I love that. I'm so glad you decided to share your Thanksgiving experience. With all your detail, like the little kids and the greeting with your Aunt Bella, although it seems negative, I understand the type of love and enjoyment you get from them. I am happy you made great memories, and I hope you continue to create memorable Thanksgivings with your family.
ReplyDeleteYour thanksgiving sounds really tasteful. The interactions between your family members really tell the experience.
ReplyDeleteI loved this piece because of how easy it was to follow along with the story lines. It was interesting to read through your word choices how easy it was to relate your thanksgiving is to mine, how it's not as fun if your favorite people aren't there and how crazy the holiday can be. I really enjoyed it you did a great job!
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Your thanksgiving experience gives a sense of sweetness and warmth! I loved how you described your emotions and how this day wasn't what you were expecting but it still turned out great. It's very relatable especially when you were hoping to see your favorite cousin. Great job. -Leslie Marquez
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing a piece of your personal memories with your family. The description that you included in this piece really bring to life the spirit of celebration and bonding.
ReplyDeleteI really like the coziness of this piece, as well as the nostalgic feeling that went with it. I love how it focuses on family, which is really important this time of year, but also says how you're grateful. Good job!
ReplyDeleteThis is such a great read! I love how you chose to write about a topic that means a lot to you. It was interesting to read about all of your different emotions that day. -Mackenzie M.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your story a lot. I don't have a lot of family and I usually spend Thanksgiving with my parents and my siblings. I envy your close relationship with all your family members.
ReplyDeleteThis is an amazing heart warming story! I love your use of details. Great Job!
ReplyDeleteReading your peace made me feel nostalgic of how simple and magical holidays were in the past. I enjoyed reading the detail in your piece, as well, from waiting on the couch for your family to the cacophonous jumble of your entire family i one house together!
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I really enjoy reading about the holidays and what perfect timing. It honestly does fit with the holiday spirit.
ReplyDeleteThis is so heartwarming and so sweet. I love how much fun you have with your family and how your Thanksgiving is full of joy and love.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your piece. You family seems really close, and it is very apparent that family is very important to you, which is awesome. I enjoyed how you stated that though this day was not what you expected, you were still able to truly enjoy it.
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This piece really brings me back to when I'd have large family gathering during thanksgiving. I enjoy the aspect of "dealing" with tedious responsibilities over break and also the memories brought forth as well.
ReplyDeleteThis story encapsulates how it feels to have family over during the holiday perfectly and gives all of us a sense of connection when reading this, I enjoyed reading every bit of it.
ReplyDeleteI really love how heart warming this piece is. The nostalgia that comes across from this is very evident and adds so much to the piece. The different emotions you felt throughout the day was very well written. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI absolutely enjoyed this piece, because of how it is so joyful managing to bring forth family together during Thanksgiving and any type of holiday, as I can definitely relate with such a lovable family!
ReplyDeleteAwww I loved this story, its so relatable. I love the scenery you presented with all the happy faces of your family and the delicious pies the family devoured, it was great ! :) - Alexia
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your piece because it was very relatable and made me reflect on my thanksgiving with my family. - Gaby Ortega
ReplyDeleteI really like your story because it shows a great big family getting together for a special day. Thanks for sharing this nice piece about spending time with relatives on Thanksgiving!
ReplyDelete-Eddie Segura
This piece really paints the picture of a perfect thanksgiving. The warmth and coziness from the story really made it so enjoyable to read. Good Job!! - Jazmine Hernandez Period 2
ReplyDeletethank you for sharing your personal thanksgiving experience with us, i wish my thanksgivings were more like this! awesome job telling your story.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the relatability of this piece. I especially loved the underlying humor that you made towards this family event. Great hook that easily caught my attention. Overall, great job on this piece!
ReplyDeleteLove how relatable this piece was. The interaction with your family presented such a warm and cozy mood within the story. The vivid details and imagery made it fun to read. Great job!
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