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Sunday, February 28, 2021

The Legacy of the Willow--Neomie


On a farm there lived a happy little family of three. Laughter filled the air as the small child was thrown into the air by his father as his mother watched with a smile on her face. The little family was on their way to go on a picnic beneath their favorite tree, which was planted by the father and mother when they first got married. As the day went by the mother noticed she was having chest pain but didn’t pay much attention to it as she felt fine overall.

But, everything was not fine. The family later found out that the mother actually had breast cancer when they went for an examination one day. Luckily they caught it quickly and the tumor had not turned too large. The family, although they did not have a lot of money, they were able to gather the money so that they were able to pay for the mother’s treatment.

It was all fine and dandy for some time, however after a few years went by, the tumor showed up again. This time, they could not pay for her treatment immediately. Due to this, as time went by the tumor grew little by little. As the father was about to give in and let the mother get her treatment even though they could not pay for it, the mother stopped him. She shook her head at him and they were able to understand each other through their eyes. The father collapsed next to the mother’s bed and broke out in tears. The child came into the room soon after since he heard the ruckus and he didn’t understand what was going on.

The child understood soon enough.

A few months after that incident a funeral was held. The family did not know many people so it was just a small little funeral as they buried the mother under her favorite tree. The father and son duo mourned together as silent tears streamed down their faces.

As the years passed by, the child made it a routine to go to the tree and sit down by his mother’s grave and excitedly talk about his day. One day, the child ran to his mother’s grave, but this time in tears. Apparently his father brought his new girlfriend to his son in order to introduce his son to his potential future stepmom. The child could not take this and ran out of the house as his father was calling him back.

The child cried many tears as he talked about not wanting his father to replace his mother. He was so busy talking that he did not notice that the branches of the tree slowly but surely bent downward. Soon the branches and leaves touched the ground and covered the child and the grave. The child stopped talking as he felt a warm and comforting presence and looked around and saw the tree encasing him, as if he was in a hug. The child couldn’t take it anymore and more tears ran down his face. A leaf fell off the tree and landed on his face, right on top of his tears. After some time, the child was ready to face the reality of the situation and went back to where his father and his new girlfriend were at.

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Years later, a young adult that looked like a grown up version of the young child came up to the grave underneath the tree. He parted the curtain of leaves as he approached his mother’s grave. He sat down where he used to sit down and talked to his mother about what had happened. Although the child did not accept his father’s girlfriend at that time, they played together and hung out so they were able to get along. The child soon found his father’s girlfriend very sweet and kind and he was very excited to have a new mother figure in his life. His father had married his girlfriend a few years later and they were very happy together.

The child, on the other hand, had started to help around the farm and started to work a few little jobs around the village. He was very happy with his life thus far although he still missed his mother greatly. As the child was recapping, his father and stepmother parted the leaves of the tree and approached the grave. They were all chatting happily together and told stories of some events that had transpired.

A small breeze went through the trees and a small whisper can be heard, “Be happy, my child.”

20 comments:

  1. This story is so sweet and wholesome! I really liked the fact that you ended with that dialogue because it really accentuates the emotion/vibe of the story. -Eiana Dugang

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  2. Such a heartwarming story, it made me smile as I got to the end. I love it. -Caitlin Munar

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  3. This story is so heartwarming, I started smiling when I read the second part. I love it. -Caitlin Munar

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  4. Your story was very sweet and the ending was heartwarming. I really enjoyed reading it. Great job!
    -Samantha Le

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  5. I loved your story, it made me smile on the inside! I truly felt like I was reading a short story from a super experienced/well known author, this story was so well written! -Somi Nebedum

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  6. This is a feel-good story and I loved every moment of it. Great job! -Ronneth Kennedy

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  7. The construction of the story was really put together well and the story left me with a satisfied feeling - Luke Phillips

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  8. This was a beautiful story and it was encapsulating from the beginning. I admire your storytelling and appreciated the topic, as many people suffer this fate. I also liked the inclusion of the dialogue/quote at the end.
    -Darren Domond

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  9. Neomie beebee gorl, your piece as absolutely beautiful. It was touching, heartwarming, and overall very precious. Thank you for sharing this, you did a wonderful job! - Sumbal Sharif

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  10. Neomie! I really enjoyed reading this piece! It had such a heartwarming message and I love the how you incorporated the tree's branches hugging the son after he had to face the reality of his situation. Overall the story was really cute, positive, and uplifting. Good job! - Angelique Maylad

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  11. This story was very heart-warming and comforting which was super sweet! Absolutely loved this piece :)

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  12. Your piece is well written while also interesting. I enjoyed the different moods that were presented which overall strengthened your writing. Great story!
    - Jaylin Tillman

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  13. This was such a sweet story! I loved the build up to the happy ending. It also reminded me a bit of the giving tree. It was amazing! -Amy H.

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  14. You got me all teary-eyed with this story! Your writing has an amazing flow within, never missing a beat, moving too fast, or stopping for too long. You also did a phenomenal job portraying explicitly and implicitly the growth of the boy, which was very satisfying to read. 10/10! - Tyler Vidal

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  15. This was really good from the way you wrote it to the theme of a feel-good story. Great Job!
    -Rebekah Diaz

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  16. Beautiful. Heartwarming, and a great story to show the power of a mother's love. - Gannon Smith

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  17. Hello Neomie, your story was very heartfelt and had a nice balance of sadness and happiness. I really like the part where you personified the tree the mother was burred under by having it give the child a hug and then at the end having the tree whisper to her child. Overall, great story.
    -Diane Rodriguez

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  18. This is a very feel-good story! The importance of tree in story is remarkable. The message was very heartfelt, i really enjoy reading this:) -Nia Martin

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  19. If you could put dopamine into a pen and write a book with it, thats what this story would be. You were able to convey feelings of happiness and joy so effectively I couldnt help but find myself smiling throughout the story as I read. The ending was also very strong as well, ending with that quote. I really enjoyed this piece. - Kevin de Lama

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  20. It was an amazing and heartfelt story. The feelings of bittersweet happiness is presented clearly through your diction, and the ending dialogue/quote was what sealed the whole deal. Good Job!!!
    -Hrishika Reddy Nanamala.

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