It was a regular Tuesday morning. At six o'clock, the alarm sound embarked on every
corner of the house. Soon, everyone was awake. The delicious smell of chilaquiles filled the house following the clashing of pans. Micah was getting ready for school. He had a good feeling today. He quickly got dressed and ran down the stairs to eat breakfast. Once in the kitchen, he kissed his mother and father’s cheek sayingbuenosdias, or goodmorning.
The family of three happily began to chat about their plans for the day. As they sat down to eat breakfast, Micah’s father, Joaquin, turned on the television to watch the morning news. As soon as the news report of the undocumented families being deported appeared, Joaquin quickly turned off the television and went silent. Micah’s mother, Elena, looked at her husband’s and her son’s look of concern and said, “Don’t worry about anything, we are all going to be safe. We are good people, we are not going to get taken away mijo. Come on, it's time to go to school. Don’t worry about your papa and I, we are going to be alright.” Elena kissed her son’s cheek as she took his plate to the sink. Micah took a deep breath, smiled and said, “I love you ama” as he got out of his chair to get his things for school.
As Micah went to get his backpack from his room, he looked out his window and noticed that the morning was absolutely beautiful. The birds were chirping, and the sun was smiling at all the houses. The day was filled with happiness and joy. All of a sudden, he realized it was time to go.
Micah went downstairs and told his parents, “Ya me voy, los quiero mucho, los miro
cuando regrese de la escuela, ” or “I’m leaving, I love you both, I’ll see you two when I come
back from school.” Soon his mom exclaimed from the kitchen, “ Que le vaya bien y que Dios lo
bendiga,” or “Have a good day and may God bless you on your journey.” After these words,
Micah closed his front door and made his way to school. He was happy and ready to start the
day.
School for Micah when by fast. Each class period went by in the blink of an eye and before he realized, it was the end of the day. His friends invited him to go eat but he said, “Sorry guys, I can’t go. I have to get home to my parents.” After that, Micah said goodbye to his friends and started his journey home.
On his way home, he began to listen to music, feeding the joy and happiness he was feeling today. A few minutes passed, he arrived home and as he opened the door he said, “Ama, I’m home.” No answer. He sent her a text message letting her know that he was home. “She probably went to the grocery store,” he said, so he set his backpack and water bottle down and went to get a snack. Two hours passed, it was five o’clock and Elena still wasn’t home. Micah began to worry so he called his mother again. No answer. He began to jerk his legs as he was sitting on the sofa and thought, “There’s nothing to worry about. My dad will be home soon.” It was now eight o’clock and his father had not arrived. He usually gets home from work around six-thirty. Now, Micah really began to worry. All of these terrible scenarios began to infiltrate his mind. “There is no way I can call the police,” he said, “ If they are alright and I call the police, they are going to take them away because they are going to find out.” With desperation he began to think of people he could call that would know where his parents are, but who would he call? He had no family in the United States. All of his family members live in Mexico.
School for Micah when by fast. Each class period went by in the blink of an eye and before he realized, it was the end of the day. His friends invited him to go eat but he said, “Sorry guys, I can’t go. I have to get home to my parents.” After that, Micah said goodbye to his friends and started his journey home.
On his way home, he began to listen to music, feeding the joy and happiness he was feeling today. A few minutes passed, he arrived home and as he opened the door he said, “Ama, I’m home.” No answer. He sent her a text message letting her know that he was home. “She probably went to the grocery store,” he said, so he set his backpack and water bottle down and went to get a snack. Two hours passed, it was five o’clock and Elena still wasn’t home. Micah began to worry so he called his mother again. No answer. He began to jerk his legs as he was sitting on the sofa and thought, “There’s nothing to worry about. My dad will be home soon.” It was now eight o’clock and his father had not arrived. He usually gets home from work around six-thirty. Now, Micah really began to worry. All of these terrible scenarios began to infiltrate his mind. “There is no way I can call the police,” he said, “ If they are alright and I call the police, they are going to take them away because they are going to find out.” With desperation he began to think of people he could call that would know where his parents are, but who would he call? He had no family in the United States. All of his family members live in Mexico.
With the hope of receiving a phone call, he sat right by his home phone and cellphone
anxiously waiting, confused. “I don’t understand. My parents don’t do this. They would tell me if
they were going to go somewhere that would take up their entire day,” Micah said. Then, all of a
sudden, the worst of all of the possible scenarios filled his mind. What if his parents were taken
away? Deported? “No, it can’t be. My parents haven’t done anything wrong,” he told himself for
reassurance. His neck became hot and tears began to fill his eyes.
It was now ten o’clock and nothing. More time passed and he eventually fell asleep on the sofa awaiting a call. Then, at two o’clock in the morning, the phone rang. It was his mother.
“Hello? Ama? Are you okay? Where are you and dad? It’s really late!”
“Mijo, son, I need you to be strong. Your father and I have been taken by ICE and we are going to get deported in a few hours. I want you to know that your father and I love you so much and no matter how far apart we are, we will always be there. We are not going to give up, we will soon become a family again. We are sorry we couldn’t call sooner but the officers didn’t let us make phone calls. I’m sorry we failed you.”
Micah went cold. He began to tremble. His worst nightmare came true. His parents were
gone, they were taken away from him and he wouldn’t be able to feel their love again. He began to hold back the tears that were falling from his eyes as he began to hear his mother’s cry. His family was broken and there was nothing he could do about it. He’s only seventeen years old and now he’s shattered, devastated. That beautiful day became the day that he never wished happened.
It was now ten o’clock and nothing. More time passed and he eventually fell asleep on the sofa awaiting a call. Then, at two o’clock in the morning, the phone rang. It was his mother.
“Hello? Ama? Are you okay? Where are you and dad? It’s really late!”
“Mijo, son, I need you to be strong. Your father and I have been taken by ICE and we are going to get deported in a few hours. I want you to know that your father and I love you so much and no matter how far apart we are, we will always be there. We are not going to give up, we will soon become a family again. We are sorry we couldn’t call sooner but the officers didn’t let us make phone calls. I’m sorry we failed you.”
Micah went cold. He began to tremble. His worst nightmare came true. His parents were
gone, they were taken away from him and he wouldn’t be able to feel their love again. He began to hold back the tears that were falling from his eyes as he began to hear his mother’s cry. His family was broken and there was nothing he could do about it. He’s only seventeen years old and now he’s shattered, devastated. That beautiful day became the day that he never wished happened.
The story was very intense towards the very end when you began to describe Micah's emotions. This was my favorite Good job! - Nathan
ReplyDeleteI love this story so much because it showcases what's actually happening to families across the US. Good Job !! ~Alec Bailey
ReplyDeleteIt is a sad reality that many Latinos have to face and is unfortunate that families are split up without a second thought. The way you described the setting made it very surreal and it felt as if I was Micah, you could feel the connection he had with his parents and the heartbreak he experienced. Amazing job!
ReplyDeleteThis piece was really touching and so relevant in today's world. You did a really good job at vividly shedding light on the emotional damage that results from these deportations with your example of Micah and his family being broken apart. -Arianna Santos
ReplyDeleteThis piece was touching, and I loved how you used imagery of the "beautiful day" to contrast their despair that he felt at the end. It sucked me into the piece, and into Micah's emotions. Also, I enjoyed your use of Spanish vocabulary.
ReplyDeleteA very eye-opening story that brings perspective on broken families from the deportations of undocumented families in the United States. Good use of imagery and syntax to shift the tone from one of joy to one of devastation. Very well-written.
ReplyDeleteThis piece is heart breaking but it really does shed light on such an intense and relevant topic today and you do so in such a descriptive and eye-catching manner-Everett A.
ReplyDeleteI love this piece! It is so sad that undeserving families have to experience this each and every day. Thank you for bringing attention to this issue! -Destiny Okonkwo
ReplyDeleteAlthough this is labeled a work of flash fiction it's amazing how real the story itself seems because it likely is for some individuals out there, waking up on a normal, sunny day then ending it in despair. I commend you for shedding light on a topic that most have become somewhat apathetic to because of seeing it so often. This was a very well-written piece, thank you.
ReplyDeleteI loved the emotion and passion that was displayed throughout the entire story. Plus relating this story to what is really happening in this world shows others what faamilies go through, and what damages our country has done. Overall great job and I genuinely loved your piece.
ReplyDeleteThis was such a heartbreaking story, and the imagery you used to describe Micah's emotions as he comes to the realization that he will never see his parents again helped relay the effect that these deportations are having on families. Good job and thank you for this!
ReplyDelete- Jeanine Franco, P.5
This piece really touched me because this something that happens often and not a lot of people understand the lives that are effected. Although this is a fictional story this is a very real event and hits close to home because of my parents being immigrants and I could never imagine if this were to happen too me. Really amazing piece!
ReplyDeleteThis story is a perfect example of the societal problems in today's world that are not talked about enough and still happen today. It opens people's eyes of how you can plan out a normal day and it can go completely unexpected just like that. - Victoria Giliberto
ReplyDeleteThis piece addressed a problem that we have in the world today. Great piece and well written.
ReplyDelete-Dejanae
Even though this is fiction, it unfortunately is a reality for a lot of people. You illustrated the profound effect this reality can have on an individual. Good job!
ReplyDeleteThis is a sad story that shows how strict immigration laws have an effect on foreign families. The saddest part is that most immigrants are good people who think they are safe, but no one ever considers it.
ReplyDeleteThis story was very touching to me, and it was one of this stories that hit close to home for me. And this is one of those stories that is a very real topic and a very emotional one. So i appreciate this story being told, so we could become more aware of situations like the one in the story and maybe contribute to it in reality. - Alexander Pereyra
ReplyDeleteThis story is extremely relevant and is sadly becoming a normality in the United States. This piece really hit close to home because this was always my fear before my mother became documented you portrayed that fear perfectly through your use of diction and imagery I felt my old feelings coming back to life. Buen trabajo!
ReplyDeleteThis is a great story as it connects to an issue going on in the world today and it was very well written good job!
ReplyDeleteThis was an amazing piece that with your use of imagery truly came to live and built a connection for the reader and the emotions toward the end really let one sympathize with Micah
ReplyDeletewow this story hit deep, i was able to feel the pain that Micah was feeling, the panic , worry, and heartbreak. Truly amazing.
ReplyDeleteThis piece was very insightful to the current situation that many families are facing now in the United States. It illustrated very well how quickly a seemingly perfectly, normal day can instantly becomes one's worse nightmare at the drop of a dime. Well done on your submission!
ReplyDeleteThe detail and emotion in this piece were done so well. This topic is very dear to me since I have family and friends who experience things like this. Thank you for this piece and the insight it gives on this issue.
ReplyDeleteI can relate to this in a way, as I have had uncles who were deported to Mexico, especially when I was little and we were all crying because he was like a dad to me and he left his 5 kids. I think it's great that you did a story on this because not a lot of people tend to share a topic like this or experienced it. Especially now the time were going through, people do experience this and hide in fear. But Thank you for this well written piece. I kept wanting to know what happened in the end as reading it.
ReplyDeleteThis hit very close to home. My mom went and actually talked to the people who've been deported and she said how heart breaking it is to even see them let alone talk to them. This just proves how ugly the world is and we live in the mess people with power leave us in
ReplyDelete~Jackie Aguilera