My first time seeing the ocean was an intense and vivid memory I will always hold in my heart. It
wasn't a normal drive an hour go to Huntington Beach with beach balls being thrown around. It
was an extremely long five hour drive for five year old Kendall; through wine country, through
woods, an hour more of coastline then finally to a tiny secluded town called Cambria. The first
thing my small family did was see a castle to our right... with zebras. My five year old mind was
blown. To my left, the coast of the beautiful salty ocean was waiting for me, but to my right there
was a mansion home with thousands of yards of land and cattle with an occasional zebra
somehow. The rich of Central California in the 1930’s will build and preserve some crazy things.
Begging my parents to feel the sand in my toes for the first time, I was told no for about the
millionth time. Instead, we drove for another century it felt like; but what kept me steady was the
constant smell of refreshing salty beach air with the car windows rolled down. Younger Kendall,
daydreaming about the water was suddenly snapped out of it by the distinct and intense smell of
blubber. A very strange experience once again, which upsettingly wasn't the ocean. Instead, I
was standing about a foot away from a humongous elephant seal, only two logs and a small
grass hill separating us. There were fifty of them laying on the beach, making horrendous loud
noises and throwing warm sand on their bodies. In that moment I had wished I was a gross
looking elephant seal because at least I could touch the sand. My mom took about a billion
pictures of me next to said elephant seals, I can precisely remember after the last picture was
taken, running to the car and saying I would stay there forever and never leave my car seat
unless we went to the beach. My parents finally gave in and we drove to our oceanside hotel.
The anticipation and overwhelming joy I felt running down the rocks to the sand, then through
an uproarious amount of sand, to eventually where the precious ocean water meets the sand.
The sand in my toes and shocking feel of that freezing cold water, I fell in love. I had found my
favorite place in the world. I felt nothing but serenity, just me and the ocean, and the wind in my
five year old bob haircut. No Harry Potter book gave me this type of peace, and those books
were my pride and joy. All the waiting, all the pleading to feel the ocean was worth this moment
with my toes in the sand. Before I knew it, I was silly and waking straight into the ocean. Young
Kendall being about three feet tall and sixty pounds max was quickly swept away by the water.
The next thing I know I'm laughing and spitting out salty water, having a grand ol time; but my
dad is picking me up out of the ocean terrified of my potential being swept away or drowning. I
had the biggest smile on my face they tell me after nearly giving both my parents a heart attack.
They thought I would never want to go back, but once they were consoling one another that I
was okay, I immediately ran right back into the ocean. I haven't ever stopped running since
then, the ocean is my happiest place, the place I feel most at home and the most at peace. The
salty air being breathed in and out with the squishy soft sand in my toes is what brings me bliss.
Five year old Kendall had not-patiently waited for the place that gives me the most profound
happiness and comfort and I will forever be grateful for my awed parents who pick me up every
time the current takes me away.
The ocean is very cool and I like it a lot. We should also try to save it and the earth. So that's cool, thank you so much to the people that do help save it. I think it's super awesome and we need more people like them. Thank you. aisudbaljsfhsdkfhierjKBFK;Jne;ugiE;IFUHLW/D;sifsfliweyfvffkfhlia8yefjgs.kvhai8flawegf.iweaafy; 9a8wfligwaeaf.hwae;o8fyweligfiwehf;o8weyflige;ofhwe;o8ywe7ft8;we fowey f87 tifu
The ocean is very cool and I like it a lot. We should also try to save it and the earth. So that's cool, thank you so much to the people that do help save it. I think it's super awesome and we need more people like them. Thank you. aisudbaljsfhsdkfhierjKBFK;Jne;ugiE;IFUHLW/D;sifsfliweyfvffkfhlia8yefjgs.kvhai8flawegf.iweaafy; 9a8wfligwaeaf.hwae;o8fyweligfiwehf;o8weyflige;ofhwe;o8ywe7ft8;we fowey f87 tifu
The imagery in this bring me back to my own beach experiences. I like the part where you ran into the ocean smiling even after being swept into the water. It really shows the joy that the ocean brings you.
ReplyDeleteI loved this piece Kendall! The imagery used was amazing and it actually brought back memories from my first trip to the beach. I remember every moment of it and your imagery helped me connect to this piece. -Trenton Robles
ReplyDeleteThis was a beautiful reflection of a great memory at the beach. Your use of imagery and detail really supports the joyous emotion the ocean gave you.
ReplyDeleteI love the vivid imagery and I can feel the emotions of serenity, belonging, and love. It really draws me into the story. Good job!
ReplyDeleteAw Kendall, this legit made me so happy. I love how vividly you remember this moment in your life. Also, because I know how much you love the water, it's so cool to hear the backstory to why. -Leah Robbins
ReplyDeleteSuch a cute story! Makes me wish I could remember my first interaction with the beach. There is nothing like it, my grandpa lived in Seal beach so I share the same home feeling you get from it. The imagery you gave just made me miss the beach even more than I already do. I recommend visiting Monterey beach whenever you can. <3
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the imagery you used to describe one of your first experiences in the ocean. It brings out a sense of happiness the water brings to you. Overall great work! -Samantha Tabula
ReplyDeleteThis personal memory was a fun and nostalgic read for me, looking back at my experience of falling in love with the ocean. I really like the bubbly tone throughout along with the descriptive imagery. Brought a smile to my face :)
ReplyDeleteI love how this piece was very personal to you. Your imagery created the nostalgic theme from your childhood. Very well demonstrated your love for the ocean due to your vivid explanation and excitement.
ReplyDeleteThe imagery of this piece is absolutely amazing! I love the beach, and this really transports me back to my childhood when I would go to the beach every weekend. Job well done!
ReplyDeleteThis piece has such a nostalgic tone that I think everyone can relate to but is also unique to your own life, and for me this brought back memories of my early childhood.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your piece, I loved the imagery you used to describe your first experience at the beach. It shows how happy the water made you feel. Great job!
ReplyDeleteThe vivid imagery you used to describe exactly how you felt the first time you went to the beach and saw the ocean was mesmerizing. I personally can't remember but I enjoyed reading about your experience so much especially for being so young at the time and how even to this day it's still a big part of your life, thank you for sharing. :)
ReplyDeleteYour use of imagery was very captivating in this piece, it showed how vividly you remember this experience. I also enjoyed your use of more senses than just vision, such as when describing the coarseness of the sand and the cold temperature of the ocean water. Wonderful writing. - Chase W.
ReplyDeleteThe amount of imagery you used in this was very spot on and filled with so much passion you have for the ocean. Your title alone caught my attention as I get drawn to the ocean as well. My zodiac sign's element being water, I felt the passion and emotion you had towards the ocean. It is very soothing and relaxing being at the beach. Amazing job with this.
ReplyDelete~Jackie Aguilera