Do you ever read a book, look
at a photo, or hear a story that makes you wonder why we are on this earth, why
you are in the world? On a day to day basis we all have a plan. We work because
we need money to support ourselves, we go to school for the love of learning,
or because we know we must be educated. We go to the gym to stay healthy and
look good, we go to the movies, musicals, and sporting events for relaxation.
What most of us have difficulty
with is finding a reason for our existence. I think as we age we become
increasingly disquieted by a gnawing sense of need to accomplish something. I
believe everyone has a special ability or talent that distinguishes them from
others. It is not always easy to discover that little spark of talent that
makes you stand out. Sometimes the gift is buried because of the need to
survive.
Negative feedback, lack of
resources, non-supportive parents, can stifle or bury an individual’s natural
leanings. For these reasons, and many more, young people are often confused
about their purpose in life. For some this is a cause for consternation, leading
to dissatisfaction, depression and lack of productivity.
I have friends who I consider
lucky. They have known why they are on this earth since middle school. One
friend loves roller coasters and has a talent for engineering and mathematics.
He plans to work in the amusement park industry. Another friend loves children
and medicine, and this determined her direction in volunteer work and classes,
and pursuit of a career as a pediatrician.
Where am I on the self-discovery
spectrum? I am a late bloomer and feel quite confused. Recently I realized I
enjoy anatomy and anything health related, so I’m working towards a medical
career. When I volunteer at the hospital I feel a sense of satisfaction in
making someone else’s job a little easier, or being part of a positive
experience for a family member or a patient. I envision myself being part of a
medical team traveling to other countries to perform surgeries, or to track the
course of a disease. I believe that is why I am here.
Why are you on this earth, how
will you be remembered after you are gone? I challenge you to think about your
purpose in life. Maybe you cannot paint, but perhaps you have an eye for
beauty. You may not be a Bronte sister, but maybe you have a thirst for truth
that compels you to report the latest scandal in Washington DC. We all have a special
talent, often the most difficult part is discovering it.
I love the "discovery spectrum" you created. It's very interesting to see how you classify people's position in life and where they land on the spectrum. I think this piece and the subject matter you chose to write about was so relevant for your audience and the place they're at in their lives. Good job.
ReplyDeleteI think this piece is special because every young person sometimes, struggles searching for who they want to become when they grow up and this message is saying to find that thing buried inside of you. Good job!
ReplyDeleteAwww Arriane, that was beautiful. I loved how you connected it to your life and connected it to the audience as well. I couldn't help but smile as I read this because it focused on how people incorporate their passions into their professions.
ReplyDeleteThis is very applicable to everyone.
ReplyDeleteThis really made me reflect on my own life and try to figure out what my purpose in life is about.I love the great message you incorporated into it. It was truly moving.
ReplyDeleteI really love this piece from top to bottom because it focuses on discovering your true self and makes the reader question themselves on what their purpose in life is. I love how you expressed your feelings when you talk about how you have a general idea on what you are passionate about and how you envision yourself being a helping hand and making a difference in someone's life. Good job!
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I really liked the story. I really felt the story in my heart. Great job!!
ReplyDeleteYour story was very compelling. Since we are seniors, I bet everyone right now is trying to find their inner talents and what they want to accomplish in life or cannot decide on what they want to become. I definitely agree with you when one cannot decide or find what they want to be, there will always be something out there for them.
ReplyDeleteI LOVE YOUR PIECE! Your piece spoke to me and I can really relate to your situation. (: The way you structured this piece from paragraph to paragraph was well done and your conclusion (especially the last sentences) put the cherry on top! Great job! (:
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed how you were able to connect your experiences to an overall message that the audience can take with them. You did a great job developing your thoughts towards this whole "discovery spectrum." Good job!
ReplyDeleteso beautiful, the extreme connection to your personal life but also to other peoples passions
ReplyDeleteHaha it was great that you included the Bronte Sister's. I like how the it develops to people and to you personally...very heartfelt
ReplyDeleteThis was my favorite. I cannot tell you how many times I've tried to wrap my head around the million dollar question: What is the purpose of life? I have so many questions as to why we are here and what our purpose really is.
ReplyDeleteI really like this " abstract idea " because it basically speaks out to those who feel lost and question their purpose in life. Really motivational and actually makes me want to strive and do better in my studies. Great job!
ReplyDeleteThis is such an eye opening story. I think you put a lot of thought into this, and you're making me think really hard about my reason for being on this earth. I think about it here and there, but I feel like your story made me think about it ten times harder. This was such an amazing story, and I enjoyed reading every part of it
ReplyDeleteVery good piece. I honestly loved reading this
ReplyDeleteI don't think purpose of life is expressing your passion and talent. I think the purpose of life is to get stuff. We live to gather more stuff for ourselves, and then we buy a house to store our stuff.
ReplyDeleteThis was so inspiring and I'm glad I read it because I don't know what career I would like to choose yet. I Loved it and I liked the allusion to the Bronte sisters.
ReplyDeleteWhenever I think of something I have a million of questions to ask. Overall very good piece.
ReplyDeleteJerico M. G. Franco
Wow it got my attention, really great story, petty sure it got everyones attention (:
ReplyDeleteI appreciate that you wrote about something so existential. I heard your voice in my head as I was reading this. One thing though: I don't really think that "life purpose" is something so definitive, and constant. At times, our views of our individual purpose are more lucid, but the whole idea is ever-changing, just like we are. Good job though!
ReplyDeleteGreat piece of writing, I felt like I was in the story. Keep up the great work!
ReplyDeleteJordan Battle
This is a very inspirational and definitely helped me in my situation. I felt like was the only one who didn't know what to do for a living until my senior year. Now I know I am not alone! Thank you!
ReplyDelete-Lauren Waitman
Wow! this left a lot of questions in my head after reading this. Great work!
ReplyDeleteWhat a great piece. It really makes the reader think about what their purpose in life is.
ReplyDeleterelate able and connectable :D
ReplyDeleteExcellent, Arianne. It made me really depressed because I too have absolutely no idea where my life is going. but I really enjoyed how you put this together, especially with the questions and the call to action at the end. This is a submission unlike any other and I commend you for making it so inspiring and thought-provoking. Well done.
ReplyDeletei like the examples you used in order to bring a deeper understanding to your point. I also understand how you feel or rather felt.
ReplyDeleteThis is definitely one of my favorites. I like the allusion to the Bronte sisters made it kinda funny. I think this is great because it kind of challenges your audience to figure out where they are going. I'm glade you figured out your path in time for college lol.
ReplyDeleteThere was a time where I was in a similar position, but I've come to realize that I like playing League of Legends and will hope to play for my college team and compete in collegiate tournaments. Thanks for sharing your story
ReplyDeleteEveryone has that question raised upon their heads. The answer really is, No one can tell you why you're alive and here, because you have to find out yourself, do what makes you happy and thats the moral of this piece. It's true, very utterly true, and that's what makes it enjoyable. Nice work
ReplyDelete-Bernadine uzeta
Your story was my absolute favorite. It was so meaningful and heartwarming!
ReplyDeletei enjoyed your commentary on the subject of purpose
ReplyDeleteI feel like everyone can relate to this. Not one person can honestly say they haven't asked themselves the same question. I loved every single word in this piece. This definitely has me thinking now
ReplyDeleteI loved reading this because I have asked myself the same question over and over again and yet I never seem to be able to find an answer! I liked your take on it and I love your writing. Good Job!
ReplyDeleteI LOVE LOVE LOVE your piece because I have always wondered what's the purpose of life and why we are here. I love the overall message you are giving to us and your thoughts on the whole "discovery spectrum." Such a wonderful job on this lovely piece
ReplyDeleteWhen you said "spectrum", I thought of the Visible Light Spectrum. But that isn't the kind of spectrum described. The spectrum described is a wide range of finding yourself. The way I interpret this is, no matter how you figure it out, how you crack the code, or how you break into the safe of a bank, there is always a way. In relation: as stated, we all have a talent or a hobby that stands crazy out. Our near purpose in life is to find that talent and use it wisely. No matter how you do it, there will ALWAYS be a way.
ReplyDeleteI like how you to make that the piece to your own life it made everything seem so much more personal. Growing up in figuring out what you want to be his heart but you're right it does look inside of yourself.
ReplyDeleteWow the title is why started to read this great job i am always asking this question but i don't need to anymore.
ReplyDeleteI really liked this because it gives me hope on fiding my true passion for the future. I'm still hesitant in what I want now but I'm sure I'll find it through time like you said.
ReplyDeletei loved how personal this piece was. and life in general. great job.
ReplyDeleteWow Arianne. your work here is impeccable. You emphasizes a common struggle of being human and connected it to who you are which also relates to us in High School and in life in general. You brought out the theme of self discovery and i liked that a lot! Great Job!
ReplyDeleteI really love this piece. I relate to what you were explaining in the third and fifth paragraphs. I am actually currently struggling to find my path. Great job on your story.
ReplyDeleteThis piece is great because it bring a lot of questions into play that everyone has wondered at some point in their lifetime. Great piece!
ReplyDeletegreat piece and very complex and should flu writing i could feel your emotions through it great job!
ReplyDeleteYOU really put your thoughts in this ! great job :)
ReplyDeletethis was very amazing and had me thinking keep up the great work
ReplyDelete-Diamend De Silva
This was very relatable, I really have no Idea what Im going to be.. I always try to balance what Im good at, and what I like, but I really don't know.
ReplyDeleteOh this pretty relatable because i use have no idea too what I'm going to be. But i feel like (since I'm a devoted christian) our, or if not yours, my purpose in life is to serve god. But I'm glad you find your way on what you want to be and I hope the best for you :)
ReplyDeleteOh this pretty relatable because i use have no idea too what I'm going to be. But i feel like (since I'm a devoted christian) our, or if not yours, my purpose in life is to serve god. But I'm glad you find your way on what you want to be and I hope the best for you :)
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